Lizhu Cave: Engraving the Divine Will and Enlightening Immortality

The writing is okay, better than Xiaobai's writing, and still has some depth, but the writing line is a bit closer to the original work by Chen Ping'an. I feel that this aspect is a bit bad. It has a sense of immediacy. I hope the author can consider this aspect. The reason for giving the review is that I hope the author can insist on updating. I have seen a lot of Swordsman fan fiction that has been discontinued. I hope the author can continue to work hard.

It's not bad. It's pretty good in the fandom so far. It has its own unique ideas. It's not like those cheating and cool articles. It's good to follow one step at a time. However, the personalities of some characters are not consistent with the original work. It's just a small problem that doesn't affect the overall look and feel. Come on, come on, support it! ! !

The writing style is very good, and there are a lot of updates. It is considered one of the better authors on Tomato. However, it has not yet written its own big framework. It is still limited to the big story background of the original work. I hope I can write my own style in the future.

I have read quite a few sword creations, but this one made me feel that it is particularly close to the original work. The characters such as Lu Chen and Cui Han also fit the original work relatively well without being copied mechanically. The protagonist does not mindlessly seize other people's opportunities like other novels. Especially the relationship between the protagonist and Lu Chen. Generally speaking, it is worth watching [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

Will there be multiple heroines? Or a single heroine [what]

It's better for those who haven't watched Sword Comes, but not so friendly for those who have watched Sword Comes. It's like watching Sword Comes again. It's not brainless but has some nanny meaning. The process is not explained clearly. There is no reason. I won't say it. Four stars for encouragement. Goodbye if I have the chance.

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This is a super nice swordsmanship fanfic with only Ruan Xiu as the heroine. It's really good.

I hope I can continue writing it. It's very comfortable to read. Good luck, author.

Tomato is a rare Jianlai fan, and it would be nice if the emotional descriptions of Xiuxiu were more restrained.

Not much to say, come on, author

Jian Lai is a very good fanfic. I think it is one of the best on Tomato. It is worth reading.

It's very beautiful, and the descriptions are very detailed, but the dialogue between the characters is a bit lacking.

If you can read it, it is a good book

How do you write about the dispute between Xiu Xiu and Li Liu later? One side is the daughter-in-law, the other side is the benefactor's child

It's beautiful. It's definitely not a piece of writing. It's well written. Why doesn't anyone rate it? I think if it doesn't fall apart, it should be a masterpiece.

The score is definitely low. The writing style is one of the best among the Jianlai fanfics I have read. The characters are not much different from the original work, and the plot advancement is just right. Five-star praise.

The characters are well developed and have the flavor of a sword, but they also incorporate the author's ideas. How do you put it? Do you think it is reasonable for the protagonist to hit the fifth realm in three realms? Also, the protagonist learned Liu Qi's three realms in three years and climbed to Yupu in one step. I would like to ask, based on the protagonist's academic foundation (cannot read a word) and understanding of spiritual practice (no one teaches him), do you think he can see through Liu Qi's method of ascending to heaven in three years [face covering]? Among the first two, one is Zhou Mi and the other is Liu Qi. Which one of them does not have a profound background to be able to achieve Jade Pu in one step? As far as the protagonist's family background is concerned, there are basically no Taoist classics. I won't talk about knowledge. How can one be able to achieve Jade Pu in one step? How is that possible [face covering], it completely defies logic. Don't tell me that you did it because you have a deeper understanding of the Tao. This is simply not true. The protagonist observed the statues in the cave. Old Man Yang took him to visit the heaven he imagined. In this way, can he achieve the first step of Jade Purity? According to this statement, similar situations happen every day in the Great Wall of Sword Qi. Why can't it work there? Or should the protagonist's talent be at the bottom of 14? A low-dimensional protagonist who cultivates the divine way and sees the extremely high-dimensional divine way of heaven is already very awesome. It can only be said that it allows the protagonist to see clearly how to take the road and clarify a direction [face-covering]. The author's description is very reasonable, but in fact it is unreasonable everywhere, the logic collapses, the combat power collapses, and there are many more that I will not go into. If you are purely looking for a sense of pleasure, you can try to enter the pit. If you like to be smart, it is recommended not to read [face-covering].

This is the second best-looking article I've read so far. You already know the first part, Ning Yuan, without me having to tell you. The overall logic of this book is pretty good.

Taoist friends are too demanding

Good-looking, love to watch, watch more

It's worth seeing

It smells like a sword, but it's a bit unnatural when communicating with people.

Okay, but there are a few sentences that are obviously AI

The author needs to keep at it.

It's not enough to read at all, I really want to read 1000 chapters when I wake up. I hope you stick to it I am looking forward to the story of going to Qing Ming Tian Xia

This is the best Jianlai fanfic I have ever seen. Super beautiful and highly recommended

The writing style is delicate. Chen Changsheng and Chen Ping'an have similar life experiences. Reading it is almost like reading swordsmanship.

A good Kenlai fanfic, rare in Tomato, no system, the main character has grown considerably

Personally, I think it looks good (ฅ´ω`ฅ). I have read it and left my claws.