Motorized Iron Cavalry: the Last King of Knights

The plot and each character are well written, four stars. It's rare that I haven't skipped many of the previous ones, but I feel like complaining about the heroine. I wrote the heroine for me. I wrote a special one before to emphasize that the heroine has a lover, so she can keep herself clean. The protagonist has been kissed by women other than the heroine several times. The heroine basically keeps a distance from the opposite sex, right? Is the male protagonist unable to avoid it or not? I now find that both male and female channels have double standards. If a male channel has an affectionate female partner, a lot of people will like it, and then they won't tolerate anything else from the female protagonist. What about female channels? In the same way, the affectionate male supporting actor will be held high, but if a woman likes the male protagonist, she will be scolded directly. No matter if there is someone they like, they are in a relationship, and they have close contact with others, is it because their mother didn't teach them? I read books all because of the single female protagonist. Since I have the label, I would like to make the protagonist's relationship more realistic. Apart from this, there is nothing else. It's a good book.

If you write it well, it will ignite your feelings. The subject matter is not new, but it is much better than similar ones.

Those who like to be low-key and patient in the early stage or very patient can read it, but those who are impatient and read cool articles may find it a bit uncomfortable. The overall outline is okay and the writing is good. It can be a good book during the book shortage period📚

I have read 230 chapters so far, and overall it's okay. I feel like the flaws outweigh the flaws, and the subject matter is good. The reading experience of the first hundred chapters was not good. The routine of "the enemy sneaked into the training ground and kidnapped the new regiment members" appeared repeatedly at least two or three times. To be honest, I think it is very unreasonable and tired. It gives people the feeling that the protagonist is weak enough to be invaded by the villain at will. The plot of not burning is in place, the feelings of family and country, the sacrifice of the soldiers, and the spirit of unity are all well reflected. Regarding character creation, I think the portrayal of Longque, Yue Feng and Yu Tinglan is very good. But I think the climax of the characters' emotions is relatively average. For example, in the early climax of Zhu Liangping, there is almost no plot about the way and process of getting along with Zhu Liangping and Chen Qingxu in their previous lives, that is, the daily emotional development between the two in their previous lives. I have no idea how good the relationship between the two was in their previous lives. This led to the fact that when Chen Qingxu was so angry that he gave himself a longevity-destroying potion and chased Zhu Liangping for an explanation. I just felt that this was a very impulsive and irrational person venting his emotions. The overall feeling was actually very strange, and my impression of the protagonist became worse. So I skipped the chapters about the fight scenes with Zhu Liangping. In my personal opinion, Li Qixiu's performance was also very mediocre, and for such a character who has been portrayed in many ways, the most significant significance seems to be the redemption of Bai Zhouzhou. It was hastily released without enough highlights and meaning. It only gave me some unexpected feelings at the time. I think he can do more and sacrifice more meaningfully. There is also the girl Xu Fan spent three days with in Paris in the second volume. I believe the author must have put a lot of effort into this paragraph, but I don't know what effect the author wants to achieve. To be honest, this section is not a bad one, but as a growth experience for Xu Fan, it is not bad. Regarding the protagonist's iron cavalry, I don't think there's anything special except for the evolution. Most mechas have their own characteristics. This ultimate armor seems to be no different from an ordinary armor, too mediocre. In addition, most of the time, the enemies are always stronger than the protagonist group, which also gives me a feeling of "Is the protagonist group really growing?" And the feeling that the protagonist is too weak. Personally, I think there is a risk of losing combat effectiveness. Finally, a small suggestion. The members of the Dragon Bird Team spend too little time together on a daily basis. I look forward to them having more daily interactions with each other, training together, and cultivating a tacit understanding. This may make the characters more vivid and more immersive. At present, for me, except for the male and female protagonists, I am not surprised that the other three will go offline in the next second, and I probably won't feel regretful. These are just some of my personal feelings and opinions. Overall, they are very good. Come on, author [please give me more updates][please give me more updates]

Recommendation level: strong Thoughts after reading: It's been a long time since I've seen this story in which the male protagonist and the female protagonist grow up together. The author handles it very well, and the way of expressing emotions is relatively obscure. The growth lines of the male and female protagonists are relatively obvious, but as long as the writing is exciting enough, it is still very watchable, and the characters are portrayed in a profound way.

The writing style is very good, and the plot development is "solid". It will not speed up the development of the plot just for the sake of instant pleasure. The slow pace is an advantage. The characters are portrayed very delicately, and the pits are all foreshadowing. It is very interesting. I stay up at 12 o'clock every night to see if the author has updated it. No matter how far it is, I can afford to wait. In a crowded subway station, I heard the people next to me talking: "Have you seen Shang Qiu Tingxue's "XX..."? Holy shit, it looks so damn good. " "Yes, yes, I like this author too. " Can be achieved

The content is quite exciting, but I'm a little confused. EWIG said it very well, but there are constant undercovers everywhere, and in the plot in Paris, the Western European branch is almost independent. It feels quite similar to the plot of the Japanese branch of Dragon Clan, and it feels a bit separated.

