I Want to Wander Around the World and Kill You? Just One Cut!

Not bad, not cliché, but also suspenseful

This writing style looks like a veteran at first glance, which is good.

It's okay, but not as exaggerated as those reviews praise it. It's too fast. Not only does the protagonist grow up quickly, but the plot also transitions quickly. From what I've seen so far, you just told us about a flower-picking thief that he once liked someone very much. You didn't describe what Bai Yueguang was like or what she did. You just told us that there was this person, and then the thief went offline inexplicably. In human terms, I only know what he did, but I don't know why he did it.

Wonderful, keep it up till the end

The writing is quite good. Is the heroine the one from Qingluan Valley? It's a pity it's unfinished

Still very good