I Don't Have Any Superpowers but I Still Want to Fall in Love

Progress 103, good-looking, but not exciting enough. To be precise, it laid the groundwork for the ending of the story for a long time, but the sense of explosion and guidance given was insufficient. Just like the first volume, I thought that multiple events burst out together and finally contributed to something. I didn't expect that the core was to write about the transformation of the female lead. Maybe the scenes of the vixen and the reasoning girl were not enough. Anyway, I saw the transformation of the female lead. When I changed, I felt like "this guy's story has come to an end for the time being", and then the Taoist priest was introduced in the second volume. How should I put it, it was too bland and not refreshing at all, but the reading experience was very good, the story flowed very well, I was very interested in reading, and the character creation was very successful, but I hope it can give everyone a perfect ending. Life is so bitter, so the novel is here to sweeten it up.

I've read a lot of this type. The writing is pretty good so far. The female characters can be seen to have a lot of shadows of their predecessors. But as for the weekly rotation of super powers, you are relatively rare. After the rotation, the last super power disappears completely. As for the ability, the cool thing is that it has been reduced a lot. After reading Chapter 74, my evaluation is, what does it mean? But this is a tomato, just be happy

I have read 99, and I think the author can improve the mentality and logic of the protagonist. He is obviously a person in two lives, but when he returns to the young student days, he is still soft and soft, like a melancholy boy. He has some embarrassing complexes when facing girls and cannot explain clearly. A person who has lived two lives is still so weak. He was already 30 years old in the last life, and he still feels like a fifteen or sixteen year old. The author should think about the psychology of a middle-aged person. If you want to write a coming-of-age story about a young person, you shouldn't start by writing about the soul traveling through time at thirty. Since we have been reborn, we should be redeemed and healed, rather than redeemed and redeemed. The adult world does not need salvation. Being warmed by life and people is the greatest comfort. However, the author's content and world structure are very interesting and worth reading. The subject matter is innovative, and the content is plain but not lacking in taste. It's just that the psychological setting is a bit inconsistent. I hope the author will work hard and get better and better. I look forward to changes in the future. I give it a five-star rating and recommend everyone to read this book.

I read the latest chapter in one night, and although it has flaws, it's not bad. (After all, saving a poor student who wants to commit suicide is a tricky story in the novel world. If you don't write it well, it will be a poisonous point.) However, it seems that the author tried his best to write this story better, so it won't be too poisonous. This story tells that an ordinary person (really ordinary, without the height and appearance of the protagonist of the Internet article, and not a model), after having super powers, he did extraordinary things. As for the villain... Except for the heroine's father, the classic scumbag, no one else can be seen at the moment. More everyday style. Then, the protagonist uses his strength to make the heroine like him. (Although the current plot has not yet reached the point where the heroine falls in love with herself)

Rating: A! It is a work with great potential, but it is a pity that the number of words is too small. It can reach the level of A+ or even S in the future. The most important thing is that I personally feel that the author does not use AI or uses it very little, and it does not have that weird mechanical feeling.

I watched episode 75 of [Eating Melon], which seemed like an incident had come to an end. Then, reading the novel gave me a feeling like the anime "The Street Only Where You Are Not" [Chigua]. Of course, I just feel that I don't know if it is the kind of situation where the heroine gives birth to a child for another male partner [Chigua]. It seems to me that overall it feels a bit depressing, with only some interesting parts. I personally don't like this kind of depressing subject matter. After all, reality is so depressing and I still watch depressing things [eating melon]. But the writing is quite interesting and looks very good, so I gave it 4 points. But apart from commenting, I still think it might be more interesting for the author to develop more interesting abilities, or solidify some "super powers"? Of course it's just a suggestion. Overall, is it worth watching? I think it is worth watching. After all, it is well written. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

So pretty! ! ! ! Especially the part that redeems Yu Bai. Although Yu Bai's final transformation is a bit abrupt, it doesn't hurt. The novel is a pseudo-harem party struggle type (it should be), and the writing is good. If you like youth love-themed novels, you must not miss Kouya!

The author's writing style is okay. From my personal point of view, the article is a daily life article. The protagonist is a bad guy, but the good guy is a bit humble. And then I feel that the male protagonist is always easily seen through by the female protagonists. It may be due to the subject matter. The perception will be very frustrating. From the article, there is a feeling of being neither good nor inferior. If the male protagonist has special abilities Lidang Shuang is very frustrating to read. If you read it as a daily light-hearted novel, it is quite depressing and slightly dark at the beginning. The male protagonist also keeps teasing himself for showing off his depression, and then the female protagonists basically express it directly when they see through the protagonist. It feels a bit socially awkward, especially when they are all new acquaintances. But in general, the author's descriptions of emotions are quite delicate and can touch people. I hope the protagonist can grow more and not always be so weak in front of the heroine. Good luck to the author!

