[Two female leads + narcissistic romance + campus life + love triangle + full-immersion online game + ancient-style fantasy cultivation + a touch of sci-fi + fantasy + a touch of ensemble cast]
What do you mean all my exes in this love triangle are my alternate personalities?! And what do you mean there are even more people in this love triangle?!
The young Lu Yang accidentally logs into the virtual sensory game Mountain Rift, only to discover that its mechanics are extraordinary. You can experience almost everything in the game, including a certain amount of pain? Then she might as well give it a proper try~
In the game, Lu Yang is the very picture of a carefree wanderer, encountering all sorts of adventures, including but not limited to:
1. A player: Want to duel? What, no weapons?
Lu Yang: Don't need them. (She gives a thumbs-down, her name almost changing to the single character for “swagger.” She can hold her opponent off for ages without a weapon.)
A rookie who makes legends with her bare hands, though she isn't exactly a beginner.
2. Game boss: Liar, you're back...
Then it bites Lu Yang on the shoulder, hurting so much she nearly dies on the spot.
Luckily, Lu Yang has maxed out her evasion and is fast on her feet. But the boss won't simply vanish from her world.
3. One of the game's NPCs: Big Sister A-Yang, will you form a bond with me?
Lu Yang: Sure. (Thinking to herself: This has to be a cutscene! If players can form bonds with NPCs, I'll eat my own... meal while standing on my head.)
Five minutes later, two newlyweds in red stand beneath the Tree of Three Lives.
Lu Yang stares in disbelief. “Huh? We actually got married?”
But in real life, she's still an overworked student, and she's dealing with troubles from every direction.
Meanwhile, this vast world is becoming more and more unreal.
A bizarre life? A conspiracy game? Might as well enjoy being part of it.
The first Lily I read on Tomato. I have read most of it. The writing is good and the content is quite interesting. The protagonist is very funny and the description of the school is very subtle. It can be seen that the protagonist is very resentful towards the school. But who can be happy about going to school? The writing style is more prose and very delicate. Some parts are very literary, but overall it's good. [Blow kiss] Big boost for the author.
Jing Jing Jing, I recommend changing the title of the book to "What does it mean that all the exes in Shura Field are all my sub-personalities?" Will be more attractive. Did you change the plot? There were a few characters in the first draft that I can't find now, but after the change it became smoother than before [Sending my heart] Also, the short story you promised me has not been written to me yet, but you are updating the novel here💔Let all this heavy rain fall🎶🎶🎶
The writing is okay, some parts are funny and true, it reminds me of the hard times in high school.
The pace of the article is considered slow. It could be more exciting in the early stage, and the pace could be faster. The psychological details of the protagonist are well created. I feel that I had the same feelings as when I was in high school. I can still relate to her. Her mental journey makes me tired as a working person. I hope I can treat her better in the future.
The campus part is particularly well written and has a strong sense of immersion.
The plot is quite interesting, the further you go the more you like it.
The writing and plot are both online, the setting is novel, and you still have endless fun watching it.
Cheers to the author, the writing is really good.
The writing style is unique and charming, full of details, and very comfortable to read.
It's a very interesting novel, the more I read it, the more I like it.