Little Mary: the Great Reversal of the Sun and Moon Dynasty

As a pony fan with a literary bent, I can see that the author's writing style is relatively immature, but he should have listened well to the lectures in school and used a lot of writing techniques. Personally, I don't like reading this kind of novels. It has nothing to do with whether I like it or not, but reading novels is a way of escaping reality. Reading this type of novel can easily remind me of the bad things in reality, but the author's writing is pretty good, but I prefer some mindless plots.

The writing is very good, I gave it a five-star rating [heartfelt]

It's very beautiful and well written. I feel cold when I look at it.

Let the songs that no one sings sing again. Write a new chapter for the story that has been forgotten by history. A noble and pure soul embarks on a journey. I think it's quite suitable

After reading it for a long time, it turned out that you wrote about black gays. Can I see the good times?

The author wrote so well! But it's also a real sword [almost crying]

It was wonderfully written, but it was all about knives and I kept crying. Why don't you say that the heroine is the moon princess? ? ? ? ? I thought I was pursuing it because I didn't have CP. At first, I thought the Moon Princess and the protagonist were just a family member. However, after the protagonist was sealed, the relationship immediately deteriorated after the seal was broken. I really wanted to curse! There is a heroine but no standard, and the writing style in the later period also becomes literate. It doesn't look like it was written by one person, which is concise and clear, but the latter often has long and long descriptions that make my eyes hurt to read!

The characters and plots are well written. The first few chapters of the main plot were a bit confusing. I look forward to the beginning of the main plot.

All I can say is that your writing style is really good, and it's good to read. I'll give you a five-star rating.

Very well written! Reading this book reminded me of my childhood watching My Little Pony!

What is the significance of setting up the role of Dr. Zhu? If Dr. Zhu corresponds to an anime, who does he look like? What is the original world of the protagonist?

Give yourself one first

Hey hey hey hey hey

Very nice \(//∇//)\ but a little lacking

The author remembers to come back and update

I can't tell you how I feel, but I'll give it a five-star rating.

If you send out knives again, I, I... I will give you a 5-star rating [laughing]

I saw the figure of an old friend

I quite like it. This kind of book is rare.

This is my best book so far

Very beautiful and very delicious😄

The good-looking Xiao Mawen finally has a good one.

The teacher's writing is very good and beautiful, and I'm starting to look forward to the plot after the seal is unlocked.

Author, some of your paragraphs are too long

Come on author, it's so beautiful

A rare and excellent work, but the rating is too low. It's great that the author didn't skip the protagonist's childhood growth experience. Many works lack plots of interaction and growth with relatives, resulting in the relationship between the protagonist and relatives being too fake and fake, like a loft in the sky. The part where the protagonist is king involves politics doesn't feel very good, and the political content should be reduced.