I think it's very good overall. The cool points, foreshadowing, and plot advancement are all very good. Kudos to the author. Although I think the female characters and the description of the relationship between men and women are a bit stereotyped (in my humble opinion, don't criticize), but overall it's much better than what's on the market. Ps. There was a lot of ambiguity before confirming the relationship with the heroine. If you like a single heroine, you may not like to watch it. I think some emotions do not need to be written as love. The love between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is very thin. I don't know how I fell in love with it, but the male and female protagonists are okay.

I have read the whole book and followed up on it. The book is very good, but there are too many knives. The latest version is really uncomfortable. Although I knew it would be a single heroine when I first started the book, I really hope there are multiple heroines. Pay attention to the plot, there are many foreshadowings. Come on, the author, don't be too bad. I like this book.

I still prefer it, it's definitely a single female protagonist. Don't listen to those people who say about having an affair with the female co-star. The male protagonist has always been very measured and may have some experiences with the female co-star, but it's just to serve the plot. Read sensibly, read according to your own hobbies, and don't be affected by some malicious comments.

8.8 Cannot be assigned to this novel. The author's writing skills are immature in the early stage, but he gradually gets better after the 50th chapter, and his character portrayal is very delicate. The author is a fan of "Dragon", and his depiction of characters has the shadow of Jiangnan. Without a doubt, this book is the most exciting novel I have ever read on Tomato. It has an outline and foreshadowing, and is well worth reading.

I don't know why, but the rating is not worthy of the content in the book. Although the author is a novice, the plot is really well written. The advancement of the content and the emotional foreshadowing are all done well. It is worth reading. The single female protagonist and the female supporting role are also good.

The content and plot are both okay. There are not many poisonous points but not none. For example, when you return to the earth, you meet an instructor who likes to make things difficult for others. It is so classic. Also, the author likes to create some new things by himself, such as Xinjiang

This book is really good, there is nothing poisonous about it, the plot is wonderfully written and there are many unexpected things. There are too few plots written well in Tomato now. Many of them are old routines. I'm tired of them and can't stand them anymore. They've been in a book shortage for a long time. This book is very to my liking. Please give the author a big boost [almost crying]

Yes, I haven't seen any obvious poisonous points yet. The plot is coherent and the writing is not immature. Come on, the author. This book is really good on Tomato. The pace is slow, but for me I don't think this is a shortcoming. A good story needs to be told. I hope the author can write to a higher level. Also, Crimson Kill

Recommended for: hard-core mecha enthusiasts, readers who like the EVA world view, dislike system harems, can accept slow-burning group portraits, and prefer tactical games rather than crushing cool articles. Lightning avoidance crowd: fast-food online readers who pursue instant kills at the beginning, fast upgrades, quick and easy short stories, and just want to quickly read the plot. Core Highlights 1. Anti-routine settings for Breakout Tomato Machine It has no system and rejects AI plug-ins. It focuses on the protagonist's hard-core omni-machine skills and benchmarks against the EVA-style apostle's apocalyptic worldview. The mecha combat system is rigorous, and the mecha structure, modification, and tactics have mechanical logic. Say goodbye to one-click upgrades and mindless crushing. The battle is won by operation, modification ideas, and team cooperation. It is very comfortable for mecha enthusiasts. 2. The group portraits are solidly created and the rhythm is restrained and eye-catching. The narration is slow and warm, and it is not forced to pile up. The team members have their own personalities and the characters' motivations are reasonable; the single female main line is clean and not harem, the emotional line is step-by-step, there are no greasy and ambiguous scenes, and the foreshadowing of the long-term plot is in place, making it easy to read a long story without getting bored. 3. The subject matter is highly scarce Most of Tomato Machine's stories are StarCraft and system-oriented. This book has a unique style of urban apocalypse + hardcore mechanics + squad defense. It has a full sense of atmosphere and creates a great sense of crisis of the collapse of civilization in the apocalypse.

The only book in a long time that I couldn't stop reading. Every character who appears has a very distinct personality. The characters have advantages and disadvantages but the author controls them very well. There is no unlikable character. The plot is probably the rebirth of Wang Daoliu. The subject matter is not new but it is very interesting to watch. The description of the key plot is also epic and makes people feel excited. In summary, it is a rare good book among foreign persimmons. I highly recommend reading [Please read more] [Please update] [Please update] Another point is to take a precaution. I hope that the author will not neglect the shaping of characters in the subsequent plots in pursuit of narrative grandeur. I have seen this problem in the later stages of many books. In order to recycle foreshadowing and expand the world view, all the efforts have made the characters appear homogeneous. Details are equally important. I have not enjoyed a book so much in a long time. I hope the author can craft it carefully. Come on! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It feels a bit like above the dome. The author should have read this book. The iron suit should follow the giant three-dimensional maneuvering device or the maneuver above the dome. The writing style is actually a bit immature, but I have written about the world I imagined, and I have true feelings in it. If I write more, I will write good books in the future.

