The Great British Messenger: Chihaya Aine!

The author has a good grasp of the characteristics of different literary works. He integrates it well with the original text, and the psychological description is dry enough. [Like] It's a good book. I can't wait to see the follow-up plot.

I like this book very much, especially the setting. The characters are all witnessed and developed due to their experiences. Come on, author, I want to see "living" people who are not restricted by the world view of Girls Band, not so-called characters.

So far, the most enjoyable part of watching Ai Yin's time travel battle is the confrontation between Xiangzi and the detective. The writing is very delicate, but I feel like there are some shortcomings...

The level is completely worthy of five stars! The writing method of combining narrative and discussion is already very mature. Although the story of Teacher Daxiang is still unfinished, the perspective is switched to the battle of Aiyin, but it does not affect the level of this work. Whether it is a tribute to Lao She's original work or an organic integration of the girl band, they are all handled very harmoniously in one work. In terms of character creation, it can be three-dimensional and full. Whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, it can show two sides that seem to be contradictory but actually unified. Their behavioral motivations do not deviate from the original work (no OOC). While narrating the story, it also brings thoughts about social issues, making the story meaningful and educational. It belongs to the "big guarantee" type among fan fiction. I hope that this book can be completed successfully, and the author should continue his efforts and not let down the ardent expectations of our readers. Renew! Come on! Of course, quality assurance~ Personal support from Prison Cat!

It's a pleasant read and deserves a five-star rating. The overall score is at least 8 or above. I don't know if I wrote the first part using AI or by myself. Very original. I personally haven't watched the anime, so I can't comment on the behavior of the heroine Toyokawa Shoko.

We don't talk about the lack of people, we talk about the lack of people We don't talk about hard work, we talk about hesitation We don't say match-fixing, we say we can't keep them We don't talk about the abuse of springs, we talk about the upper road We don't talk about losing streak, we talk about 26 We don't talk about torture, we talk about 5408 We don't talk about reinforcements, we talk about 32 We don't say surrender, we say run wolf We don't say failure, we say hiding We don't talk about scientific research, we talk about sheep's horns We don't talk about rotation, we talk about Jiuzhe We don't talk about enemies, we talk about good brothers for life [call]

That's good, but in the end, is it mainly from Shoko's perspective to introduce other girl bands, or is it separate that Shoko is the first one?

I want to ask, is Xiangzi still the same from his own perspective?

The author rates it himself and thinks the writing is pretty good, but there are still some regrets in the plot. I hope readers like it!

A very good band story, and the time travel during World War I is very much like the original "1917". It is recommended to read it first, and then come back and read the original text a second time to find a different feeling. So big, now that "1917" is already there, when will there be "Saving Private Ryan" and "Hacksaw Ridge"🥰🥰🥰🥰 When I watched "Hacksaw Ridge" for the first time, I was really shocked by Doss's performance. The sentence "Sir, we are waiting for Doss to pray" directly made me remember this movie for a lifetime, so I really hope that you can write this into it😍😍😍😍😍

666, Mygo is almost worn out. Luotuo Xiangzi and the British Deserter Ai Yin, interesting women. The main plot of Mygo is great to watch, and the part where Su Shi hurts Ai Yin is delicious. (Praise in the sadistic area) Aiyinchu is ecstatic. How can I miss the hen card after watching mygo? Life is incomplete without seeing the Hen Card. Especially Teacher Daxiang, how about letting the main character travel to reality and watch the hen card a few more times? I can do anything [face covering] Mygo fandom is getting better and better. I thought the multiple-personality soul-swapping thing I watched before was outrageous enough, but in the end, there were not only fast-traveling multiverses but also weird stories about apocalyptic rules.

Five stars, super large cup, it can be said that this is the most suitable girl band I have ever seen on Tomato. Both the writing and the plot are superb, and the author really embodies the core of each work in the growth of the characters. Most of the ones I see are just superficial. As long as I can keep it going, I'm willing to do anything 😭

The writing is by far the best, and the descriptions are very delicate. The shortcomings are that I feel that the transformation of Aiyin is not described in detail. In addition, the title and cover of the book are not attractive enough. At first glance, I thought it was the kind of book that is a stupid joke. It is really a pity that the score is so low. I feel like the writing is a bit scattered. In the previous chapter, I was still fighting a tense battle in the Ministry of Magic. At a critical point, I suddenly switch back to the world of the band, which affects the viewing experience. In addition, regarding the issue of world view setting, for example, the Harry Potter world, after being created by the original universe, should be crowded with travelers from the future of the original universe. After all, only this HP world was created, but there will be infinite travelers in the future. If there are multiple nearly identical HP worlds (for example, almost identical worlds created by a person tossing a coin with different sides), it would not be possible to explain why Aine and the others went to the HP world they visited last time without being able to specify a specific world time and place. If my understanding is wrong, I apologize here.

I'm thinking about those old Superman gangs arriving in other time and space. It's so scary.

There is no one who can do good work. I really like the appearance part, the detailed description (awesome), the vivid metaphors, the clear symbols, the real psychology, and the truth. There will be an Alpha Beta world line, which makes up for the regret. Will there be a plot in the future where I travel back and change the world? I can't wait.

To sum up It's a very good book. The author really put in the effort to find some of the information. If the book is out of stock, it's worth a read.

It's a great book, with very good ideas and writing style. It respects the original work very much and has the original writing style.

A very interesting novel that describes the injustice of the world and the struggle of human nature. But one thing I didn't expect was that Xiangzi was pulling a rickshaw. The scene changed and Aiyin went directly to fight.

Xdm, ten or even nine points of recommendation! It's so cute and cute, and the plot is very interesting! And it can be seen that it was not generated by AI, and there is no disgusting AI smell. The words between the lines are completely the author's own skills! In one word, awesome! ( Two words, very awesome! ( Three words, very awesome! (

It's very good, but there is a bit too much content in the real world later, so why start a new time travel.

It's very, very good-looking. It's not a band story. It's about Aiyin Xiaoxiang traveling back in time. Those chaotic times with no rules and order changed their characters. I don't want the inexplicable gravity in the drama anymore! ! ! ! [Laugh]

Come on, the psychological description is so delicate.

The writing is good, really good [send my heart], 30 chapters are longer than some novels which are 50 chapters long

Great flavor, no need for salt

Okay, just a little less

They are simply superhuman [stunned]

The third part of Chicken and Dog should be written to the author This book is even better than The Fire of Yiling.

One word, strength I haven't seen such an interesting book in a long time [laughs][laughs]

It's simply a masterpiece

I originally came here to watch it for fun, but let alone the writing is pretty good [Chigua]