Dragon Clan: Retired Old Dragon Is Forced to Start a Business

5 Stars for the cover, and 5 more stars if the little monster is alive. Thank God that this book can include little monsters. Okay, after reading Chapter 17, he was attracted to Su Xiaoqiang. Okay, the Black King's character was suddenly pushed to the side of the road. It was boring.

Not bad, the Black King in this book is not the boss, but three brothers with Lu Mingfei, who are happy. As for the Black Emperor falling in love with Miss Su, I don't think it matters. After all, there are many female protagonists in the story, and the story is about happiness, so there is not so much character. Well, it would be nice if the heroine added Xia Mi [laughing evilly]

The protagonist is the Black King and this is the first time I've seen it [smile]. It's very deep and the character is vivid. My evaluation is that it fits the character. [Smile] If it's a female lead, I guess she's the heroine. [Laughs] Hopefully there won't be any knives. [Congratulations] Finally, author, you wrote very well! ! ! This Dragon Clan can also be ranked among the top 10 Dragon Clan books I have read, so keep up the good work, author! ! ! [Adoration] Wrong word, multiple heroines [face covering]

Ok, I've just read the latest chapter. Let's talk about the good and bad points. The subject matter is very novel and the character portrayal is okay. At present, it seems that except Odin's CS, the others are making dumplings for the reunion. Let's talk about the bad points. One is the description of the protagonist's character. It should be more reasonable. There are elderly people at home, especially those who have retired from the battlefield. Generally speaking, there are two extremes. One is extreme self-discipline, like the military schedule, and the other is extreme. How should I put it? Leisurely is a better word, but they all have one thing in common. They say it is seeing through, but I think it is actually indifference. It is the kind of person who has died once. But some of the author's writings are too superficial. There's nothing else. There are some author's topics for me (copy them) and cross them out for reference [shy][shy][shy]

Five stars out of five, this is the fanfic that sticks to the original work the best and understands the dragon clan the most that I have ever seen. The writing style has the lonely and burning flavor of Jiangnan. Lu Mingfei is still the same weak child, but he has grown armor through repeated struggles. Chu Zihang, Caesar, Xia Mi, Eri Yi... Every character stands upright. They are not OOC or forced to cheat, but they quietly make up for our difficulties one by one. The battle scenes are full of shots, and the emotions are delicate and heartbreaking. You can immediately break your defense after reading certain paragraphs. It's not just a fanfic, it's more like another gentle ending that we've been waiting for for a long time. Okay, okay, some of the plots in the back are a bit boring, so you can pick and choose.

So far, the writing is pretty good, one of the rare masterpieces among Dragon Clan fans [Sending my heart to you]

I've reached chapter 60. Overall, it's very interesting. The Black King feels right to me, but it's not perfect. Does it have too many emotions? Can't tell. Looks good, keep updating

It looks good, but the name of a real country appears in it. It feels like it might cause a thunderstorm. The author should change it. I really don't know what day it will be suddenly blocked [face covering] A very small number of the dragon clan accepted them all, and the White King accepted them all [laughter][laugh]

It still looks good. The cover of this book is the same as the cover of a book I have read before. That one was painted by a single female lead and Li Yi was very nice. Although this one has multiple girls, it is still nice. [Grief] I have read more than 60 chapters so far, and there are no bad points. I will add more in the future as to how it will change [OK] I made it [smile] and exited to take a look. How come I was given 13 hours of reading time? It's not that long, right? At most, I just felt uninterested. I read it several times. Why did you fuck me for so long? [Smile] But I have to say, brothers, it looks good [OK]

I think it's quite good-looking, and the subject matter is also very novel. Not to mention other platforms, this book is already in the top echelon of Dragon Clan fandom on Tomato.

After reading Dragon Clan and then reading the author's writing, I felt a bit deep. In fact, when the Black King was reborn, the emperor was already dead, and the only ones left were the courtiers struggling in pain. The regrets after reading Dragon Clan are somewhat compensated here, but some things cannot be made up for. There is a reason why Jiangnan was scolded [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] (don't hate it if you don't like it)

Author, author, does the heroine have Xia Mi [crying]

My Douluo Continent[cry][cry][cry]

I found a small amount of text among a large number of memes.

