
After Falling from the Altar, He Was Imprisoned by Crazy Critics
跌落神坛后,被疯批逆徒囚养了
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Two Girls, Master and Apprentice, the Following Is Guilty of the First
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The Cold Beauty Was Pulled Off the Altar, and All Her Pride Was Wiped Away
Abusive writing, the kind that abuses both the heart and the body🌺🌺🌺
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Please Have Two Female Protagonists, No Male-To-Female, No Male-To-Female, No Male-To-Female
I want to read a book like "Everyone Told Me I'm Sick in the Brain".
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Yandere, the Kind That Wants a Knife, the Kind That Cuts Off Arms and Legs, Preferably a Girl
I want to read a book like "I was imprisoned by a yandere, and I chose revenge as a black man."
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I'm Looking for Some Good Yandere Articles, but I Don't Want Those That Are Broken.
At least double cleansing
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I Beg for the Two Heroines, 🧊️ so Charming, This Book Makes Me Suffocate Just Looking at It
Please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏Thank you baby, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh butededed
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Two Yandere Girls! ! ! End! ! ! ! ! Master Is the Best! ! ! He
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Are There Any Particularly Sadistic Double Heroines? I'm Tired of Watching the Sweetness and Want to Watch Some Sadistic Ones.
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Are There Any Stories with Two Female Protagonists?
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Looking for an Unequal Relationship➕severely Dependent Type➕sinister➕two Female Protagonists
I want to see content similar to "The real daughter is severely dependent on this cannon fodder".
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Looking for Two Female Protagonists, Any Kind Will Do
I want to read a book similar to "Heaven sends a daughter-in-law, the real and fake daughter are together". It's best if the real and fake daughters are together.
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Looking for Two Female Protagonists, Master, Sadistic Novel
To be very cruel
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Yes, it's quite good. I've read every chapter carefully so far. It's in line with my xp. But Master is so miserable. I feel uncomfortable while reading it😣😣😣
A well-written piece of sadistic writing. The only thing that makes me dissatisfied is that the characters in this type of writing deviate from reality and are more satisfying to people's emotional perspective. In terms of sadism, it is not as good as D16 in Origin saying "I'm done saving you"
Wtf, I'm really looking forward to getting back together again. It feels so good for this yandere to repent and chase his wife. I'm serious.
I will use the most straightforward, the least roundabout, the most direct, the most truthful, the least roundabout, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least abrasive, the most poignant, the most ruthless, the most to the point, and the most straightforward. Mountain, the most straightforward, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least sensational, the least nonsense and no detours, the least hidden things, the least tricks, the least formality, the least vain way to tell you There is no obligation not to watch it. Yes, yes.
It's a very awesome sadomasochism novel. I actually saw several sadomasochism books written by the author before, but I couldn't accept it so I didn't read it. Now I see that the author has written a story about he to have a taste of it. It is very delicious. I have to torture the master in the early stage and torture the night in the later stage. It also brings back some things that seem to be irreversible. I am curious about how I will continue to torture the night in the future. This is the first time I spend money to give you a gift [shy] It took nearly two months to catch up and it was finished, which is still quite short. But overall it can be regarded as a very good pornographic novel. I was thinking about how to get back to it later when I saw it, but it turned out to be so cruel that it made me feel terrified. It's sweet to see the follow-up to Seclusion, but it doesn't feel as natural as the previous one. It's really hard to write a sadistic story when it's about to end and it's sweet. Although I only started to follow it halfway, it is still the first novel that I have completed in the true sense. The ending of Eternal Life is also expected.
It feels like both parties are very abusive. In the end, the person who feels the most abusive in the whole process is Ye. I read Gao Zan and said that he abused Master in the early stage and abused Ye in the later period. But in fact, I feel that Master really deserved her. It is very comfortable to be in Ye's perspective. Disobedient children must be well disciplined to have the feeling of being a protagonist [face covering] Looking back, I feel that Ye is being bullied. I feel that my purpose has not been achieved and she is just humble and pitiful. In the end, it was only after being abused later... Ah, to be honest, your sweet-torture ratio is not good, it's really disturbing. I don't want to think about 200 chapters and at least 50 chapters of torture. The master has not given in yet (he is still insisting on calling the devil), will anyone really enjoy the foreshadowing of pain, depression and torture? I feel that if you can persist in waiting for 100 chapters of torture in the first chapter and then sweetness in the later part, you will not be simple [face covering]
It's quite good. I finished it in a day and a half and am waiting for the update. It's not the same as ordinary abuse articles. More than 1,000 pages are full of abuse. You can find sugar in the abuse, but there is no pure sugar. I quite like this kind of subject matter, so I think it is quite delicious. After Qing Ye discovered the truth, it really touched my heart. I originally wanted to read the author's other completed novels, but I found that they were all B. I only accepted the process knife and not the ending knife. It was a pity. All in all, this is the best prison novel I have ever read.
