She's Not My Biological Sister, but She's Even Harder to Deal with Than My Biological Sister.

I saw Chapter 9. It's very interesting and realistic. Although we are not related by blood, I suddenly remembered that there was a female netizen who fell in love with her brother in the past. She was a single-parent family, her father was sick and hospitalized, and her brother also dropped out of school to work. It was double pressure, but she still insisted on confessing to her brother, but her brother slapped her. I think her brother is in great pain and may have collapsed because his sister likes him. My father is still in the hospital, and I would go crazy. What I want to say is that the author should have wanted to write a more realistic story about someone who dropped out of school to work. The eldest brother is like the father. Regardless of whether they are related by blood or not, it is actually difficult for a child raised by himself to fall in love with her. If the author suddenly wants to write about this kind of pseudo-orthopedics, I still hope that the writing process will be more difficult. You know, as the eldest brother, he is an adult. They are not sensible, but he must be sensible. This process of emotional shaping actually tests the author's writing skills.

The subject matter is quite good, but the emotional dialogue is too monotonous, and the dialogue between the protagonist and the two sisters is too repetitive. It would be nice if the sweet text could be sweeter. Come on! Great author! I wish you better and better as you write!

It's okay, but it's a bit confusing at the end. The writing is too concise, but I still like this setting.

It's quite interesting, but the author himself forgot about what he wrote before in some places.

Weird yet reasonable [thinking][thinking][thinking]