Cultivation to Immortality, I Failed at the Beginning and Was Treated as a Minion to Make up for It.

I came here after watching the short play. I am a 20-year old bookworm. I suggest the author not to write too fast. For example: the part about crossing the sea to seek immortality. During the 200-year voyage, there is too much content to write. You can spend 5 to 10 more chapters. You can write about various races, you can write about adventures and treasures, and you can learn from them. In One Piece, you can write some emotional lines, you can write about the natives' admiration for the protagonist to improve the sense of immersion, bring in the quest for immortality and the world, bring in the time flies, the contradiction between loneliness and prosperity, and also create fear when you think about it carefully. In general, the author's framework is good, and it can be slowed down to improve the sense of immersion. It's rare to find a book in Tomato that you can listen to. Come on

Objective evaluation, very good-looking, those who like Invincible Cool may not like it, but the plot is very exciting, really good The design of this book is very interesting. After reincarnation, no matter how many thousands of years you live, you will be the same as a stupid young man. If you like to go out, you can avoid it. There are many poisonous points in it. 6 Stars

It's a pity. I thought it could be a replacement for the book Against Fate. That book was really comfortable to read. This book's combat power is too strong. I don't understand why in every life, a stranger is created who is more like a genius than the protagonist, making the protagonist more like a roadside person [laughing and crying] I'm really convinced. All the fellow protagonists are geniuses and monsters who are better than the protagonist. It's outrageous. Who is the protagonist? Moreover, every reincarnation has to start over again. The fellow villagers have become bosses. Does it make sense that the protagonist should still be Karami? [Cover face]

The writing method of reincarnation is very difficult and easy to break down, but the author actually persisted and used all the foreshadowing from before. The reason for the low rating is that most readers of Tomato like to read straightforward and refreshing articles, but for many old readers this is definitely a fairy tale. Come on, author, I hope you can write better and better The reason why many readers give it a low score is that the protagonist is not the typical omniscient and omnipotent protagonist of online novels. He does not get all the benefits and is not the person with the most opportunities. But in my opinion, this is a flesh-and-blood person. After reading Tomato for several years, this is my first time writing a book review, because this is no longer an ordinary Tomato novel.

It's wonderful, the author's writing style, and the plot are well controlled. Even an old bookworm will definitely be able to read it. Friends, if you give this book a chance to read ten chapters, you will be fascinated. I promise, if you can't stand it, leave a comment and scold me. ★★★★★ Review after 5 hours of reading

I came from comics. The writing is good and has a touch of humor. The male protagonist fights all the way from a mortal to a powerful cultivator. I hope more people will watch it. I hope this will become a big hit! ! ! I just want to see how many hours I spent reading

The reincarnation series is pretty good, and the descriptions of love and hatred are pretty good. The plot behind it is not good, it's just like a group portrait novel

Give me a good review. The more you read, the better it looks. I hope the author will update it soon [laughing] It gets more and more embarrassing later on, even the strong ones have no strength [eating melon]

The first Chen Mo was killed by the deacon of the Purple Clothes Sect. In the second life, Lin Mo met Lin Wan'er, killed the deacon, and introduced the Demon Cult into the sect. In the third life, one of the four princes of the Demon Cult met Zhou, destroyed the Ziyi Sect, and was killed by Zhou. In the fourth generation, Chen Ping'an's brother, who had great achievements, entered the capital and was killed by the Queen Mother. In the fifth life, a relative of the emperor named Ye won the trust of the Queen Mother and married Guan. He killed the Queen Mother and was told by Wu Gui how to cultivate immortality. He was later killed by his wife. In the sixth life, he went to build a ship. During the ninth calamity, he met Meng Shusheng and met Lin Wan'er. He died on the shore. In the seventh life, he was the son of the Xiaocheng family. He practiced hard all his life and was killed by a demon at home. In the eighth life, a person of the devil's way knows the courage of a cat, obtains the magic chariot, a magic weapon, becomes a purple talisman, and gets the sect master's teachings. Later, when he encounters an enemy, he self-destructs and dies together. In the ninth life, people who have reached the golden elixir realm through casual cultivation met Lin Wan'er, Zhou, Meng, Lin Qingqing, and Jiuwei. All the steps were condensed into 1,000 steps. They gave up the position of being the leader and left, opened a sect and accepted a disciple. In the second half of the step, the golden elixir and the golden elixir were perfected and died together. In the tenth life, there is no background, three brothers are sworn brothers, kill the Nine Tails, guard the frontier, call Mao Dan, call Meng, Meng kills the demon, a great disaster is about to occur.

