My White Moonlight Is Lost in a World on the Brink

I came here for Bai Yueguang, I can write Bai Yueguang a little more cruelly. Let the jealous woman write something more hateful. The ending should not be happy in the end. In troubled times, no one can escape from power, love and hatred. It needs to be written more realistically and cruelly, in such troubled times and desperate situations, there are no winners and no way out.

The emotions in the text are very strong, including heartbreak and madness. The whole text reflects the sense of fate that cannot be turned back. There is no turning back when you open the bow. You just need to learn more to reverse it so that it does not go too smoothly. There is no big problem in logic. It is necessary to write that feeling of being unable to love and unable to control yourself. Come on, study hard!

Ye Ling'er's tenacity and madness switch so smoothly, Li Zhong's affection and coldness transition seamlessly, and Meng Yao's jealousy and fear come and go easily. Every character is like a puppet pushed by the plot, and even love and hate have a neat sense of conflict for the sake of conflict, which is very consistent with the setting of involuntarily in troubled times.

The writing and plot are ups and downs, a treasure in the ancient style of troubled times! Bai Yueguang's abandonment, mother and son separation, love-hate entanglement, and power schemes are full of elements but not complicated. Each character has his or her own obsessions and tragedies, and there is no absolute winner. After reading this, I can only sigh. I like sadomasochism + Machiavellian tactics

There is a lot of tension in the three-way struggle, Ye Ling'er's forbearance and revenge, Li Chong's balance of power, and Meng Yao's hypocritical calculations, are they all intertwined? From the humiliation of Yeting to the desperate situation of Gujing, to the secret investigation in Luoyang, the direction is clear and there is no redundant water injection.

Love is the most fragile in troubled times. The fate of Ye Ling'er and Li Chong began to deviate from the night Chang'an fell. They were obviously each other's Bai Yueguang, but they were separated step by step amid intrigue, suspicion and hatred. Ye Ling'er's journey to find her son is heart-wrenching to watch. She transforms from a gentle lady to a weather-beaten avenger, breaking her heart every step of the way; while Li Zhong has the power, but forever loses the person he wants to protect the most. In the end, he remains alone, truly fulfilling the saying "win the world, lose her."

The author's writing is very immersive, good

The writing is quite good, I hope the author will work harder

The content is substantial, the writing is smooth, and it can capture the reader's psychology. It's really great!

The pace of the article is just right, not procrastinating or verbose, and it is very comfortable to read. The author's writing skills are so solid!