My Name Is Jiang Ye, I Am a Swordsman

It's pretty good, but it's a bit uncomfortable that the protagonist is always poor when he helps others but doesn't get any merit. Although there must be important foreshadowing here, it's just uncomfortable.

The writing is okay, it does have a bit of a One Punch Man flavor. I hope the author can write some good plots like One Punch in the future. Each supporting character is well designed, and each episode has some truth and highlights different interesting things. I hope every character has his own story, like a punch

This is one of the few characters in Tomato that is catchy. It is invincible when it comes out, but the protagonist is portrayed so well and has a very positive outlook. The key is that the most important writing is in place. .

There is no pretense and slap in the face, there is no allegorical code, a young swordsman travels around the world Things have changed since arriving in the Eternal City. The literary youth has become more sophisticated. The words that map this to that are written crookedly.

It's okay. Just looking at these pictures, they are in line with my wishes. There is just a little table of contents. Why does this book not have a table of contents and chapter names? The most important thing is that in today's fast-paced world, it is common to skip reading. Without chapter names, it is really difficult. It may dissuade many people.

Very well written and the writing style is great! Every character is fully portrayed, and I really like the pure warrior Fang Zheng portrayed. I really hope that Fang Zheng can be given a chance in the future, or like the protagonist, he can use his mortal body to reach the pinnacle of martial arts and take a non-cultivation route.

, So far it is in line with my taste,

It's okay to write. I quite like the pace of this story.

Very good, everyone is a good enlightenment and cultivation type, the male protagonist has a pure and innocent heart, and the overall world view is positive and flexible. I hope the author will work hard and continue to persevere! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing is very comfortable, the protagonist is strong, the story is very good, the best in Tomato

Looking good alone

Warm and lovely boy

Not bad Not bad

Let me find gold in 💩

It feels bland and a bit hollow.

Not bad, but I haven't read many new books. It's a bit verbose [face covering] I can't stand it anymore.

It's quite interesting to see the martial arts world of One Punch Man. The question is whether the realm can be written clearly (can I write a chapter about the realm and some common sense about the world)?

It's pretty, plain and to my liking.

It's a good read, the writing style is light, and the protagonist is cute. It's a bit like prose. There are no exaggerated slaps in the face, pretense, survival in dangerous situations and other conflicting plots. It's just the story of a fourteen-year-old boy wandering around in the world without any purpose. It's very plain and quiet. If you don't like it, you can leave. I quite like it. Some of the little actions of the protagonist are so cute, and the little boy is completely cold-faced and cute (´∀｀)♡ I would like to add that this article is a bit biased towards group portraits. There are descriptions of people around the protagonist, small passers-by who have nothing to do with the protagonist, and even the villains. It can be seen that the author is very careful. He treats everyone as the protagonist and does not hesitate to describe it. It is very delicate, but this sometimes makes the plot a bit slow and wordy. However, I also like group portraits. Personally, I feel that it is harmless. Although sometimes it is a bit anxious to see the protagonist never appear.

The writing is very good, the storyline is well developed, the protagonist has a good personality, and the character descriptions of the minor characters and the big characters are very good. They are all very specific, without masks, and are group portraits.

It's beautiful, it's super beautiful. It's so light and interesting. My writing is so awesome. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I listened to half of it, okay

Come on, more, the pace is too slow

It looks good but the number of words is a bit short. Please update it soon! ! !

It was so comfortable to read. The Magic Mirror chapter is a bit redundant, but the flaws are not hidden. It is a very good book.

The update is too slow, I hope there will be more chapters a day, thank you. Very well written

Comparing the ink, the writing is pretty good.

Is this based on the plot of One Punch Man? It doesn't look like what I'm imitating, and it's too verbose.

The writing is good, and the writing is good. It's a pity that after entering the society for a few years, I no longer have the innocent thoughts of the protagonist in the play, and I can't read such innocent novels.

Too little, not enough to watch [OK][OK][OK]