Mushoku Tensei: Just Another Life

The flavor of Jobless is very positive, and the rhythm is well controlled. It is smooth but not a running story. It feels that Rudy is finally a normal person in terms of design. When I watched the original work, I always felt that those perverted behaviors sometimes made me a little disgusted. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

It is well written. The character and behavior of the protagonist are very suitable to my liking. The protagonist has brains and does not follow the original work. He uses his own mind to make Alice want to learn mathematics. Although he still gave up, he avoided planning a kidnapping and turned it into a real kidnapping. He does not pretend to be a grandson in front of others and does not obey the nobles. He has a decisive intention to kill. He said that if Alice is kidnapped by the nobles, he will kill the nobles. Being an adventurer violates the rules and kills him if he is witnessed. Even when he was attacked by a gay slave, he also had a decisive intention to kill and taught Silu Fei to be tough. In this way, I won't be a dog for that princess, I won't pretend to be a grandson in front of Alice, and I'll beat her hard. When I go home and read it, it's well written and normal. I haven't met Ruijerud after the transfer. The change in the calculations of the gods and humans is also a good change. The reason for my appetite is the following from the original text: If possible, I really want to capture a troll alive to see what the principle of its regeneration is and whether it has any limits. Just cut off his hands and feet with magic and ask him out of his residence, then loot all valuable things and hand him over to the guards! Um! And my sister is an intermediate magician, so I don't need to worry." "Ah...? " "Who told you so much about me? " "It's me..." Snap! I cut off one of his hands with water magic. "Well... You threatened me with my family, and I only promised not to kill you, but I didn't say I would let your family go, right? And you should pray. This is a large-scale holy magic. If your family members are lucky enough to be in the cellar, they may survive." "Wha... What... But... There are a lot of innocent people! ? " "Then what should I do? Can you tell me your home's detailed address? This way we can save those innocent people, right? " "I'm sorry, although it's a bit selfish to say this, but Alice is my family. What happens to these refugees in this territory has nothing to do with me. If you threaten Alice with these innocent refugees again, I will kill these refugees first, and then kill the noble as well." Gua! So cool! I just want to see this mouth!

A very good "localized" fanfic of Jobless Reincarnation, 1) The plot trend is similar to the original work. Readers who want to see novelties may not like it. However, the protagonist is no longer as useless as the original work, but has a localized image. 2) Personally, I feel that the protagonist's ability has been slightly suppressed. When it comes to the development of the academy, I don't feel the protagonist's personal subjective growth, and his strength performance is much worse than that of the original protagonist in the same period. 3) The emotional line is really good. The ordinary happy life is about to convert me like the holy light. In summary, this is a regret-free Chinese version of the protagonist who was reincarnated without a job.

4 Stars. It basically follows the original work and then slightly changed it. The Rudy was removed from the obscene parts and changed into a more normal Rudy with a stronger fighting style. I haven't watched Jobless for a long time, so it's good to watch it again as a way to pass the time. I don't recommend it if you watch it often. You might find it a bit boring. I've read Chapter 140, and I feel very good. The missing author has also made up for it in the paragraphs and comments. There are also deductions for the ones that really don't work, especially the author of the Love Summer chapter, who is so awesome, and finally his dream came true 😢 😢 Okay, okay, I still can't put my mouth down when I look at the life of the family later.

Holy shit, it's pretty good. This fanfic is the strongest among all the novel software, except for the one at the starting point, "Jobless Reincarnation: Sword, Magic Hat and Love System". The male protagonist has a very good personality, has grown up, has a personality, and is not Long Aotian. The plot is also very good, and there are no flaws!

By replacing the time-traveling soul, this book avoids the character problems of the protagonist that are often criticized in the original work and improves the perception. At the same time, it retains the daily warmth, which is quite good. There is actually no problem with the deletion of the plot of the Demon Continent. Ruijerrod plays a corrective role in Rudy's return home. The change in the protagonist's personality means that this role is not necessary, and he can appear elsewhere later. The biggest problem now is that the strength setting of the protagonist is not very clear. I hope to help Ariel show it in this chapter and strengthen her character.

Blandness is the main theme, and the protagonist is stronger than Rudy. As a result, many crises in the original work are easily overcome by the protagonist, and the conflicts between the characters are no longer there. This is not to say that this is a problem, but it may be that the plot is not so exciting, or it may be due to reading the original work. I didn't feel much of a sense of crisis at the turning point, and I didn't feel the oppression of humans and gods. I didn't feel it when Aisha was stabbed by Dragon God. The original conflict between Paul and Rudy was also avoided... In general, it doesn't cost money, and there are very few jobless fanfics. I think it is worth watching. Another point is that the protagonist and the original dead house are two people, but the plot is almost the same, starting from learning water magic to learning the dragon god's chaos... Wait, you can write more new plots. Now many plots are almost the same as revisiting the plot of the original...

The writing is pretty good, and the quality is very good among jobless fans. It has a bit of the style of the original work. Some of the plots in the original work are more detailed, but the plots that the original work does not have are relatively brief. The three primary colors are included and the others are unknown. My sister Ai Xia may enter the palace. Personally, I feel that Aisha is the one who has the template of the protagonist in this book. It's okay if the book is called Aisha: The Legend of the Powers 🤭. She has magical abilities and magic eyes that are close to Rudy, and swordsmanship that rivals the water god. In the end, the seven major powers have changed. Rudy, I don't know if he is on the list, but Aisha is definitely on the list. Author, please update!

It's pretty good, no problem at all. I don't give it full marks because the protagonist is a bit weak and doesn't have any research on magic, making nuclear bombs, or anything like that. There is no essential difference from the original Rudeus, but he is a little less lewd and cruel. I didn't see the plot of becoming stronger, walking on the path of God, wanting to gain immortality magic or increasing my bloodline to become a dragon as I hoped. What is the difference between this and the original work I read... Well, it is still there. The writing style is localized. After all, the tone of Japanese novels is different from here. It will be smoother to read this.

A very good fan novel. Compared with the original work, many vulgar plots have been deleted. At the same time, the protagonist's character is relatively mature, somewhat macho and has a tough attitude. However, after arriving in the Demon Continent, it became a bit more murderous. It's not that I can't accept this, but it didn't explain why it was like this. It felt like it was torn apart before and after. In front of him was a gentleman who respected his teachers, loved his family, couldn't bear to bully the weak, and had more serious views on family and sex. He shook his head and said, "Kill all the witnesses. After completing the task, get rid of the companions who did the task together. The cold-hearted mentality of the weak and the strong, and the decisive and decisive Jianghu mentality." It's pretty good in other aspects, the writing is smooth, the rhythm is good, and the story direction is quite different from the original work, which is quite interesting.