Bengtie: Returning from Izumo, I Traveled Across the Galaxy

Let me give myself a fair evaluation, because the update is indeed a bit slow, and there is nothing I can do about it. I have average writing skills, and it takes a lot of time to write good content~ Anyway, thank you readers for your support, thank you ☆˶> x <˶.⁺ What? Will the four-star recommendation be lowered? Real or fake? Then I am not committing suicide? ? ? A tonic, a tonic for something like this (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)

It's delicious. I personally think this novel should be mixed with No. 42 Concrete. Because of the amount of updates to this novel, it can easily directly affect Newton's Apple. When you read it, it will generate a lot of credits in an instant, commonly known as PPT. It will seriously affect the instructor's teaching. According to what you said, Dongfeng-41 is needed to light the alcohol lamp. After all, we cannot detect Einstein with wild linear algebra. If we continue to electroplate this holy relic with pioneering power, then sooner or later we will have to install an amino acid on Ompharos, otherwise we will not be able to change the wave-particle duality of the locust plague and currency war in the world. Because it is well known that readers often need to use the author as bait when hunting for Kun, but the freshness of Ultraman will directly affect the cold wave and typhoon of Belloberg, so it is obviously unreasonable to not update ten chapters a day.

(All evaluations are based on this part that I have read. The reference value is unknown, but let's take a look [eating melon]) After reading quite a few chapters, I can clearly feel that the author's writing style has made visible progress compared to the previous work. The emotional descriptions of the characters, the fighting scenes, and the interactions between the characters are all more delicate and smooth. It can be seen that a lot of thought has been put into polishing the plot. The original world view and character bonds are also very attractive. The personality control of the original characters fits the personality most of the time. The conflicts in the main line are well prepared. The atmosphere of crisis is well created. You can feel that there will be exciting drama in the follow-up of the story. But from the perspective of a fan sequel reader, there are a few small reading experiences, which are for the author's reference only. The first point is that the pace of the heroine's appearance is slow. As a sequel, new readers will default to expecting the core heroine to appear as soon as possible. If the heroine is not seen for a long time, it is easy to be discouraged from the opening chapter. Many fan readers come here for their favorite characters. If they are absent for a long time in the early stage, some readers will simply leave after reading a few chapters. The second point is the choice of highlights in the opening chapter. The basic traffic of the previous book is not high, which means that this book will have a large number of new readers who have never read the first book. The reading preferences of Tomato fandom readers tend to be light-hearted and enjoyable. Daily love affairs and interesting interactions between characters are very attractive. The main plot and the knife can be interspersed, but it is not recommended to lay out the heavy main plot directly at the beginning of the book. If the opening chapter lacks interesting famous scenes and sweet interactions that can retain people, it will be difficult to retain long-term readers, and it will be easy to abandon the book after seeing the excitement. The third point is a supplementary explanation of the original setting. I personally only started reading from Chapter 37. Many of the original concepts, special abilities, and past bonds of characters (Izumo, Yi Jing, etc.) Left over from the previous work. If the subsequent plot will be used frequently, it is recommended to make lightweight supplementary explanations. There is no need to pile up large paragraphs of setting explanatory text, just use character dialogues and action memories to go through it in bits and pieces. Otherwise, readers who get into the game halfway will easily become confused and cannot distinguish what is the original setting and what is the original content of the book. This is actually the most difficult thing to do. After all, it's really difficult to compress hundreds of chapters into a few thousand words, so I didn't choose to write a sequel at first. In addition, here is a little suggestion: A common problem with sequels is that everyone assumes that they have finished reading the previous book. Appropriate care can be taken of casual readers who have "never seen the previous work", and important character relationships can be briefly reviewed in one or two sentences. The fighting scenes are well written, but some funny jokes and bickering between the characters can be interspersed to adjust the rhythm. The tense fighting atmosphere will make you easily tired after reading for a long time. The overall story foundation is very good, and the bond between the characters is very moving. It is a story with great potential, and I will continue to follow up on the plot. Also, my reading time is actually quite long. This is the small size. Please be sure to use the large size @pillow floating light into my arms @ I looked at it and gave it a squeak. It may not be accurate, and it may not be easy to change, but I'd better say it. Do you need me to delete it? After all, they are all problems that may affect the book's ability to recruit new readers.

This has many more students than the previous one.

Continue to support labor

Don't know what to say? Let's have a bottle of sugar-free ice red—please give me a comment that you don't know, it looks good and there is no pressure. [Stunned]

Don't know who the heroine is?

Don't call me when you start a new book. I will be the reader of your first book after all.

You need to read this book with your brains in mind

I don't understand why you don't go to the company to find the Origin Stone [eating melon]