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After watching it for a while, the main character didn't have much of a role to play. I want to watch Trampling on the Back😡

Give the protagonist more scenes. After dozens of chapters, the protagonist has only appeared a few times. It seems nameless🔥 Author, you should know what readers clicked in to see. The whole process is full of nonsense and water, and you have to read it all. There are also very few scenes of the protagonist. There are more than 10 chapters in which the protagonist appears in more than 40 chapters? I don't even dare to think that if this happens in the future, then this book will just be like that.

I'll write the story separately first. I can't see Xiao Nanliang. It's so uncomfortable.

ZitCom agrees

For now, I see that Chapter 25 is well written, but the main character appears a little too little. Does your novel have realm divisions?