British Dispatch Rider: Chihaya Anon!

The author has a good grasp of the characteristics of different literary works. He integrates it well with the original text, and the psychological description is dry enough. 👍 It's a good book. I can't wait to see the follow-up plot.

I like this book very much, especially the setting. The characters are all witnessed and developed due to their experiences. Come on, author, I want to see "living" people who are not restricted by the world view of Girls Band, not so-called characters.

The level is completely worthy of five stars! The writing method of combining narrative and discussion is already very mature. Although the story of Teacher Daxiang is still unfinished, the perspective is switched to the battle of Aiyin, but it does not affect the level of this work. Whether it is a tribute to Lao She's original work or an organic integration of the girl band, they are all handled very harmoniously in one work. In terms of character creation, it can be three-dimensional and full. Whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, they can show two sides that seem to be contradictory but actually unified. Their behavioral motivations do not deviate from the original work (no OOC). While narrating the story, it also brings thoughts about social issues, making the story meaningful and educational. It belongs to the "big guarantee" type among fan fiction. I hope that this book can be completed successfully, and the author should continue his efforts and not let down the ardent expectations of our readers. Update! Come on! Of course, quality is guaranteed ~ personal support from Laomao!

It's a pleasant read and deserves a five-star rating. The overall score is at least 8 or above. I don't know if I wrote the first part using AI or by myself. Very original. I personally haven't watched the anime, so I can't comment on the behavior of the heroine Toyokawa Shoko.

So far, the most enjoyable part of watching Ai Yin's time travel battle is the confrontation between Xiangzi and the detective. The writing is very delicate, but I feel like there are some shortcomings...

The writing is by far the best, and the descriptions are very delicate. The shortcomings are that I feel that the transformation of Aiyin is not described in detail. In addition, the title and cover of the book are not attractive enough. At first glance, I thought it was the kind of book that is a stupid joke. It is really a pity that the score is so low. I feel like the writing is a bit scattered. In the previous chapter, I was still fighting a tense battle in the Ministry of Magic. At a critical point, I suddenly switch back to the world of the band, which affects the viewing experience. In addition, regarding the issue of world view setting, for example, the Harry Potter world, after being created by the original universe, should be crowded with travelers from the future of the original universe. After all, only this HP world was created, but there will be infinite travelers in the future. If there are multiple nearly identical HP worlds (for example, almost identical worlds created by a person tossing a coin with different sides), it would not be possible to explain why Aine and the others went to the HP world they visited last time without being able to specify a specific world time and place. If my understanding is wrong, I apologize here.

We don't talk about lack of people, we talk about lack of people. We don't talk about punishment, we talk about hesitation. We don't talk about fake matches, we talk about being unable to retain. We don't talk about abuse of the spring, we talk about being on the road. We don't talk about losing streak, we say 26. We don't talk about complete abuse, we say 5408. We don't talk about reinforcements, we say 32. We don't talk about surrender, we say running wolf. We don't talk about failure, we say hiding. We don't talk about scientific research, we talk about sheep's horns. We don't talk about rotation, we say Jiuzhe. We don't talk about enemies, we talk about good brothers for life [call]

There is no one who can do good work. I really like the appearance part, the detailed description (awesome), the vivid metaphors, the clear symbols, the real psychology, and the truth. There will be an Alpha Beta world line, which makes up for the regret. Will there be a story about traveling back and changing the world later? I can't wait.

A very good band story, and the time travel during World War I is very much like the original "1917". It is recommended to read it first, and then come back and read the original text a second time to find a different feeling. So big, now that "1917" is already there, when will there be "Saving Private Ryan" and "Hacksaw Ridge"🥰🥰🥰🥰 When I watched "Hacksaw Ridge" for the first time, I was really shocked by Doss's performance. The sentence "Sir, we are waiting for Doss to pray" directly made me remember this movie for a lifetime, so I really hope that you can write this into it😍😍😍😍😍

That's good, but in the end, is it mainly from Shoko's perspective to introduce other girl bands, or is it separate that Shoko is the first one?