Everyone's Showing Off, Whether Human or Ghost, While the Protagonist Gets Beaten Up

I came here after watching the short play. I am a 20-year old bookworm. I suggest the author not to write too fast. For example: the part about crossing the sea to seek immortality. During the 200-year voyage, there is too much content to write. You can spend 5 to 10 more chapters. You can write about various races, you can write about adventures and treasures, and you can learn from them. In One Piece, you can write some emotional lines, you can write about the natives' admiration for the protagonist to improve the sense of immersion, bring in the quest for immortality and the world, bring in the time flies, the contradiction between loneliness and prosperity, and also create fear when you think about it carefully. In general, the author's framework is good, and it can be slowed down to improve the sense of immersion. It's rare to find a book in Tomato that you can listen to. Come on

Objective evaluation, very good-looking, those who like Invincible Cool may not like it, but the plot is very exciting, really good The design of this book is very interesting. After reincarnation, no matter how many thousands of years you live, you will be the same as a stupid young man. If you like to go out, you can avoid it. There are many poisonous points in it. 6 Stars

It's a pity. I thought it could be a replacement for the book Against Fate. That book was really comfortable to read. This book's combat power is too strong. I don't understand why in every life, a stranger is created who is more like a genius than the protagonist, making the protagonist more like a roadside person [laughing and crying] I'm really convinced. All the fellow protagonists are geniuses and monsters who are better than the protagonist. It's outrageous. Who is the protagonist? Moreover, every reincarnation has to start over again. The fellow villagers have become bosses. Does it make sense that the protagonist should still be Karami? [Cover face]

The writing method of reincarnation is very difficult and easy to break down, but the author actually persisted and used all the foreshadowing from before. The reason for the low rating is that most readers of Tomato like to read straightforward and refreshing articles, but for many old readers this is definitely a fairy tale. Come on, author, I hope you can write better and better The reason why many readers give it a low score is that the protagonist is not the typical omniscient and omnipotent protagonist of online novels. He does not get all the benefits and is not the person with the most opportunities. But in my opinion, this is a flesh-and-blood person. After reading Tomato for several years, this is my first time writing a book review, because this is no longer an ordinary Tomato novel.

It's wonderful, the author's writing style, and the plot are well controlled. Even an old bookworm will definitely be able to read it. Friends, if you give this book a chance to read ten chapters, you will be fascinated. I promise, if you can't stand it, leave a comment and scold me. ★★★★★ Review after 5 hours of reading

I fell in love after reading 5 comics, and I came here to give the author a rating. Thanks to the comics for letting me know this interesting story and the male protagonist Chen Mo. , The author has created many charming characters, such as Meng Zhang, Lin Wan'er, Ye Qingqing, Yaya, etc. The male protagonist is also very charming, with a tough heart and a firm mind. Leaving again and again but never giving up is indeed Chen Mo's biggest charm as an ordinary person. I hope the author can have a beginning and an end, and don't write a story that collapses or ends [like] (In addition, it is good that there is no trend of emotional drama in short plays. I hope it can be maintained in the future. , There should be no love scenes in the back, no female protagonist, the male protagonist just keeps pursuing his career and getting stronger, with Mao Gu Gu, Meng Zhang and family and friends in every life. This is the most comfortable thing to watch. Come on, author! [Like]) After watching the sixth season, the plot is very exciting. I still support the male protagonist without CP. I really need to write a plot with a rich emotional line for the male protagonist, but it cannot be Guan Shanyue, otherwise the parents, wife and children of the male protagonist who were killed in the first life will become clowns. , The male protagonist's several lifetimes of revenge have become a joke. From Guan Shanyue's perspective, the male protagonist is also using her to destroy the enemy of her entire family. She is also a character with her own pride and rationality (the old man of despair is the incarnation of obsession, which I don't think represents her). If she had an independent personality, she would never have the idea of falling in love with the male protagonist. If these two people follow a romantic line, it will challenge the three views of some viewers. . . In fact, if these two characters shine independently, they will be two very charming people. But if they follow the emotional line, it will destroy the personality and charm of the two characters before. I hope this novel will not collapse on this! !

Although there are some flaws, he controls the plot very well, it is fun to watch without being awkward, and there are many foreshadowings and settings that are not broken. It is much better than those pretentious male protagonists who have full combat power at the beginning of the brainless novel. It is worth watching. The author will update soon [Like] [Like] The rating is low, it's really good. I usually don't follow serialized movies [face covering]. It may be a little frustrating in the middle. It's not a purely enjoyable novel, but the foreshadowing of each life is connected together. It's really exciting. I don't know why the rating is so low.

I came from comics. The writing is good and has a touch of humor. The male protagonist fights all the way from a mortal to a powerful cultivator. I hope more people will watch it. I hope this will become a big hit! ! ! I just want to see how many hours I spent reading

There is no doubt that the divine book is closely connected in every life, and the characters are well created. Some characters do not only appear in a certain life, but are connected to the entire story. The protagonist's strength is reasonably improved, and his combat power is not broken.

The reincarnation series is pretty good, and the descriptions of love and hatred are pretty good.