I Sucked Hard in Pirate

It's quite good-looking. The main character doesn't have a Chinese name, so it doesn't make sense. This one has surpassed many pirate stories in Tomato. Now the main character's power is comparable to that of a general. I feel that his combat power will be a bit weak in the later period. But One Piece is so confusing. Luffy seems to have experienced a lot, but in fact it has only been a few years. For now, it is definitely good-looking and highly recommended. I think the part about the relationship with a few girls is average, but it does not affect the overall situation.

The author's book should have limited circulation, but there are no ratings. I encountered one before and wrote more than 300,000 words and had hundreds of reviews, but there were no ratings. The author should be mentally prepared. This book is actually not very well written. Advantages: The author has a deep understanding of One Piece and is more rigorous than other One Piece fans; the author has made many patches for Oda. For example, the author has determined the levels of do force, swordsmanship, taijutsu, haki, and devil fruits. He has set the general's do force value to 4000 do force, thus making up for the 800-year-old genius Lucci that Oda boasted in the early stage. Then the battle is not only better than do force, but also better than swordsmanship, taijutsu, domineering devil fruit, and high do force value does not mean high combat power. (This view is not necessarily correct, because it is just the author's private opinion, but I think it is quite reasonable). Disadvantage 1: First of all, the writing style is not good, and the writing is straightforward. The battle feels like you put a skill, I put a skill, and then I won; Disadvantage 2: The main character is a stud. This is the worst defect. A boat full of women (Chopper is not a human being) can't even be written. I also like to read multiple female protagonists, but the author should not exceed double digits, otherwise it will appear that the female protagonist is stereotyped. Basically, the descriptions are about the same. It is better to have four or five female protagonists, and the writing can be vivid. Disadvantage 3: The heroine's opening line is "Be my woman". Although it was pushed quickly, nearly ten female protagonists all said this. The key is that they all agreed.

To be honest, I only read Pirates fanfics for my favorite characters. There are a lot of books that collect a bunch of cards at random, especially the harem stories. After collecting hundreds of them, there is no chance to appear. I really thought that the flow chart-like plot could be attractive. Although this book is a bit simple in the process of collecting cards (from another perspective, it is not obviously artificial) and the number of collected cards is a bit too many (from a personal perspective, I really can't remember the names and images of some characters), but as a fan harem novel, it really captures the main selling point (most characters have enough shaping and interaction)

The author is too straightforward! Be my woman every time....[Cover face][cover face][cover face]

The writing is good, but there is no need to accept some women, such as those female naval admirals, and you can plan to have children at once, have more sons, and arrange for women and sons to have fantasy beast species or natural and monster superhuman abilities.

Although I have only read a few chapters, it still contains some new ideas. The personal setting is explained too much in the book, it would be great if it should be revealed slowly in the plot.

A must-order for listening to books every night [please taste it carefully]

I've seen a few of them so far, they're really good, I'll keep following up.

Overall, the writing is pretty good, not bad. I don't want to read it anymore, so I still give it a five-star review.

Great book, support the author. Just follow your own writing and ignore those scumbags.

Support me, it's pretty good so far, but the dialogue is too long, and I haven't managed the segmentation well. It's obvious that this is my first time writing, and everything else is pretty good. Come on [Like]

It can be seen that at least now there are fewer poison points than other pirates.

Wonderful, but the harem is a bit too much

This book is very good

What's the use of the golden finger? I can't see it clearly, [eating melon]

Give a five-star support!

Five-star support, come on the author

This vampire fruit is only used for recovery. It has no energy output and relies entirely on swordsmanship.

Keep on keep on losing weight lose weight lose weight

As long as there is no supervision, I support it! !

Can you please stop Carmen from killing someone with a finger gun? Chef, big brother, Sanji also uses the kicking skills.

Check in, check in, check in

Hahahahahaha

It's not bad. The main character is a swordsman system plus fantasy beast species. There is no upper limit for a little trick.