It was very well written. It was suspected that Jiang Nan came and executed him personally.

It's very interesting, the private content is reasonable, and the plot is humorous, but there's just too little of it.

Rated B. In fact, it's not bad, the main reason is that the imagination is not attractive.

Love to watch, love to watch, want to watch every day

Not bad, come on, author

When should I eat it?

It's beautiful, but it's a little bit dead.

What is the relationship between the protagonist and Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze? Is the protagonist the earliest black dragon? Why did he die? Did the protagonist travel through time?

My evaluation is that unofficial history may not be historical enough, but it must be wild enough. Anyway, except for the one written by Jiang Nan, which is not authentic, everything else can be authentic, and the evaluation is okay.

Good luck, just think of it as five points, so as not to be overwhelmed [you taste it carefully]

It looks good, I can't write a review, I can only say it looks good [makes a face] The appearance of this book shook the sky, and all the gods of online literature bowed down! Third Young Master burst into tears after reading it, Tudou was ashamed to throw away his pen, Chen Dong was silent and his heart ached, this book directly made him a god! The four major classics have been pushed aside, and in the 21st century it is said to be a fairy! The literary talent of Shengxu is a thousand years behind, the connotation of Fighting is half missing, the emotion of Zhuxian is not sweet enough, the imagination of Zhetian is a bit lacking, the layout of the Buddhist version is too simple, and this book was completely ignored once it was published! The first god of all time, Q, descends from the book, the ceiling of human civilization! Guanzhong Shi Naian slapped the case, Cheng En Xueqin was ashamed, Confucius, Mencius and Zhuang realized Taoism and Zen, Li Du and Su Xin put down their pens and sighed, Qin Emperor and Han Wu knelt in front of him, Tang Zong and Song Zu all surrendered, a generation of geniuses blushed, and gods all praised it! Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle knelt on the ground, Newton and Einstein were obsessed, and Hawking called him invincible! The sages of ancient and modern times are all autistic, and the great men at home and abroad all salute! The author's writing power reaches heaven and earth, his prose is like a god and an emperor, his style of Wei, Jin and Tang and Song Dynasties is strong, and every word is astonishing to heaven and earth! If you are lucky enough to see it in three lifetimes, you will be willing to reincarnate for eternity! The more I look at it, the more I feel sad and panicked. I am afraid that you will die and I will be heartbroken. I am afraid that if you don't watch, the sky will be dark. I am afraid that if you stop watching, I will go crazy! Hidden in the bookshelf for worship, it's hard to put down the excitement! For the sake of book lovers all over the world, I posted the book review all over the Internet, and I will support it! I'm crazy! Go all the way to unprecedented heights! As I walk through the sky and the earth, the sun shines brightly, and I ask you if this book is pleasant to you. Not cool enough! I am traveling in the world of rivers and lakes, and I want to ask you if this drama is cool? Not cool enough! I'm walking on the top of the mountain, clouds are floating in the sea, and I ask you whether this article is burning or not? Not burning enough! I'd like to ask if the update will be soon? Not fast enough! Not fast enough! Not fast enough! Few chapters! Content is slow! It makes my heart break to wait! The author is so good-looking, with a fairy-like appearance that sinks into the sky, and is so shameful that thousands of people fall to the moon. His elegance reaches the sky, his bright eyes and white teeth have a high temperament. He is naturally beautiful and hard to give up. He is so handsome and beautiful that no one can surpass him in ancient and modern times! I'm running out of words, I've had enough praise, I just want more quickly! Update soon! Update immediately! Don't stop for a second and keep rushing! If you urge me to update, my shouts will shake the stars. If I don't update, I will make a scene! Quick! Even! New! [Laugh][like]

After two days of chasing, I found the organization. We must organize 80 weddings for Jiangnan and Herzog, from Asia to America.

It's very, very beautiful. It's a masterpiece. I really like this style.

It's pretty good among the fanfics I've read. It's quite comfortable and good-looking.

The author writes very well, making the shriveled Eri plump up and making the lifeless Ye Sheng and Shude Aki come alive.

The content of this novel is beautiful, and the emotional description of the protagonist is also very detailed.