Cultivation of Immortality Begins with the Ancestor of Jindan

Mature writing style and vivid storyline

The writing is good, there is no poison, and the writing is smooth, which is already very good.

The plot foreshadowing can still be seen in the early and middle stages. It focuses on development. Secondly, which pill formation is a bit limited. Finally, the world of cultivating immortals is advancing so fast. Which system rewards the host for developing tribesmen. This should not be omitted. Anyway, the author, please give it a big boost [face covering] [face covering]

I have written something similar, but I put it aside before finishing it. I really like reading this kind of fantasy novel with ideas. I think it is well written, but it is a bit too hasty. The details need to be polished later. If possible, I hope the author can write fantasy novels again. I don't know if the author of my comment at this time can see it. I hope the author can cheer up [like the post] [send my heart]

There is no frustrating start, no intrigue and internal friction. From the beginning, the family unites as one and crushes the enemy with strength. Watching the younger generations grow and the family rise step by step, the sense of steady development is particularly comfortable. The triple combination of cultivating immortals + family flow + ancestor's perspective is very exciting. The more you look at it, the more you get addicted to it.

The content is rich and colorful, the structure is clear, and it is humorous.

The narrative is detailed and appropriate, very good.

The storyline is captivating and hard to put down.

The author's writing style is quite good, and the plot is also very attractive. It's quite interesting to watch.

The plot is particularly exciting and the writing is very online.

It's good to read. I haven't read a fairy tale for a long time. This one is really good.

It's a good novel with good character settings.

It's well written, the type I like to read.

Personally I think it's pretty good

The author is great and his writing style is delicate.

The characters are lifelike.

The book is tightly paced.

It looks good, has a good rhythm, and suits me [laughing evilly]

It looks so good that I can't stop watching it.

Not bad, very pretty

The characters are vivid and beautiful.

Not bad, pretty good

Come on author, it's very good

After reading Chapter 44, I feel it's okay

Recommended by a friend, it feels good

It's over. ! Looking forward to the next one soon

It's good, but it would be much more interesting if it were a world of immortality like Xuanjian and the protagonist was Jin Dan.

The author's point of view is unique and profound.

Looks okay, looking forward to the follow-up.

The theme of this book is deeply rooted in people's hearts.