I read the novel in one day and finished it. I saw the author's warning before I read it, so I knew that this book would be quite cruel. Otherwise, the author wouldn't have kept reminding me to leave if I couldn't read the sad part. I kept crying while reading, but I still managed to finish it. The funny thing is that before I read it, I originally wanted to simply go through the sad part and then focus on the sweet part. But later I found that the sad part seemed to attract me more than the sweet part, and so did it in the end. I wish our two little lunatics are safe and well.
It's beautiful. It's really beautiful. Master's love is very mellow. I feel like the last few chapters have been dragging a bit.
It's nice to watch, but it's not sad enough. Please increase your intensity and punish him severely when you chase your wife.
It's very good, well written, and worth watching. The only small comment I have is that the heroine may be a little too naive, and she has a little bit of a ungrateful feeling. She was rescued one second, and the next second she was left there thinking that the master was born. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking], I hope it will be [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]
It's really beautiful! I stayed up all night to read the latest chapter. The author must work hard and update it. It must be he! ! ! Until now, I have actually always liked the setting and pull of this story, and it is also because of this that I have followed it all the way. In the recent chapters, perhaps due to personal taste, some parts are a bit uncomfortable to read. One is Qing Ye's lines. I feel that imperatives such as "give it to me" and "take it" are a bit dense and feel a bit greasy. Another one is the "parade on the street" section in Chapter 28. Maybe my understanding of yandere is more towards "you are mine and no one can see it". Exclusivity and uniqueness are the most touching parts, so I felt a little distressed for Wu Shuang when I read that section. Anyway, after chasing it for so long, I really like it so I would say a few more words. I have no other meaning, I just hope that the author will write better and better, and cheers for the crematorium later!
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
After reading nearly a hundred chapters, I burst into tears. The limitless and tolerant Master really touched the heart of a child like me who lacked love. At the beginning, I felt a bit sympathetic to the Demon Lord. I felt annoyed and irritated that the Master was not tamed. Later, I was moved by the Master's tolerance and cried countless times. The abuse is on the master's body, and the pain is on the disciple's heart. The abuse is really too much.
New book, support, support
What exactly are settings? Chapter 4: Say you know. Introduction: Say you don't know. Do you know or not?
It's over, I found out if I have any special hobbies [Petrochemical]
Abuse of the master, isn't this the master's hard-earned plan? [What], to make the disciple hate her, and then immediately atone for her sins after knowing the truth, this is already more than 90% of the yandere.
It's quite curious, I can't hold my breath just looking at it, it's okay [face covering]
It's so cruel that my heart is throbbing [crying]
Go, go, go! ! ! Still a cute little yandere. It's still cocoa. . . . . Cough, cough, cough, cough, the beloved
Your writing skills are always online. There is nothing wrong with you, the inmate.
This book is not bad. I couldn't stand the book "The Beautiful Wife" before. It was better than that one. Then I was actually tempted by the Master's words. I just didn't realize it. Otherwise, no ruthless Taoist would say that the apprentice is her destiny.
I read every chapter carefully, it's really good, I recommend it! ! !
I'm very optimistic about the new book! ! The beginning is well written! ! [Like][Like][Like]
It's still good to read and I loved reading it. I read several chapters and found out that the author is actually the author of Yueyue [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
A sweet article, I felt warm after reading it at night [shy]
For those of you who like yandere, is it because you have never been firmly chosen or loved in real life? [Laughing]
You were killed by a knife in the early stage. I feel sorry for my brothers, Master.
I didn't watch the later stages, but the early stages of IQ were particularly in line with my expectations.