Seeking Immortality in Lizhu Cave-Heaven

The writing is okay, better than Xiaobai's writing, and still has some depth, but the writing line is a bit closer to the original work by Chen Ping'an. I feel that this aspect is a bit bad. It has a sense of immediacy. I hope the author can consider this aspect. The reason for giving the review is that I hope the author can insist on updating. I have seen a lot of Swordsman fan fiction that has been discontinued. I hope the author can continue to work hard.

It's not bad. It's pretty good in the fandom so far. It has its own unique ideas. It's not like those cheating and cool articles. It's good to follow one step at a time. However, the personalities of some characters are not consistent with the original work. It's just a small problem that doesn't affect the overall look and feel. Come on, come on, support it!!!

I have read quite a few sword creations, but this one made me feel that it is particularly close to the original work. The characters such as Lu Chen and Cui Han also fit the original work relatively well without being copied mechanically. The protagonist does not mindlessly seize other people's opportunities like other novels. Especially the relationship between the protagonist and Lu Chen. Generally speaking, it is worth watching 🥰 🥰 🥰

The writing style is very good, and there are a lot of updates. It is considered one of the better authors on Tomato. However, it has not yet written its own big framework. It is still limited to the big story background of the original work. I hope I can write my own style in the future.

It's better for those who haven't watched Sword Comes, but not so friendly for those who have watched Sword Comes. It's like watching Sword Comes again. It's not brainless but has some nanny meaning. The process is not explained clearly. There is no reason. I won't say it. Four stars for encouragement. Goodbye if I have the chance.

It's okay, just a bit pretty^ω^##(o^з^o)💞💞(o^з^o)💞💞(o^з^o )💞💞(o^з^o)💞💞(o^з^o)💞💞(o^з^o)💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

Will there be multiple heroines? Or a single heroine [what]

This is a super nice swordsmanship fanfic with only Ruan Xiu as the heroine. It's really good.

Tomato is a rare Jianlai fan, and it would be nice if the emotional descriptions of Xiuxiu were more restrained.

I hope I can continue writing it. It's very comfortable to read. Good luck, author.