Steam Mystery: My Sword Can Cut the Law

It's quite a good work, but it uses too many modifiers and turning words in the previous article (maybe it was partly done using AI and not refined?), But it can be seen that the author is slowly making progress in revising it. The plot progresses steadily without any poisonous points, and the protagonist's growth is very in line with expectations without any breakdown in combat power. It can be called a good read in Tomato. I give the author a five-star praise and encouragement, hoping to maintain progress and complete it as a high-quality work. Later, it seems that the author has messed up the game, completely using AI and losing all the human touch, so that's all.

It combines Grammar, Victorian and entertaining novels. The readability is good, and you can feel that the author's level is constantly improving. Although the combat power does not increase quickly, the battle rhythm is very fast, events come one after another, and the protagonist basically solves the battle quickly. There are no procrastinating descriptions, which makes people feel very happy. I read a few more chapters, AI articles. There are a lot of flaws, but the plot is still watchable

It looks good, but why are there no quotation marks in the dialogue? From the moment the protagonist obtains the demon bloodline, there is a sense of AI from the beginning.

It's really well written. Although the combat power is suppressed, the narrative line is very good, except that there are no semicolons in the first few dozen chapters. .

The only fly in the ointment is that the dialogue does not have these punctuation points: "" [Exploration]

Maybe it's my imagination, but this AI flavor is a bit too strong [smile]

It's okay. There were a lot of extremes in some of the previous ones, but then the author changed it a little bit and it was a lot better. Also, he likes to emphasize how rational he is as a game planner. As long as you can bear it, the story is actually quite attractive.

The writing is good, but the dialogue and content are not separated, which affects the reading.

It's quite exciting. The protagonist has never been soft on people, from a rat in the sewer at the beginning to a young eagle now. The system is also greedy capital. The character of Murphy, the greedy three-eyed crow with a bad mouth, is well portrayed. From the beginning, he is sarcastic and has a bad mouth. Later, the protagonist becomes stronger and obeys. There are too many authors but too few, but it is quite exciting.

The subject matter is great, the plot is not great, but it is not bad, the writing is very cool, and there is no blindly hiding and being a grandson. However, my profiling ability as a game chief planner in my previous life told me that the work has a strong AI flavor; based on my literary appreciation skills as a chief planner in my previous life, I believe that removing most of the unnecessary attributives can greatly increase the "human flavor" of the work; finally, due to the superb sense of humor I accumulated as a chief planner in my previous life, the recurring identity of the protagonist's previous life planner really amused me, comparable to Hawaii Technical School

The story and plot are good, but the world view, the direct connection between the characters, and the details of the plot flow need to be polished. There are many places that are not logical. If you can polish them well, your future books will be popular.

It's good to read, but the lack of dialogue punctuation in the first few chapters makes it uncomfortable to read. It's okay if you have it later

It's very beautiful. I hope the author will stop being a eunuch and finish it well.

It's okay, but the punctuation is a bit strange, especially the dialogue without double quotes. Is it because I didn't display it or the author didn't type it?

Just watch this old AI, he won't say a word when you look at him [laughing evilly]

I've read Chapter 74, and the rest are pretty good, but,,,, the extremes are used too much [laughing and crying] I was fascinated while listening, imagining the scenes in the book, one extreme at a time, it's so dramatic 🤦‍♂️

Okay, but why doesn't anyone see it?

At present, it is still acceptable on the whole. When I read it, it was updated to more than 170 chapters. If I continue to follow this update and do not have too many running accounts, then the novel is still readable as a whole and will not only have a score of about 6. I think it can still be read. Let's talk about my feelings. Seeing the current progress after chapter 100, it's starting to feel a bit sluggish. It's a bit like a run-down. It doesn't have the same fast-paced feeling as before.

Generally speaking, the writing is good, very creative and attractive, but the content sometimes doesn't connect well. I traded items in the first few chapters, but after a few chapters I don't recognize them anymore [face covering]. I hope the author can revise it well, come on!

It looks great. Please feel free to use it.

It's ok. Apart from removing some parts with punctuation problems that affect reading, it looks fine.

I don't know which chapter to start with, but it's probably after chapter 90. The style has changed repeatedly, the number of repeated sentences has increased, the pace has obviously accelerated, and the AI ​​writing has become more and more obvious. I'd better give it a five-star support. Come on, author!

Survival is still guaranteed, and he is still happy and excited. The protagonist has changed from a helpless novice detective to an experienced detective who can decide the direction on some things and solve problems.

The plot, setting, protagonist's character and ability, and writing are all good. There's only one problem. Everyone in this world is a bit too dull, and no one is smart or sharp.

It's a pretty good work, there's nothing poisonous about the plot, and the plot's appeal is pretty good.

A very good work, and not without brains. Nowadays, there are very few good works on this subject and it is not as popular as before. I hope the author can continue writing and not stop updating.

Absolutely five stars, really

It feels very Cthulhu!

Good looking, steamy western fantasy!

Still pretty good