This is a very good novel, and I can comment after reading the first volume patiently, which is rare among Western novels. I also like this kind of big plot novels divided into volumes.

It feels pretty good. Although it's a bit cliched, the characters are well drawn. The plot is a bit flawed at the beginning, but it's okay at the back. In some classic scenes, you can obviously see some traces of the previous work. It made me, a teenager, arouse my heart again, but these online articles are actually not so arousing now.

It took me a day to catch up with the main force. It felt a bit dull in the early stage, but I started to feel aroused from the first mission. In the follow-up, I can see that the author's level has improved, but I just can't see enough [crazy] [crazy] [crazy], come on author, I'm optimistic about you.

I rarely write book reviews, but this one is really good. Although the protagonist is reborn, it is not a cool story and he keeps growing. There were a few tears, but it was natural and not embarrassing at all. The most important thing is that there are more authors and the plot is not stuck in words! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

As a 5000-hour reader, in my opinion this book has the potential to score upwards of 9.0. It has no bad points, the writing is smooth, and the writing is really good. Emmm, not many people read it. All in all, it's a great book with potential.

What makes this book different to me from Tomato's other novels is that this book is very fast-paced and is considered a novella compared to other two- to three-million-word novels. There was also a mention in the early part of the novel that I was a fan of the old thief. When I saw this, I knew there was a knife behind it, but I thought it was Chen who abandoned Xiaoyu ruthlessly, but I didn't expect Xiaoyu's fate to be so miserable. If Xiaoyu had not returned to Sakurajima at that time, then she would have regretted that this would not be the ending. However, looking at the title of the fifth volume "Immortal You and Me", there will be a turning point later, probably the soul attached to the iron horse will be presented. Let me talk about my feelings. Although it is a rebirth story, it is not like other stories that were useless in the previous life and took off directly in this life. There are not many flaws and there are also foreshadowings. The latest foreshadowing is "Emperor Serum", "King of Knights" and "Resurrection from the Dead". There are also expectations for this book. The current score is 8.8. I feel that it is not inferior to 9.0. It may be due to the diversion or the word limit. After that, it will end with up to two hundred chapters, which may be around 100 [Thinking]. I hope there will be a good ending for everyone in the future.

I read it on my trumpet for five or six hours. It's hard to imagine that there are novels in FQ that can penetrate people's hearts. If the FQ foreshadowing can be recycled and compared before and after, and the book can be written with an outline, it will already be a masterpiece. Not to mention the ability to portray supporting characters in a profound way. Even though the character's personality is not complicated, it can leave a deep impression on people. The exit of each character is lamentable. The literary background is very rich, and there are many shadows of the dragon family, but it can be seen that the author is also trying to come up with his own style. It's a pity that FQ's audience is not very suitable. Not everyone likes reading knives, and more people still like cool articles. In their words, reality is already very difficult, and novels will continue to be so. But for high school students, college students are just the right time to be young.

It's very beautiful. I hope you continue to persevere. It's rare to see such excellent works.

I haven't read much, less than ten chapters. Personally, I think the biggest logical problem in the early stage is that there is no need for the protagonist to actively lower his synchronization rate. When I saw this plot, I thought there would be a patch later, such as joining the training camp and being unable to come out, but there was no such thing. In order to prevent "one hairpin affecting the whole body", the author can make a patch when taking the test, saying that after entering the training camp, he will not be able to come out, and then when the second male actor comes to find the protagonist, it can be a little care from the examiner who is afraid that the male protagonist will commit suicide. The position is probably when the tester sees the male protagonist leaving after the assessment. In this way, the logic problem is almost solved, and it is also helpful for the character development of the examiner himself. After reading the previous article, I feel that the writing is pretty good. I originally wanted to give it three stars, but after thinking about it, I decided to give it four stars to encourage myself. After all, writing a novel is not easy, so it's a mutual encouragement for fellow new authors. If I see a big logical problem in the future, I will also propose solutions, and I will praise the good points when I see them. I hope this book will not disappoint me.

The writing is good, it's neither mindless nor an ordinary upgrade routine. The heroine and the hero have distinct personalities, which is really good-looking. It's really rare in a book like Tomato. Moreover, the author is deeply influenced by the dragon family, which is very refreshing.

It's in line with my taste. It's very beautiful. Who is the heroine? I don't want to see the defeated dog [crying] [crying] [crying] Totally above nine points in quality

Highly recommended. Generally speaking, some new writers have few faults, but the main line is not very obvious, and it is obvious that the author wants to use Ye Silun's branch line to reflect the growth of the protagonist, although it is not very obvious. The writing is good, but there are many typos. The other characters are perfectly created and can arouse emotions. In summary, the minor flaws are okay, but the major flaws are gone. Finally, I wish the author will become more popular as he writes 🔥