Mobile Iron Cavalry: The Last Knight King

The plot and each character are well written, four stars. It's rare that I haven't skipped many of the previous ones, but I feel like complaining about the heroine. I wrote the heroine for me. I wrote a special one before to emphasize that the heroine has a lover, so she can keep herself clean. The protagonist has been kissed by women other than the heroine several times. The heroine basically keeps a distance from the opposite sex, right? Is the male protagonist unable to avoid it or not? I now find that both male and female channels have double standards. If a male channel has an affectionate female partner, a lot of people will like it, and then they won't tolerate anything else from the female protagonist. What about female channels? In the same way, the affectionate male supporting actor will be held high, but if a woman likes the male protagonist, she will be scolded directly. No matter if there is someone they like, they are in a relationship, and they have close contact with others, is it because their mother didn't teach them? I read books all because of the single female protagonist. Since I have the label, I would like to make the protagonist's relationship more realistic. Apart from this, there is nothing else. It's a good book.

If you write it well, it will ignite your feelings. The subject matter is not new, but it is much better than similar ones.

This book is one of the few that I can't read enough of the series. The characters created by the author are very vivid, and through events one after another, readers can understand the world view and the characteristics of the characters. But it's really not enough to read. It gave me the feeling that it was well written but too fast, and I was a bit hastily swallowing it. However, although the writing is a bit compact at this stage. But it looks cool. As an old bookworm, I really recommend everyone to read it. I don't want to bury such a good book and such a good author. It seems that the author is still a college student. Come on

Those who like to be low-key and patient in the early stage or very patient can read it, but those who are impatient and read cool articles may find it a bit uncomfortable. The overall outline is okay and the writing is good. It can be a good book during the book shortage period📚

I have read the whole book and followed up on it. The book is very good, but there are too many knives. The latest version is really uncomfortable. Although I knew it would be a single heroine when I first started the book, I really hope there are multiple heroines. Pay attention to the plot, there are many foreshadowings. Come on, the author, don't be too bad. I like this book.

Recommendation level: strong Thoughts after reading: It's been a long time since I've seen this story in which the male protagonist and the female protagonist grow up together. The author handles it very well, and the way of expressing emotions is relatively obscure. The growth lines of the male and female protagonists are relatively obvious, but as long as the writing is exciting enough, it is still very watchable, and the characters are portrayed in a profound way.

The only book in a long time that I couldn't stop reading. Every character who appears has a very distinct personality. The characters have advantages and disadvantages but the author controls them very well. There is no unlikable character. The plot is probably the rebirth of Wang Daoliu. The subject matter is not new but it is very interesting to watch. The description of the key plot is also epic and makes people feel excited. In summary, it is a rare good book among foreign persimmons. I highly recommend reading [Please read more] [Please update] [Please update] Another point is to take a precaution. I hope that the author will not neglect the shaping of characters in the subsequent plots in pursuit of narrative grandeur. I have seen this problem in the later stages of many books. In order to recycle foreshadowing and expand the world view, all the efforts have made the characters appear homogeneous. Details are equally important. I have not enjoyed a book so much in a long time. I hope the author can craft it carefully. Come on! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I have read 230 chapters so far, and overall it's okay. I feel like the flaws outweigh the flaws, and the subject matter is good. The reading experience of the first hundred chapters was not good. The routine of "the enemy sneaked into the training ground and kidnapped the new regiment members" appeared repeatedly at least two or three times. To be honest, I think it is very unreasonable and tired. It gives people the feeling that the protagonist is weak enough to be invaded by the villain at will. The plot of not burning is in place, the feelings of family and country, the sacrifice of the soldiers, and the spirit of unity are all well reflected. Regarding character creation, I think the portrayal of Longque, Yue Feng and Yu Tinglan is very good. But I think the climax of the characters' emotions is relatively average. For example, in the early climax of Zhu Liangping, there is almost no plot about the way and process of getting along with Zhu Liangping and Chen Qingxu in their previous lives, that is, the daily emotional development between the two in their previous lives. I have no idea how good the relationship between the two was in their previous lives. This led to the fact that when Chen Qingxu was so angry that he gave himself a longevity-destroying potion and chased Zhu Liangping for an explanation. I just felt that this was a very impulsive and irrational person venting his emotions. The overall feeling was actually very strange, and my impression of the protagonist became worse. So I skipped the chapters about the fight scenes with Zhu Liangping. In my personal opinion, Li Qixiu's performance was also very mediocre, and for such a character who has been portrayed in many ways, the most significant significance seems to be the redemption of Bai Zhouzhou. It was hastily released without enough highlights and meaning. It only gave me some unexpected feelings at the time. I think he can do more and sacrifice more meaningfully. There is also the girl Xu Fan spent three days with in Paris in the second volume. I believe the author must have put a lot of effort into this paragraph, but I don't know what effect the author wants to achieve. To be honest, this section is not a bad one, but as a growth experience for Xu Fan, it is not bad. Regarding the protagonist's iron cavalry, I don't think there's anything special except for the evolution. Most mechas have their own characteristics. This ultimate armor seems to be no different from an ordinary armor, too mediocre. In addition, most of the time, the enemies are always stronger than the protagonist group, which also gives me a feeling of "Is the protagonist group really growing?" And the feeling that the protagonist is too weak. Personally, I think there is a risk of losing combat effectiveness. Finally, a small suggestion. The members of the Dragon Bird Team spend too little time together on a daily basis. I look forward to them having more daily interactions with each other, training together, and cultivating a tacit understanding. This may make the characters more vivid and more immersive. At present, for me, except for the male and female protagonists, I am not surprised that the other three will go offline in the next second, and I probably won't feel regretful. These are just some of my personal feelings and opinions. Overall, they are very good. Come on, author [please give me more updates][please give me more updates]

The new author has written well. Although there are some poisonous points, the flaws are not concealed. It can be seen that the author was heavily influenced by Jiangnan. I hope that after finishing this book, the next one will be more brilliant and have more personal style.

It is well written. Not only can the author correct problems in a timely manner, but the plot content is also very logical and has both depth and breadth. Alas, can art only be tragedy? The knife feels so uncomfortable that I dare not fully take it in. Although the style of this book does not match the Tomato style, it does not affect the actual quality of the book, which is enough to deserve five stars.