I Invite People from All over the World to Enter the Dungeon

Thumbs up for the creativity, keep writing, there will be more trouble. Also, the twist in the second volume is a little quick. I read the new chapters, and the more I read, the less interested I became. The focus should be on dungeons. Why did the second volume suddenly include a fanfic about the Condor Archery? Just write about how you are connected with the people in the Condor World who entered the dungeon in the previous article. The people who went to the dungeon during the Condor War did not have a role. It would be better to write more about connecting other worlds to the dungeon, or about the development in the dungeon, the exploration of strange objects in the void, and the impact of the magical objects on hand on the development of the dungeon. The first volume has a total of more than 20 chapters, and the second volume has almost 10 chapters and is not connected with the previous article. It feels like you have almost finished the second volume and it has nothing to do with the dungeon you wrote, which seems particularly disconnected. It's better to get rid of the division of your volume. I've read a lot of books, but I haven't seen any good books. The books are divided into volumes with more than ten or twenty chapters. At most, they are divided into volumes when the combat power reaches the upper limit and the maps are changed.

How about the dungeon? Why did you become a fan of the Condor Shooting?

I think it is very well written. Previous dungeon novels were more like Western fantasy and there are other dungeon novels. The idea of ​​this novel is dungeon, but behind the scenes. I like to read behind-the-scenes novels. The development of the dungeon affects the development of the martial arts world, which is very interesting and creative. I suggest the author add "behind-the-scenes flow" in the tag. If you like behind-the-scenes flow, Ji Xian Farming flow, and Bankai flow, this book is worth reading.

No, shouldn't you be a farming person? Why did the second volume become a Condor Shooting fanfic?

It's a very good Condor Shooting fanfic, but it doesn't have any dungeons at all. Whose Dungeon Enters the Army feels more like a farming style because it doesn't have the so-called dungeon adventure feeling at all.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's not bad. Although the writing about the Condor is almost wrong, but overall it's okay. I look forward to the collision of many worlds in the dungeon in the future.

Evaluate it. Write about the race in the dungeon.

I am still more courageous. If you don't have any inspiration, just go to AI and think about it. Just write your own, and everyone who can persevere will support you.

A rare good book by Tomato Write more about the development of dungeons and about fighting monsters with chicken feathers

Or maybe this is your first time reading this type of book. I think it's quite interesting, but I feel like the updates are too slow.

Very unique, come on, come on, come on