Although there are some flaws, he controls the plot very well, it is fun to watch without being awkward, and there are many foreshadowings and settings that are not broken. It is much better than those pretentious male protagonists who have full combat power at the beginning of the brainless novel. It is worth watching. The author will update soon [Like] [Like] The rating is low, it's really good. I usually don't follow serialized movies [face covering]. It may be a little frustrating in the middle. It's not a purely enjoyable novel, but the foreshadowing of each life is connected together. It's really exciting. I don't know why the rating is so low.

Summary of the full text: "I spent several of my lives chasing other people's lives." No, my friend, you wrote the wrong protagonist. Isn't the protagonist Zhou Chengfeng? Why do you always write about Chen Mo? It has written about so many women and laid out so many foreshadowings. I just saw No Harem. No Harem. Why did you write so many foreshadowings about women? Are you thinking about it for others? What a poisonous point. Are you going to kill them all later? Whether the golden finger is turned on or not, the whole text mainly reads "The protagonist has been chasing his enemy for several lifetimes, but he still looks up and breathes. At the lowest level, he is a flowing protagonist, an ironclad rebel. The author might as well write another article: how Zhou Chengfeng acquired a girl from the protagonist, how he plotted against the protagonist, how he killed the protagonist, and then write about how the protagonist and a fool were betrayed by his own woman, and finally he attacked the Minotaur, and the whole article is over. Give you 6 stars

Five stars, the writing is quite emotional [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's not bad. I think we can develop more into martial arts. The scenes should be as grand and powerful as possible. We can feel the charm and excitement of the protagonist from other people. The updates should not be too watery. We should grasp the key points and not seek more but seek refinement. In the end, there should be more, it is not enough to watch [Chigua]

It's good to read. Maybe others like to read cool articles without using their brains. I think why others would criticize someone like that when they see someone who doesn't understand. This is not a mindless cool article. Some things are foreshadowing and some things are foreshadowing. The author has an outline and his own rhythm. Of course, everyone has the freedom to comment. I didn't like it, so why can't I criticize it? So now is the time to screen readers. If they like the content, they will naturally follow it. If they don't like it, they will turn left. In terms of writing, I give it a three-point rating at most. In terms of plot, it can be rated four points. At the beginning of Mortal Kingdom, the rhythm of the plot was quite good, including the supporting characters, which were quite impressive. Unfortunately, there were some problems with the rhythm later on, but it's not a big problem. Just follow your feelings. The content is pretty good.

It's a very difficult novel to write down. I read it from a comic adaptation. How can I describe this novel? The subject matter is okay and the story is acceptable. However, the author's writing style and plot grasp are too low, which makes many places seem very nonsensical and unsympathetic. But having said that, the story line seems to be quite good at the moment. The quality of a novel is determined by the power of writing, and the infinite nesting doll mode is about to begin. The protagonist is not a waste, but an incomparable waste due to ✍️'s deliberate suppression. Finally, let's talk about the author's underlying logic in writing this novel. The supporting characters will always be born among the people the protagonist knows. The protagonist will be protected by a similar "guardian" in every life. This story line may not necessarily revolve around the protagonist, but it will definitely end with the protagonist in the end.

This is one of the better novels about cultivating immortals. Reading this novel reminded me of the anime Wu Geng Ji I watched before. Each character has its own characteristics, which I quite like. In many fairy tales, the male protagonist has a harem, and there are many romantic scenes that are very disgusting. I hope this novel doesn't have any emotional lines in the future. Here I also recommend the novel "The Evil Son of the Wei Family Becomes the First Assistant", which is also well written. Don't write emotional lines, I don't like to read them. Wan Yao Tu Lu is still popular even without emotional lines. If you like to read love stories, I advise you to read romance novels. Romance novels about cultivating immortals are everywhere.

The book is average, the comic is first-rate, the narrative rhythm of the first season is definitely one of the best, and the subsequent seasons are also good, but the updates are too slow.

It is creative and different from those cool novels that have an invincible start. It is not procrastinating and undoubtedly makes people keep reading. It is eye-catching. In my opinion, it is a buried novel. I hope it will lead to more discoveries.

It's pretty good, it's getting more and more exciting, I just hope there won't be more matryoshka dolls in the future. I'm quite speechless. If nothing else happens, another accident will happen. It's all an accident. How could there be so many accidents?

