Martial Spirit Has Been Missing for Two Hundred Thousand Years and Is Heartbroken

Men are menstruating when they see menstruation🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It is God and my rose illuminates It saved my dark life and gave my world meaning😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The knife is just right, not too much and not too little, I like to see this [admiration]

It was very touching when I went there. The family ties and bonds in the early stage were written very delicately. There are very few derivative works of Douluo Dalu that do not write mindless and cool stories. Every time the protagonist grows up, it is not easy. Author, you must continue to provide such high quality🥺

To be honest, it's okay. It's not an AI novel. It has a lot of words. Although the protagonist is a bit weak, the arc of the character is very complete. In the early stage, because of the poison, I had to endure the pain and transformed the fairy grass into a ninja god grass. But it's not boring. I can keep reading. It's good.

I have read twenty-seven chapters so far. The subject matter is good, but it is a bit OOC (personal feeling). It can be said that it is the influence of the protagonist. The first dozen chapters are very well written, but the later chapters are too AI-heavy. Maybe the author did not notice it when revising.

The writing is quite good. The protagonist is a little bitter melon, which makes people feel distressed.

The writing is very humane and beautiful. I hope the main plot will not collapse later (I hope there will be no cp)

This book gave me a feeling: depressive In order to explore love and hatred, the protagonist transforms into a human being, and then goes through a series of conflicts and tragic experiences. It is quite uncomfortable to watch, and it keeps making me cry [crying]

It's a very good book. It's very sad to read and keep saying goodbye. From Gray Rabbit to uncle and aunt, they left the academy and the training camp. Obviously I don't feel that the connection with everyone is deep, but being separated again and again makes people feel distressed.

The story is there, but the main character is too bitter and hateful, and it's too sad. There are story lines that break away from the main line, but not many. I can only say that Xiao Wu's sacrifice is a must-have for Douluo fans [you can taste it carefully] and the writing is okay

It's so excellent, a rare Douluo fanfic with a lot of fireworks and human feelings [Sending my heart to you]

It's good, but it feels like it's a bit abusive to the protagonist.

I finished reading it all at once. I haven't read fanfics for a long time. I suddenly wanted to read a fanfic about Douluo Dalu. The author's writing is very good, the story line is clear and not brainless. Although there are some poisonous points, the overall feeling is very good and the sense of substitution is very good. Some places are very verbose, and I can see that the author is a novice, so keep up the good work. Finally, no eunuchs (˝ᗢ̈˝)

I always feel that this is the way to become a god. It is not just about getting stronger. Yi An has top-notch talents, but if he could choose, he would also like to stay in that small mountain village, but fate keeps pushing him to lose. Becoming a god is about training the heart, not the cry of the protagonist of Shuangwen.

It feels okay, but I have a very important question, why did Dugu Bo become invisible? Wasn't the main reason why the protagonist disappeared in the first place was Dugu Bo? The people in Shrek didn't know it at all. The protagonist didn't mention it later, but the plot of Wuhun Palace unfolded because of Dugu Bo.

It's so beautiful. The author thinks that our family's Yi'an is suffering too much. I hope you can be more tolerant to my children. My children are suffering too much. 😭

The overall plot arrangement does not completely copy the original work. The personal arc of the protagonist is quite complete. It is not mindless or mentally retarded. It is a very pyrotechnic article. The author is also polishing his own writing style. I really like it. Teacher, you must keep writing it [Sending Hearts]

The plot is pretty good and enjoyable, and the author will continue to work hard.

No one feels something is wrong. The coins in Douluo's worldview are copper soul coins, silver soul coins, and gold soul coins. Why are silver taels and copper plates used here? I hope the author will take a look.

It's okay. Tomato Douluo fans generally don't live long, so you can watch it while you can.

It looks good, I hope there will be no follow-up CP [Like]

It looks good. I'll go. If it is written like this later, it will be ranked first in my bookshelf. If it fails later, forget it. I didn't tell the author. Don't be a eunuch. I'm afraid. [Pout]

The author's literary talent is really good

Woohoo, it's the one from uncle and aunt🔪It hurts too much

The rhythm is moderate, but Shrek and the knife are added forcibly

Solo route, no licking, but group with the protagonist, looks good

Sometimes when there are 7 people on the field, the same pair will be written as 8 people. . . I kind of doubt it's AI or use it less. The subject matter is good, I want to read it.

I have read Chapter 13 so far. The writing style is just a touch of sadness, but many people say that the AI ​​flavor in the back is a bit strong. I will read it again.

Super good-looking, novel plot It's super beautiful. The author is asking for more updates🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

Nice. Finally no more harem

It's pretty good-looking, with a bit of a knife.