Naruto's Destiny Has Its Eyes on Me.

So far, the writing is really good. The plot is more delicate and smooth. Being able to see the shadow of the original plot has awakened my memory of watching Naruto. I hope the author can keep updating. The author also added character drawings at the end of the novel chapters! What a surprise!

She is a very gentle, growth-oriented heroine, very kind, a little too kind. But the subject matter is quite novel, I'm looking forward to finishing it But the content of the plot gave me a suffocating feeling. I don't know how to describe it. It's probably like a ball of air stuck in my throat. It's a bit em.

So beautiful! I was initially attracted to the show by the beautiful bandaged heroine on the cover. When I saw the heroine starting to take the Sakura PRO route, Sakura became a streetwalker... And a little bit more. What supported me to continue watching was that the heroine saved Bai. (I read the manga when I was 13 years old. It's been almost 20 years now and I can still remember how heartbroken I cried.) After entering Akatsuki, I became even more interested in it. So pretty! ! ! It feels like the heroine has truly broken away from the original work and found her own path! Especially the fireworks display, wow wow, on the surface it's a company team building but it's actually a birthday party for the heroine. It's a group favorite, it's so sweet. I really want to make fun of the heroine and the ferret. The heroine, a cute and charming villain, is paired with a gentle little brother and a guiding lover. Author, could you please add two more people to the cover? Love it, love it ~ [blowing kiss]

My dear Feng Feng, this novel is also written very well by Claes. The rhythm of this novel is that of a long and steady flow, and the writing is also very delicate and beautiful. I also enjoyed reading it very much. I hope the author can update it faster

The heroine has taken the position of Sakura, but her personality is significantly different. The plot is a bit more ruthless than the original work, with one against seven becoming an existence similar to Orochimaru versus Sasuke. I just hope that Naruto and Sasuke, who will suffer a greater blow and have stronger training motivation, can only exert stronger power than the original. Otherwise the heroine is using the big spiral wheel, and Naruto can only make ordinary balls, then the gap is too big.

Very beautiful and delicate. The heroine knew the plot but couldn't tell it and couldn't change it, so she wanted to be a passerby silently, but she was discovered to be unique and was roped into the protagonist group. Then while getting along with everyone, we redeemed each other, understood each other, helped each other grow, and slowly changed our minds and began to integrate into the world. Also, as expected, I love to watch it whenever the vest is removed and the power is turned on~(¯▽¯~) (This refers to the heroine taking the initiative to reveal her Uchiha bloodline and open the Sharingan)

Not bad, the psychological growth of the characters is written in quite detail. The front part is similar to the original work, but the back part has its own ideas. [Original Party] Currently, Sasuke is the one with the most romantic scenes. I feel that Naruto is a friend-oriented character, and his character is not OOC at all. I haven't watched Naruto for many years, and I fell in love with him again. Sasuke's contrasting character of being arrogant and fearful of being alone is so cute. I love him so much [laughs] The growth of the heroine is really visible to the naked eye. It feels like she has transformed this world from Living here as a script becomes real, having my own feelings and dreams, thinking that I am a little transparent, but actually shining in the eyes of others [Like] There is also the previous plot of the heroine helping Xiao Li when he was a child, which is simply a stroke of genius. After reading so many fan stories, someone finally takes Xiao Li seriously. Youth is like blood!

The author is very attentive, and I was quite pleasantly surprised when I saw the accompanying pictures between chapters.

It's pretty good to watch. The plot is still the same. There's basically no oo c in the characters. It's just that the emotions feel a bit slow, but it's pretty good. However, the emotional changes of the heroine at the beginning are a bit complicated and I don't understand it. I hope it will get better in the future.

This is the only Naruto article that I have read. It is very interesting, but it has not been updated recently. I am still waiting for the sandwich cookies. I look forward to coming back for more updates [Sending my heart]

580,000 Words are being serialized. The plot is watchable, neither particularly good nor particularly bad. So far, due to the "self-correction" of the plot, most of the main lines follow the original work, which is more suitable for people who have not read the original work (probably) The author's writing skills are lacking, but he wrote everything he wanted to write (which is more to my liking), it's not too embarrassing, and he can illustrate it with pictures, so it's pretty good. I really want to see the plot development later.

Is it written about the Konoha version of Burning Winter? [Laughing]

It's so good, super good, every chapter is written based on the plot of Naruto's original work, I feel like I haven't skipped any plot [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Come on, good-looking author. Although the main character's mother is a little bit toxic. From crying all day long to being wanton and public, the image creation is quite messy. It's very interesting, author, and the pitfalls have been filled in. Come on, come on, my wisdom teeth are gone, brother.

I really like this book. Although everyone's hoarse voice has been polished with sandpaper, I think the character settings in it are very delicious. The heroine is awesome. The heroine is right. Sasuke is right [licking the screen]. Naruto is right. What I like most is the interaction between the heroine and Sasuke [admiration]. It's so delicious. I like the heroine who gradually becomes stronger [blowing kiss]

Oh my god [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart], I have read so many Naruto fanfics, it is really rare to see such original plot, it is really eye-catching [adoration][adoration][adoration]

The story is still the same, it blends in quite naturally, and it still has emotions.

What a delicious article... Because I haven't watched the original anime, I usually can't get enough of Naruto fanfics after reading them for a while. This article made me unable to stop watching it. The author is also very thoughtful, and several chapters are illustrated with pictures. By the way, Sasuke and Naruto's sandwich tastes so good, hey, I'm looking forward to the love story in the future [Adoration]

I can watch it. Maybe I've watched too many Naruto movies and it's not that amazing.

What the teacher wrote is so good, come on! ₍ᐢ‥ᐢ₎ ♡ I hope the teacher will keep writing and never stop updating! ! !

It's very beautiful. Mirror Moon is being changed little by little. Action is more important than anything else. I especially like the current Team 7. Great support for the author.

The author is very attentive. Not only the plot is well written, but also some pictures made by himself. The scenes of the heroine are very immersive. I feel like I am reading the novel while having anime playing in my head. It is really beautiful. I highly recommend it!

It's super interesting. The protagonist blends in very naturally. The characterization and emotional description are also very delicate. I've read Chapter 126 so far. I can't help but comment. I hope that the plot can be maintained and that as I grow up, my combat power will not collapse.

Super invincible and very beautiful! ! ! ! There is a small problem. According to the plot structure of the original work and the plot lines revealed later, Danzo was dismissed by the third generation after the Uchiha genocide, and his roots were disbanded (the reason was actually because of corruption of the Sharingan, but Obito, who played Madara, and Itachi cooperated to annihilate the genocide. When financing Sharingan, Obito basically took away all the Sharingan. As a result, Danzo basically did not get high-quality Sharingan during subsequent cleaning of the battlefield. After Shippuden, the two Hokage advisors saw that they had been assisting Tsunade for more than two years, so they asked Danzo to come out.) So there is actually no need to worry during the Chuunin Exam, but most people who write Naruto fanfics don't seem to know the details of this setting. I will add it here to the author, hoping it can be used. (If the author needs Naruto's comics and the details of the original settings, I can help the author find them, right?)

I look forward to the heroine's strength growing, the Uchiha clan is very strong.

It is wonderful, the ceiling of Naruto fandom, the detailed logical psychological description is very good, it can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into studying the original work.

It's so beautiful, I support the author greatly [blowing kiss]

Good-looking, good-looking, like it

Why doesn't the author update? I thought it was ruined

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking