Zhuo Zhao Yu Hui

It's great, but the writing is still a bit harsh. It was very uncomfortable when I read Chapter 58. The more I read it, the more uncomfortable it became. I thought it was a sweet story. The author obviously said at the beginning that he looked down on sadomasochism stories, but the result is still that I don't know why there are so many plots between the original male protagonist and the female protagonist. It's just disgusting.

The savior of the book world, a very novel theme, I didn't expect that the male protagonist actually traveled through time [laughing] The two of them are also very bitter but very warm. I look forward to the following plot where the male protagonist becomes the best in the world again, the female protagonist is in good health, and her magic skills are improved to a higher level. The two of them have a beautiful and sweet harmony [Cool]

Both the female protagonist and the male protagonist are pretty good, but I hope the male protagonist will develop in the direction of a female channel puppy. Now he looks like the male channel Long Aotian, who is easily embarrassed. But other aspects are good, especially the female protagonist. She is a sane and sober princess in the world.

Not bad, the writing is delicate, is it considered that women are strong and men are weak? But it's innocuous, it's pretty good-looking. Having said that, the writing is really good, and the male and female protagonists are well portrayed. There are some details that are not found in other books. It's a very good book.

The plot is reasonable and the writing is excellent. Come on!

Very interesting novel

Very beautiful, the male and female characters are very good

The writing is good, the plot is good, and the characters are good. I have nothing to say and I will watch it all.

The writing is okay, the character of the male protagonist is well portrayed, and the language is used well to express the character.

The writing is awesome, the subject matter is very novel, and the description of ancient costumes is very realistic. It is really an undiscovered gem. It's just a pity. The world view is very grand, but it ended after only writing a hundred chapters. I've finished reading it. It's really well written. The content is complete and there's nothing poisonous about it. The description is beautiful and the subject matter is novel. I'm looking forward to similar new works. I really like this kind of fresh and ancient articles.

What I must say is that the world view is very unique, the writing is exquisite, the male and female protagonists get married first and then fall in love, the relationship is sincere and touching, and it is very beautiful to watch.