The author, on the whole, writes well. But I personally think that the plot arrangement at the end of the second volume is to attend the banquet, which is actually not very good. To be honest, I don't like the character Jiang Bianyu very much. Of course, this is not the author's fault, because this character was created by the author, and her character is actually not very likable. Well, to put it bluntly, most people actually like people who are sweet-tongued and polite. However, for the character Jiang Bianyu, her plot in the story has a very strong self-awareness, which makes her actually disgusted with this character. Because in daily life, when you communicate or get along with others, people who are self-centered are actually not very likable, because most such people will not consider the feelings of others. This is why I don't like the character Jiang Bianyu very much. Of course, I still have to emphasize that this is not the author's fault. This is how he was created when he created this character. It is like a villain in a book, disgusting and annoying, which just means that the villain has been successfully created (the above is my personal interpretation of this character) The reason why I don't like the plot of this banquet very much is that there is no reversal. The following is my personal understanding: The main reason is that the story does not break away from the reader's thinking. According to normal logic, the plot of the story is just like what the author said in the novel. It must be a show-off, but the author arranged that the protagonist gave up the task and did not enter this. It was a plot, but it did not make me or other readers feel surprised or reversal. Instead, it was a very normal story logic, which means that it is actually not new when reading it. I don't know if everyone can understand what I said. To put it simply, from the reader's perspective, it did not make the reader feel like "Wow, this is the plot" or "I didn't expect it." Because it can be seen how the author arranges the next step. When a play is not finished, the audience below can know the ending of the play. No matter how good the play is, it is just an ordinary work, and the author wants to create a protagonist who is free from the control of fate. But in this whole plot, I think the protagonist He has always been controlled by Jiang Bianyu. It seems that the choice given by Jiang Bianyu, but the protagonist can only make the choice that Jiang Bianyu wants. I personally think that the author wants to create a chaotic protagonist who is not controlled by fate, but I don't feel it. I only feel that the protagonist is still affected by the author's outline. Following the author's outline, there are no other branches, so the impression is actually not very good. I gave the author five stars, of course, not for the plot, but because the character of the protagonist is very well portrayed. I don't know if the author has watched "Sea Tiger" (not ky, just to give an example). In this work, the characters in it can break their own destiny when their strength reaches a certain level. However, those who reach this level are all strong, and the character of the strong determines their destiny. This is the case, and the same is true for their endings. It seems that they have shattered their destiny, but they finally reached the fateful ending. The same is true for the protagonist in the article. The protagonist wants to make his own choices and does not want to be pushed by fate. However, his character determines that he will be pushed by fate, will be forced to make choices, and will be dragged into the quagmire. To be honest, it reminds me of Kamijou Touma, the protagonist in "The Forbidden Kingdom". His fate and story are also affected by his character, but his saintly qualities are also very popular with me. Sometimes I think in my heart, if Touma had not experienced it, what would he have done? How good these are, because I feel sorry for this character, but we cannot put the cart before the horse and the suffering he has endured. It is the suffering he has endured and the qualities he has shown that are the reasons why I like him. It is not that we know his qualities from the beginning and feel unworthy for him. I feel sad for the protagonist in the article. It seems that many people like him and has many legendary experiences, but is it really what he wants? This may be the reason for the low rating of this work. The protagonist succeeds and the protagonist fails. My love for the protagonist is not as good as Kamijou. Of course, they are characters from two different works. It is very unfair to compare them together. I only compare their actions here. To do a breakdown, because Kamijou is a very pure person, his thoughts and actions are consistent, but the protagonist is not. The protagonist made a subconscious reaction because of his character in action, but his thoughts are confused, and he did not recognize his own situation, which led to the reading. From a reader's perspective, I feel that the protagonist is "being manipulated", which simply makes people feel uncomfortable. Of course, this is not a cool article, but it also emphasizes an issue. In more than 200 chapters, the protagonist has not grown up at all. He is pushed forward, even in the latest chapter I saw, Chapter 280 , the actions that the organization seems to have taken are also decisions that were forced into a desperate situation and were not taken by him on his own initiative. So again, his character led to this result, but in this era, most people don't like this character. To put it harshly, he is a bit literary.

