Douluo Dalu: Rewriting the Regrets at Spirit Hall

It looks good, but can it be a little less painful? Wrestling, scratching hands, scratching legs. The heroine has practiced her body skills so well, but is it so easy to fall? But this one has too few chapters 🤭 I finished reading it in one sitting 😳 So can the author update ten chapters a day to scare me to death? 💕

Wow, no one has reviewed the book for me, so I will review it myself (ಥಥ)! Duofengyu, I wish you happiness every day and a happier future! Darlings, remember to be happy every day~😊

It's super beautiful, I was really moved, I cried from beginning to end, I hope everyone has a good ending, and I hope the heroine doesn't break Bibi Dong's heart. I don't know why I want to write the heroine in such a fussy way. The heroine is very smart and has a lot of brains, but the seeds in her bag are scattered all over the place, and she can drop them twice at once. Then when discussing things, I either touch the cup or the ink! Anyway, the heroine's seed will fall out almost every chapter! Can the heroine be more normal? Why do you keep touching this and that, and do you have to make the heroine a little confused? Does it look cute? I gave up the article and gave it 4 stars. Please encourage me.

Dad, the article you wrote is really beautiful. I have a small suggestion that I hope to read. Can you reduce the number of times the heroine touches and drops things? Occasionally dropping things once or twice is okay. You also want to add a sense of realism to the heroine. We can all understand, but if the number of drops is too many, it may affect the perception, so can you reduce the number of times appropriately so that it does not affect the heroine's characterization? This article Overall, it's very good, and I also prefer to read articles about family and friendship, and now there are very few people like Ju Gui Douluo and Bibi Dong Qian Renxue who have such good descriptions, so this article really poked me, and articles like yours that are not bad on both sides are rare, so I hope that this article and you will get better and better, and I hope you will adopt this little suggestion I made [Send my heart][Send my heart]

The author's storyline is good, I like it very much, and the setting is also very good. It can be said that it is the best genre of literature and science about Douluo that I have read so far, but there are so many poisonous points that can only be regarded as the storyline! First of all, the heroine is careless in the early stage, she spreads her seeds at every turn, and she always likes to stick out her tongue (I personally don't like this action of female characters, and the same goes for male characters). When writing or doing things, there are always small problems, such as ink marks or knocking down of water glasses. Well, there is also a plot I saw where the heroine left the warm jade box on the carriage. I thought there was a foreshadowing, but after looking back for a long time, I simply forgot! This plot is actually a bit abrupt and completely dispensable. Here I suspect that the author is actually trying to make up the word count! Then there are a lot of plots that are inconsistent with the original work. As for this, the author can actually say in the introduction that it is privately designed, because I always thought it was based on the original work, but later I found that the realm of Tang San and Xiao Wu was different from the original, and many places were also different from the original. But even though Tang San and Xiao Wu's realms were different from before, the old man still started to marvel at the first two after watching the heroine's 35th episode. They are also over 30 levels, so they are not much different, but they just seem a bit innocent and deliberately highlight the heroine. How can I put it this way? The plot of this book is very beautiful. I really like this book by the author. However, it is obvious that the author is still quite young and needs more training. I hope that the description and details will improve later. The subject matter is really good and the storyline is also very innovative, because I The other Douluo novels I have read so far are either siding with Wuhun Palace to deal with Tang San and the others, or else siding with Tang San to deal with Wuhun Palace. It's rare to see such a harmonious protagonist as the author, so it's really good to read. I really like it. I hope the author can move closer to a good place and don't write too much! The poisonous points still need to be improved as soon as possible! Generally speaking, it's a good read. If you don't pay much attention to the original work and some of the protagonist's somewhat abrupt actions, this book is indeed very good! Wow wow wow, the author is really serious and is indeed learning. I have become a fan of her and am already considered a treasured author. Now I want to grow up with her and strive to become a veteran fan 🤭

Why did the name change halfway through reading? Isn't it Douluo Continent?

Okay, okay, okay

It's not bad, but there are some inappropriate words in some places, but it doesn't affect the viewing. Come on

Very good, good luck to the author. It's just a bit confusing. When I have time, I can write an introduction to the main character. In this case, everyone may understand it.

Not bad, very good. Come and take a look 😳