My Heartthrob Landlord: After the Cold Beauty Came to Reclaim Her Apartment

I've finished reading the current number of chapters, and I feel it's okay so far. The setting of the two half-sisters is a bit cool, and the Mohist plot is a bit classic, so there's nothing wrong with it. There is nothing greasy or awkward in the plot dialogue, and there are not many obvious logical flaws in the reading. The most prominent problem at present is that there are too many female protagonists and the characters are repeated. The characters appear too quickly. The two sisters in the front have not yet become familiar with the protagonist, and the latter ones appear again. This book currently reads as having great potential with multiple female protagonists. I hope the author can stick to it.

The cute little shot [licking the screen] [licking the screen] sister is also portrayed very well. There is the silly sister, the bitch sister, the lively sister, and the tsundere [lick screen] [lick screen]

It's very nice and heartwarming. There's no particularly blunt plot about Pretend 13 and Dalian. The emotional line was picked up quickly and is relatively solid. It seems that the author is planning to write a full-length novel. If it is of this quality in the future, I can follow it.

It's great and I love reading it. There are too few authors!!! The alias of this book is "The Anecdotes of Young Shota and Big Sisters" (bushi) It's quite interesting. The young protagonist with a tragic life experience meets the creditor and the older sister protects her food. The pace is moderate and the daily articles updated twice a day are not bad. As of August 17th, there are 7 sisters in total. In the simplest, most straightforward, and least roundabout way of saying it, it's the finest large cup of prefecture-level grain.

I feel that the emotional foreshadowing is okay, such as promoting the relationship with my sister after dropping out of school, otherwise the emotional development of going to school every day will be very abrupt. But female characters come out too quickly, just like the illegitimate daughter of the Mo family who develops feelings too quickly. There are also the Yan sisters and the Bai sisters that can be said to come one after another. If the main line in the early stage is the emotional advancement of Sister Bai and the protagonist, in fact, the Yan sisters don't need to be in a hurry to appear, or not all appear. Too many female characters will make the novel look like a harem toilet paper. Emm hopes that the author can handle the appearance of the characters and the advancement of emotions well in the future. I feel that the author should want to write a step-by-step emotion.

Although I have only read about twenty chapters so far, it is really healing. I am about to ascend 😄. Moreover, the male protagonist is really cute. The author writes it very well. Please be sure to keep writing it.

I can barely tell the difference between male and female, but if I dress up as a woman, it will make me more delicate and weak. Why don't I just change gender and become a girl? It's boring.

It is an inventory of the stories between the 13-year-old young lady and her seven different sisters (bushi). It is very well written. I am worried about whether the author's subsequent adult plot can support the structure of seven female protagonists. If it can continue to be as good as it is now, this book will be rated as a 9 out of 10. There are few poisonous points. The part about meeting the vicious relatives can be omitted. It is used to promote the plot. It will not affect the omission. The other content is well written. It is recommended to watch [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

It's a god among gods, but some of the settings are a bit classic. Overall, it's very good. It's great to read the latest chapter in one breath. I personally think it's a masterpiece among Red Persimmons. [Sending my heart] Keep up the good work, the author of the sweet article is really great 😳

Not bad, except for one thing that is unreasonable, that is, as a child, why does the protagonist live alone without an adult to take care of him? If he had no relatives, he should go to an orphanage. It is impossible for him to live alone. If the author can handle this well later, I think it will be a good book.