Warhammer: The Industrial Revolution in Cathay

Although there are some flaws, it's generally okay. There are just a lot of contradictions. The imagination of the four gods is too much. Let's see how it is written later. Five stars for encouragement.

In dealing with large-scale wars, only artillery can change the situation of the war. The other side is using weapons of mass destruction (gas bombs), while our side is still playing with millet plus rifles. Lack of new artillery, new anti-aircraft guns

The book is good, but the writing is a little off, there are too many dialogues, and there are too few descriptions. After improvements, it will be very good ❤️

The writing style is too novice, but the subject matter is good

Please give me 5 stars for encouragement. After all, there are too few people writing about medieval warhammers. But can the author optimize the dialogue so that the words don't sound like humans anymore? It's not necessary to state the motivation for doing things in the dialogue.

The subject matter is acceptable and the content is good. Apart from a few flaws in the dialogue between the characters, it is still very good. I hope to continue writing and keep improving 👍

Your conversation is so strange

Although some of the plots are a bit melodramatic, and the writing is visibly immature, the previous story line is clear and there's nothing major wrong with it. It's already pretty good here. Come on

It's okay, but can the dialogue be improved?

Nice author, don't stop updating. I'm still waiting for updates.