I have finished reading it, and I personally feel that this book is quite good. Mainly because after reading too many stereotyped routines, I finally felt like a bittersweet person after reading this book. However, this book also has its own shortcomings. The first is the climax of each chapter. It may be that the description is not enough, or the writing power is insufficient. I personally feel a bit rusty or Anyway, it feels a bit weird to be empty, but the author's daily descriptions are actually very good, and in terms of emotions, it finally doesn't feel like a set love. After reading a lot of urban articles, I feel that the emotional scenes in them are like playing, because the male and female protagonists don't have too much interaction, and the author has to make up his mind here and here. , Just like the evidence, it shows you that they both like each other, which makes me sick. But in this book, when I saw the male protagonist and Yu Bai approaching step by step, I really felt throbbing. Another highlight of this book is that it brings people to life. I can really clearly feel the personality traits of the main characters. The most important thing is The thing is, you can't just feel the setting. In many books, one character has a setting. This character is as if he is destined to die. The author does not describe it very carefully and just mentions a few sentences related to the setting. But people are complicated, and this book can clearly feel the vitality of the character, and finally it does not feel like a dead person. Save time: This book has two major highlights. One is the extremely delicate emotional description. On the contrary, this also results in the emotional line being pushed very slowly. The other is the vivid character creation. These two points are also the reasons why I read this book. This book also has quite a few shortcomings, but I personally feel that it is not satisfying enough, or if there is no Having considered the above two points, it's easy to get turned off by a long article that doesn't have any interesting points. In fact, the author can put more effort into emotions and regard this as one of the enjoyable points. There is no need to push it too fast and let the readers get it. I will continue to read this book. In the end, Yu Baiqianfei and the others, I am optimistic about you.

To be honest, when I should release my emotions, I didn't, just like Cun Zhi, my throat got stuck. When it is time to be a literary person, it is not enough, and when it is not supposed to be, it is not enough. The Japanese male protagonist is a big challenge. But I'm still willing to give it a good review. There are advantages and disadvantages. There are a lot of differences in some places. It may be due to writing skills. The subject matter is good and I have to write more to practice my writing skills.

A stream of fresh air on tomatoes O_o The description of the characters is delicate, the description of the environment is unique, and the plot lacks many highlights. The male protagonist's motivation is slightly lacking, and the female protagonist's image is not three-dimensional enough, but it is real and moving enough. The plot has not yet unfolded. It is conceivable that the follow-up will only become more and more interesting. The excitement is to be continued, so stay tuned.

The writing is very good, and there is an inexplicable, uh, how should I put it? A style of writing unique to an author? Or what? Anyway, it's just a feeling. Anyway, this book is well written.

The pace is slow, and the author will suppress the combat power. After all, the combat power increases too fast and it may be difficult to control. It is a relatively detailed novel. If you like a slow pace, you can give it a try. It's not very satisfying, but the combat power gradually increases in an orderly manner.

It's very well written and feels like a green pig. I hope the author will continue to work hard! I've been so wet lately. I rely on suggestions to have an orgasm.

By the way, the setting is adapted from "My Super Power Refreshed Every Week" by Snow Cake Dada next door. The introduction is also a bit imitated. Except for the heroine Kiyono and Kujo who are a bit imitated by "My Girlfriend is a Bad Lady" by the crow master next door, the rest are all written by myself. The actual plot and all aspects of the content are all written by myself. Some of the plot sources in it are imitated. I have said that there is no such thing as copying. (Because there have been too many voices about plagiarism recently, it seems like there is going to be a war. Don't wait for a wave to come over and I will die)

The plot and character settings are quite interesting [Like]

Personally, I feel that this novel is a bit bland and everyday. The advantage is that it does not have too many poisonous points or flaws. Now that I have seen it, the biggest feeling is that there are too many repetitive descriptions (words such as smile, helplessness, and dazzling depression appear repeatedly) and there is no need to write down some insignificant plots in too much detail. Of course, the above are just suggestions based on my personal feelings, which are a bit subjective. The author please forgive me.

It is an excellent urban imagination novel. There is a lot of room for creation. If the author opens his mind a little more and expands his thinking, the plot alone is a novel worth paying attention to, regardless of writing style or literary youth. Tomato has too few novels on the theme of urban imagination. I hope the author will expand his world view and open his imagination, and the plot will be more exciting and perfect [Like][Like][Like] But the main problem is the system. There are obviously many things that can be replaced, such as golden fingers and so on. The system is still too old. It is as old as putting lotus birthday candles on a cake.

It looks good. Is it some kind of boss's vest?

No, dude, it really made my blood pressure rise [face covering]

It's good-looking, with delicate daily writing and super-power settings, giving it a Japanese-style male pig's feet feel.

I love to see the author come on

When to train Jiang You, when to ccb

Interesting. Let's see how the follow-up world view setting looks like...

It looks pretty, but many types of tomatoes are not popular, which is a pity.

I think it's okay. I prefer this type of subject matter. I would like to give the author some encouragement [like]

Six stars. I have read dozens of chapters. This book is more like a light novel. The author's emotional description is very good, with a sense of youthful youth. The protagonist's inner feelings, confusion and helplessness are completely written out. This book is acceptable on Tomato, but it is not mainstream. The author can check it out on platforms that focus on light novels. Of course, Tomato is more suitable for novices.

Why are there so few scenes for Yu Bai recently? I feel like the female lead has even fewer scenes than Chu Yaoyao.

Don't take up too much space when writing characters like good brothers in harem novels