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It's well written, and the interaction between the protagonist and the black beasts is very cute, but I'm not sure what the author's main plot is, as it's more about daily life.

You know, baby, not only are all the 12 black beasts here female, but this Ga La Ge Mu is in baby mode, and interaction is not required. You can easily take them down as long as Asashiga gives a mysterious little gift (jade pendant). You said Gala Ge Mu is not like this, shut up 😠 No one has ever helped me and treated me as a human being. I don't know if the authors of too many books are too tired. They all basically have the same routine. Although it is normal for novels to have routines, they still need to foreshadow it. Even if the black beast is not popular, it would be too ridiculous to be able to return to his heart with some care. You can be loyal because of your personal charm, but you also have to She has strength. If Carmen had no ability, there would be no Moon Project story, and she would only be regarded as a lunatic by urban people. What is the difference between the protagonist and others? Every character can be friendly to others, and there can be sidekicks A, B, and C. The protagonist has nothing special, so why should he be used in this story? Do you want a person with the same name?

Overall, it looks good (it's all sugar) But I still feel that there are some problems @yanxiao (only my personal opinion, no malice, welcome to point out any loopholes) 1. Wei's weapon should be a crutch instead of a shield; Wei's side effect is that his body will always feel cold (after all, Yang Tang also feels very cold in the summer in the plot) 2. Did the smoke war start too early? The Tobacco War ended - Lobotomy Corporation was opened - the Seed of Light was launched - the library was opened - the total of being exiled was not 12 years, right? According to Jia Mu's current age, the old age is not reasonable, right? 3. As a gang, Thumb shouldn't be able to hire a close person, right? There is also Roland's precognitive eye that recognized Valencina in Chapter 65, but logically this kind of information should not be leaked.

It's watchable, the writing is okay, the emotional scenes are okay, the characters, combat abilities, and fighting scenes are a little bit toxic but within an acceptable range, the setting is a bit problematic but it's barely rounded, overall it's remarkable, if you can accept some minor bits and pieces, it's still worth watching.

Everything else is fine, except that the protagonist is aboriginal, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable [Thinking]

How to say it? It's a monthly story about a mirror world. The plot is pretty good. There's a good chance that all twelve idiots are women. It's quite novel and interesting. If you don't like effeminate characters, please don't enter.

The writing direction is good, but the writing style needs to be improved. If it is not good, you can use AI appropriately. Don't repeat it too many times in description. In addition, you can leave suspense at the end. If you get stuck at that critical moment, it is better not to take up too much of the monthly theme.

Very good book, but still inconsistent First, "Since I was born, no one has ever treated me like this." Then "I thought of XXX's XXX, they were all "abandoned" and "useless"" Finally, give me a jade pendant Basically the same

Although it looks good, the yellow button on the back really makes me want to escape, but escaping is useless, so I came to urge the update. What a delicious novel! The progress bar is about to reach the end, and the "Update" button is about to appear - but is it really so? (Press pause) Here, please allow me to pay homage to the audience and ask you to take the time to listen to what I see. ⭐Ah, the legendary writer⭐ ❤️The gospel official of words❤️ 💔How long will it take for you to update a new chapter💔 📚Relive history! 📚 🌊Cross the ocean of text and data traffic🌊 ❤️Bring the latest updates right in front of my eyes❤️ 🤫The process of reading your text🤫 🎓Always reminds me of the happy time when I was a teenager studying🎓 🤲🏻If there is a one in ten thousand chance, you can update ten chapters a day🤲🏻 🥰My victory will be certain🥰 🥵In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of breaking news.

A+~ A good monthly fanfic, give me five stars for support [Chigua]

A very interesting book. It has no shortcomings except that some people may not be able to accept sexual transition.

Gosh, such a beautiful book with a harem is actually written by Yue Ji. It seems that I have to give it four stars. Some people may not be able to accept gender change, but it is rare that Yue Ji has a warm and beautiful book, so I still have to eat it. With the great mirror world, maybe everyone has changed their gender.

A+, your works shine like urban stars. The starry sky that shines in the city cannot describe your creative power. Even ring finger masters have to stop and appreciate it. Ring Ring will remember this moment.

Will any black beast really betray its master?

The four books completely resonate with each other. They are really cool and beautiful! ! ! ! ! !

Played like a little black beast baby

Gala, give me this piece of wood

This book is also very good-looking. I can't tell you exactly what it is about, but it is very good-looking, so I say you should hurry up and read it.

The plot is very good, but there is a lot of original content. If you want to watch the pure original version, you will be a little disappointed.

Do all male criminals have to change their gender?

It depends. So far, A

Give me a five-star review first and then read it later @ I also thought of a question. You wouldn't just write more than 100 chapters and then run away, right?

Oh, I must keep reading. Without your book, wow Darcy😭

One of the best books on monthly planning. The author's other books are also good. I recommend reading it.

How should I put it? It's very to my liking. Although I don't know how to comment, the author's writing is very interesting. Although it is a bit OOC, it is already very good.

The writing is very good, but the update speed can't keep up with my reading speed😋

The subject matter is good, but the author is not very good at writing multi-person situations. He wants to give each character a description, which is a bit bloated. The individual descriptions in the back are much better.

The plot is very interesting and the writing is also very good, but there are some inexplicable points, such as a certain infinite piece of Hetian jade and the mysterious revolving lantern war god. Highly recommended

I just want to ask, how did the author write four books at the same time? So strong? How?

The love story part