In my mind, this book is simply the best in the literature on cultivating immortals. It is no less important to me than "Celebrating More Than Years" when I was in high school. I can feel that the author has a very rich cultural background and the writing is very interesting. I accidentally read the AI short drama of this book and couldn't stop reading it. I specially found the original work. Look, after reading the original work, I discovered that there are many unparalleled subtleties in it. Whether it is the conception, the logic of the writing, or the storyline, it is all breathtaking. I hope the author will not abandon the article and keep writing. I will also keep reading it. If this book can be published as a physical book, I will be the first to buy it hahaha

It's so pretty! It's great to see men having their menstrual period! It's so exciting for women to see it! This is the nemesis of depression Q and the alarm clock of vegetative Q. So cute Tears flowed from the corners of the mouth and flooded the Qiantang River He's so handsome, he's a god! It's my rose that lights up my darkness Life makes my world Q meaningful I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor Made me realize that God does exist I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying From now on, the world will no longer be short of water

The author wrote it very well. However, although the theme of the writing is centered around the theme of reincarnation, we still have to properly highlight some of the protagonist's highlight moments, but you put them on the protagonist's fellow countrymen (◕ᴗ◕✿). Several peerless geniuses came out of a corner. This is not common sense. Let's not mention this. What about the white crane boy you mentioned? What has been updated so far? There are at least more than a hundred chapters that have not been mentioned, and the plot cannot be kept up. Also, Han Yishan's psychological state can be a little more restrained. It always feels a little inconsistent with his historical image, and it feels a little exaggerated. The author, you have a good historical background. I feel very comfortable watching the scenes between Xiang Yu and Liu Bang. Come on, I believe you will write more exciting chapters in the future ( ╹▽╹ )(＾∇＾)ﾉ♪

Most of the low scores are due to dissatisfaction with this book. I didn't think that if you push it too fast, it will appear rough, and the assembly line is not interesting. The details of the foreshadowing in this book are quite good. There are two or three small worlds where the progress is indeed slow, but the overall flaws are not concealed. The author is more powerful in writing stories involving mortals. The opening scenes of Dynasty, Chu-Han Struggle for Hegemony, and Wind Rising in Chang'an are all very interesting. I don't know how long the author plans to write the story. The overall progress is relatively slow at present. Nine tribulations have been written once and a half (scratching my head). I feel that twenty a day is more appropriate.

Objectively speaking, the pace is fast, but the description of the protagonist is not rational enough, and many of them rush forward, but there is something to watch, and the supporting characters are quite interesting. As for the plot, I think it is okay [smile][smile][smile]

Highly recommended! A rare article about cultivating immortality through reincarnation without routine. The protagonist Chen Mo is not the kind of cool hero who is invincible at the beginning. He will fail and die. He has regrets in every life, but he is also growing. The mechanism of reincarnation is very reasonable, the use of destiny points and the inheritance of talents are logical, and the world view is slowly unfolding. It is well worth watching!

There is no doubt that the divine book is closely connected in every life, and the characters are well created. Some characters do not only appear in a certain life, but are connected to the entire story. The protagonist's strength is reasonably improved, and his combat power is not broken.

Brother, come on, it's still good. Don't suck. It's much better than a mindless and cool article.

After watching the short play, I felt that the author's world view was very grand. I felt that this one was different from many cultivating immortals. He did not accept a harem, which made me see the difficulty of ordinary people cultivating immortals. The difference between mortals and talents allows me to see how each supporting character shines, just like everyone in reality can shine in their own field, and it also allows me to see different truths.

Sometimes it feels okay, sometimes I feel that the author has put my IQ on the ground. How many years of life can be added by updating the advanced level? The story of his fellow countryman can also be added. It has been laid out in the past, and it seems to have disappeared. There is also joining the battlefield. I really want to know why they joined the battlefield to eliminate demons and defend the way. The protagonist has learned a lot, which gives me a feeling of being both powerful and incompetent. Those people in it have not learned as much as the protagonist, but they are better than the protagonist... Maybe it is depicting an ordinary person's path to immortality.

Let's talk about it, it's a very enjoyable book, and the author's writing style is not bad either, it's refreshing but not shocking. I can't stand it anymore after the first 200 chapters. I won't talk about the characters and emotional portrayals. I didn't rush into this if I read the text. It's mainly because it's too meaty. In the later stage, there are as many golden elixirs and golden bodies as dogs, and those without aura are kicked to death like roadside. In the early stage, it's special and rare to encounter in a thousand years. The physical geniuses were not very dazzling, and they were either kicked to death at will or found out. In the later period, even the "ordinary" great masters of all ages came. Those who have practiced to the tenth level of psychics are not the top geniuses. The supporting characters with top talents can kill enemies casually, and fight against ten at the same level. Purely brainless meat pigeons, they may look very exciting in the early stage, but they will become tired in the later stage. Thinking about the emergence realm and the ascension realm, as well as the upper realm and other big worlds, I chose to abandon the book directly [face covering] [face covering]