Is This Game Even Serious?

I really like reading All Naruto's articles. Everyone should revolve around Naruto. The author's writing is very nice, not too OOC, and the writing style is not too naive. I originally wanted to give it five stars, but because I felt that many of the plot descriptions were repeated many times, I gave it four stars. For example: the description of the crowd staring at Naruto's waist when writing the maid uniform, and what Naruko and Naruto said (Naruko said Naruto was in a daze, Naruko said Naruto was hiding something from her), what Itachi and Shisui said to Naruto when they first met Naruto... There are many descriptions that feel repetitive, but other than that, there are no problems. The author's writing is really good. The setting of gentle and dank male ghosts and female ghosts falling in love with the little sun is really good! It is simply a fairy product! The author please be sure to keep updating [please update more]! Don't stop updating, I will always follow the author and support you!

The author's writing style is really good. I originally wanted to give it five stars, but I still gave it four stars. My suggestions to the author are as follows: Don't repeat too many sentences. If you feel there is overlap in some content and you can't think of a replacement, just don't write it at all. The characters are also alive. Even if they don't appear in the plot, they will still do something. Take Hinata as an example. A girl has a lot on her mind. She may suddenly miss Naruto, and her love value will increase inexplicably. I wish the author will make rapid progress and become a great Tomato writer as soon as possible.

What the teacher wrote is really great! Please feel free to read 💕

The author's writing is quite good, and his emotions are quite delicate. I quite like it, but I suggest you write less "heavy, sticky eyes" and "as if you want to suck people in."

Very good, highly recommended. When I find a good book, I fart twice on the bed.

It's really dank. You can check it out. I've already reached Chapter 8. It's a bit suspenseful and there are a lot of repeated words. Overall, there's still a lot of room for improvement. It's worth watching👍

Damn, why are you so good at writing? It's so beautiful.

Hey, it's really good to read, but there are a little few chapters. The author should update it quickly.

Shocking and delicious, it's really delicious. I'll go, I'll go. Why is the author's writing so beautiful?

I like Naruto very much. This book is very suitable for my taste. It's good to read [heartfelt] but it's a bit repetitive, a bit like chatting with a beanbag. But overall it's good.