The Junior Brother of the Immortal Sect Is Actually a Woman

The idea is not bad, but it was exposed too quickly. In my original imagination, the protagonist should be exposed in the middle and late stages. The main body should become a genius, and then defeat all the geniuses. The disguised body should have a minor skill and become friends with many people, but the combat power is not high. When the disguised body is in danger, it uses the one-time power condensed by the main body to save the day. Then it is seen by the pursuers of the main body and falls into the Shura field [sneaky smile]. Then the main body and everyone work together to solve the big trouble, overpower the crowd to attract everyone's attention, and finally the disguised body goes to fight with those men. During a party together, the disguise was broken due to some small accidents and exposed in front of everyone. Then the protagonist got drunk and encouraged all the suitors to fight. Finally, he came on the scene and beat the winner and ran away. That would be perfect [laughter][laughter][laughter][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Yes, the author's own inner description has created a world of cultivating immortality of his own. At present, it seems like a fantasy and bizarre story. The writing style is immature and uneven in some places. But the biggest feature of the author's writing style may be the sentences with a hint of allegory and many metaphors. But it's not good if you use it too much. The author needs to learn how to use it correctly, and also learn the psychology of character dialogue. The author should have initially grasped the framework of dialogue, but it is still full of a general sense of reality, so if you study the dialogue a little more, this will be a good work. Also, the language is too concise. There should be no more and no less. As long as you can fix these and give some more time and imagination, you will have a relatively excellent work and a leisurely world of your own. By the way, the author feels that the current update motivation is not very good. It is updated occasionally and the update frequency fluctuates.

Don't change your marriage, don't change your marriage, don't change your marriage 😢

It's pretty good, but the writing is a bit dry and rushed, with few details, and the non-protagonist is a bit too flat, but the writing is pretty good, but the protagonist is still too kind. I read it in one sitting, it is a good book.

Well, the writing is excellent and the plot is good, but the style is a bit awkward and leans towards romance, which is still worth watching. In addition, the sexual changes in this article are only for setting, and there is basically no description.

The writing is very good and the story is exciting. Very depressing. It can be seen that the author intends to use the way the heroine is abused to make the other male characters feel "guilt" and "sympathy", so as to guide them to be pampered in the future. That's how Zhiyu Wen is. When I read it in the early stages, my heart always trembles, just to foreshadow the final ending.

I feel like the main character is very similar to Kage-ryu, it's like a template. The demon's Yin body has similar symptoms, white hair and red eyes🤔🤔🤔🍉🍉🍉 Aside from some minor flaws, this book is okay overall. It would be even more perfect if the protagonist gets an eye patch and covers his eyes🤭🤭🤭😏😏😏

It takes a lot of courage to write what you want to express in your heart. The injustice in reality, the darkness of human nature, the powerlessness of the current situation, and the confusion of the future. From the book, you can imagine that you can be as kind, brave, and unyielding as Bai Ci. Tragic experiences and determination to break the status quo are like a real story, a living book

The world of immortality is an enhanced version of the dark modern society. Why do many people always stay mediocre all their lives? It's because they only follow what others say and don't use their brains to think. Nature has given them the best brains, but unfortunately, their souls are ruined.

After reading a few chapters, the protagonist has a clear wisdom Stomach pain, getting more and more stomach pain