Fang Lin was reborn as a fat insect wandering in the void, his race was: Dungeon
After breaking out of his shell, he wandered in the void for many years. Now, Fang Lin has finally escaped from his infancy and is about to start building his own dungeon.
And using his talent: wormhole, he began to connect various worlds and attract all kinds of life to provide him with spiritual energy to grow.
Thumbs up for the creativity, keep writing, there will be more trouble. Also, the twist in the second volume is a little quick.
I read the new chapters, and the more I read, the less interested I became. The focus should be on dungeons. Why did the second volume suddenly include a fanfic about the Condor Shooting? I just wrote about how you are connected with the people in the Condor World who entered the dungeon in the previous article. The people who went to the dungeon during the Condor War did not have a role. It would be better to write more about other worlds connecting the dungeon, or about the development in the dungeon, the exploration of strange objects in the void, and the impact of the strange objects on hand on the development of the dungeon. The first volume has a total of more than 20 chapters, and the second volume has almost 10 chapters and is not connected with the previous article. It feels like you have almost finished the second volume and it has nothing to do with the dungeon you wrote, which seems particularly disconnected. It's better to get rid of the division of your volume. I've read a lot of books, but I haven't seen any good books. The books are divided into volumes with more than ten or twenty chapters. At most, they are divided into volumes when the combat power reaches the upper limit and the maps are changed.
How about the dungeon? Why did you become a fan of the Condor Shooting?
No, shouldn't you be a farming person? Why did the second volume become a Condor Shooting fanfic?
I think it is very well written. Previous dungeon novels were more like Western fantasy and there are other dungeon novels. The idea of this novel is dungeon, but behind the scenes. I like to read behind-the-scenes novels. The development of the dungeon affects the development of the martial arts world, which is very interesting and creative. I suggest the author add "behind-the-scenes flow" in the tag. If you like behind-the-scenes flow, Ji Xian Farming flow, and Bankai flow, this book is worth reading.
It's a very good Condor Shooting fanfic, but it doesn't have any dungeons at all. Whose Dungeon Enters the Army feels more like a farming style because it doesn't have the so-called dungeon adventure feeling at all.
It's not bad. Although the writing about the Condor is almost wrong, but overall it's okay. I look forward to the collision of many worlds in the dungeon in the future.
I am still more courageous. If you don't have any inspiration, just go to AI and think about it.
Just write your own, and everyone who can persevere will support you.
Evaluate it. Write about the race in the dungeon.
It's very good. It writes about many worlds. I prefer to watch the characters who shoot the vultures.
Thumbs up for the creativity, keep writing, there will be more trouble. Also, the twist in the second volume is a little quick. I read the new chapters, and the more I read, the less interested I became. The focus should be on dungeons. Why did the second volume suddenly include a fanfic about the Condor Shooting? I just wrote about how you are connected with the people in the Condor World who entered the dungeon in the previous article. The people who went to the dungeon during the Condor War did not have a role. It would be better to write more about other worlds connecting the dungeon, or about the development in the dungeon, the exploration of strange objects in the void, and the impact of the strange objects on hand on the development of the dungeon. The first volume has a total of more than 20 chapters, and the second volume has almost 10 chapters and is not connected with the previous article. It feels like you have almost finished the second volume and it has nothing to do with the dungeon you wrote, which seems particularly disconnected. It's better to get rid of the division of your volume. I've read a lot of books, but I haven't seen any good books. The books are divided into volumes with more than ten or twenty chapters. At most, they are divided into volumes when the combat power reaches the upper limit and the maps are changed.
How about the dungeon? Why did you become a fan of the Condor Shooting?
No, shouldn't you be a farming person? Why did the second volume become a Condor Shooting fanfic?
I think it is very well written. Previous dungeon novels were more like Western fantasy and there are other dungeon novels. The idea of this novel is dungeon, but behind the scenes. I like to read behind-the-scenes novels. The development of the dungeon affects the development of the martial arts world, which is very interesting and creative. I suggest the author add "behind-the-scenes flow" in the tag. If you like behind-the-scenes flow, Ji Xian Farming flow, and Bankai flow, this book is worth reading.
It's a very good Condor Shooting fanfic, but it doesn't have any dungeons at all. Whose Dungeon Enters the Army feels more like a farming style because it doesn't have the so-called dungeon adventure feeling at all.
It's not bad. Although the writing about the Condor is almost wrong, but overall it's okay. I look forward to the collision of many worlds in the dungeon in the future.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
I am still more courageous. If you don't have any inspiration, just go to AI and think about it. Just write your own, and everyone who can persevere will support you.
Evaluate it. Write about the race in the dungeon.
It's very good. It writes about many worlds. I prefer to watch the characters who shoot the vultures.