Doomsday Corridor Bloody Rebirth

How can I put it, the overall reading experience is pretty good 1. There is a little too much emotional description, and a single chapter is too long... 2. The feeling of upgrading from killing monsters is not obvious, and there is no sense of improvement in level grading. You have a complete set of upgrade routes in your brain, and what level you can do, but the reader has a poor sense of reality... 3. There are 2 teammates in the third chapter. Normally, it feels like this. Doomsday + infinite + system and group portrait. Multiple teammates will dilute the fun. You see, those who are popular in the circle almost always write solo + system for a period of time and then join the team when they feel better. If you add 2 in one go, you will be confused when you fight Bone Dragon later... This is not easy to change. If this is a long novel of 1.5 Million words or more, then it would be fine if the overall story length can support the protagonist and supporting characters of the entire book. The problem is that few authors can persevere without many people reading it.

"The Corridor of Finality" is full of infinite pleasure in rebirth! When the end of the world arrives in 2242, mankind falls into an irregular parallel purgatory, and betrayal and killing become the norm. Lin Wei and Chen Mo are reborn in the novice world with their full-level memories and bloody feuds from their previous lives. They use their absolute experience to crush powerful enemies and plot revenge. They restart their journey in the bloody corridors of all villains. The rhythm is tight and cruel, and the adrenaline is soaring.

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