What Does It Mean That the Alien from the Opposite Universe Has Ultra Spirit?

It's been a long time since I've seen a store like this. It's actually a monster tavern. It's a very good idea. Ultraman is prohibited from entering. The details are not as detailed as the Earth Defense Force's prohibition of entry because people on earth cannot see the portal [laughs]

The writing is good, and the content is also good. It's Beria + the protagonist + another alien who can grow in size, and is defeated by a monster sealed by Ida Iryu. . . . . . . . . What is the combat power of the super BOSS in the later stage?

It's very good. I didn't understand the title before, so I always missed it. This is the daily Ultra novel I've been looking for. I'm really tired of those who keep stacking up their combat power and cheating, and who just keep a harem after meeting a woman, as if they have never seen a woman before. It's actually good to create some theater and fan stories that break away from the main line. Some novels are too obsessed with following the main line, but lose their essence. You obviously have a strong golden finger, but you have to be forced to join the Earth Defense Force organization. Can't you be a free man? I like the protagonist who walks in a gray area, but is very warm. Even a small character can have his own story, and it is based on the original setting. It is very detailed, interesting, and cute. It is also interesting for readers to make jokes in the comment area. I really like the plot so far, and I am very much looking forward to the subsequent development of the story.

Within a few chapters, I started to basically deviate from the Monster Tavern and write my own stuff. I'm not criticizing, but I feel that if too many non-monsters and non-space people are crammed into the tavern, it will only make people feel that this is just a tavern, not a monster tavern. Now that this is the case, my suggestion is to try to reduce the presence of non-spacemen and non-monster characters as much as possible when writing Monster Tavern. This does not mean that all the roles should be reduced, but it just means that when writing Monster Tavern, try to reduce their roles as much as possible. Secondly, I hope that all kinds of characters will not be randomly stuffed into the monster tavern. The tone of the tavern is not like this. Please don't write the tavern as a large courtyard. Either write it in this direction, or control it. A very important atmosphere of a pub is that it is small but sophisticated. Two people are best, but three people is the limit. With four people, it starts to become a serious restaurant instead of a tavern, and I personally think that pets are particularly noticeable in the disappearance of the tavern atmosphere. And the tavern is a place for mature people. Adding some characters who are not suitable for this environment will really change the atmosphere of the tavern significantly. You can use other methods, such as the system adding more rooms for the tavern's back chef, but I really don't want to cram a lot of people into the tavern, which will ruin the atmosphere. I hope that the characters that the author said have nothing to do with the tavern can be placed in their own rooms that are not in the tavern, otherwise it will disturb the feeling. Of course, if the author has a strong desire to create and hopes to write more of his own things, I will certainly support it. I am just making an evaluation from my own perspective.

Extremely beautiful, simple beginning, too long, random events I've seen Chapter 104. The combat and descriptions have a strong AI flavor. For example It's not xx, it's not xx, it's xxxx For example, Beria's hand was trembling slightly. It was not exhaustion or injury, but exhaustion. It was the consumption of Beria's use of ultra telekinesis. There were many sentences like this, so many, so many that they were ridiculous, but they were still acceptable, because at least the plot outline was correct, and the daily trivial matters were okay. For example, when Beria went to India to eat inexplicable food, Beria lamented that everything was pretty good, at least it looked like it was written by a human. Why? So, daily life, chatting, etc. Are basically written by people, except for battles, emmm, I'm pretty sure, it's AI, it's all, not xx, not xx, it's sentences like xxx. What's certain is that since I read Chapter 104, there's nothing special about it. The plot is pretty perfect. For example, the part about Kojuro Kageryu is really good, but the battle is not perfect, very bad, very bad.

It can be seen that the author loves tokusatsu very much and understands tokusatsu very well. First of all, there is no obvious trace of AI at present, and the rhythm is very good, there is no awkwardness that is too funny, and it is very similar to the official tokusatsu style of the original work! Come on, author [pouts]

Good! Very good! Tells a very interesting story! I'm optimistic about you~

Very good writing style. The story line belonging to Bai Bei is very well written. It belongs to the alien's unique mentality when observing the earth. The protagonist, as a bystander and guide of the event, does not lack any emotion at all. Judging from the title and introduction, this book is unqualified. Yes, but the key lies in its content. The great spirit of caring for the weak in Ultraman bursts out. It is very beautiful and I am attracted to it at once, but it will probably also attract all kinds of brats to scold me [awkward laughter] Let's take a step at a time, come on, the author

The current time is updated to chapter 43, and I took the time to tie it up in two days. This kind of book is really rare, light and daily, and the big narrative has not yet unfolded. There are only a few customers and two clerks at the moment. After the protagonist grows up, it will have a different flavor. The plot has a slow-burning flavor, and it does not Not to say it is very slow, but in today's fast-paced world, it is indeed relatively slow. The first-person narrative, the control and personality of the characters are what I prefer. It is similar to the original work, but not the same. The follow-up content may be an intelligence station and a commissioning platform, a peaceful transfer place for various forces.

It's good to watch. It's not about changing your skin to become a fairy. The tokusatsu chef's ghost brain is working hard (comparable to a certain Godzilla). If you don't like to watch it, be careful with daily leisure.

Very delicious style It might be more interesting if the famous scene of the handsome people from the universe fighting Ultraman can be released later. This author (sobs) (sobs) He is a genius😭😭😭 The second trial upheld the original verdict, still a masterpiece You must keep writing.

I think it's quite interesting. The stories in the tavern are told quite well and are generally more everyday. Beria's combat power was too strong.

It suits my taste very well. Each character is very delicate, has its own characteristics, has its own short story, and each character has its own action logic. Overall, it is very good. The atmosphere of the tavern is very warm.

Zoffi: Human beings, have you finally arrived here with your own power? One day, you will join us and travel side by side between planets. Until then, we will become the shield of your world. We look forward to seeing you next time... Shimizu: We are protected. When we didn't know it, in the place we didn't know, they protected us from enemies we didn't know. I want to respond to their intentions... In fact, transcendent technology originally existed to respond to Ultraman's wishes. Yes, it existed just for this day.

Hmm... Although many people say it is an AI article (of course it is very obvious), the subject matter is indeed very good! The previous plot and everything are pretty good, except for the battle aspect, which is really frustrating [eating melon], but I finally found something I can read among a bunch of messy books... Well, who knows, it took me a long time to find a book that I am interested in and has good content. The result is an AI novel with a sense of despair [crying] (Can anyone recommend some books... [Crying])

Respect... Farewell~... Dear Lord, Lord... Master, this... This is an interesting book I found... Today... Please... Ah, don't hit me... Don't hit me, meow~ I I will try my best to find more interesting and good books... Don't hit me... Oh ❤ oh oh oh~~~~❤oh oh ～ohoh ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

It's not quite the same as the article I imagined, but it's still a good angle to look at.

The style is not very obvious at the moment, but the author likes and understands tokusatsu very much. I hope the author will add more content about the host and guest getting along in the tavern. Come on [blowing kiss]

In other words, I have created my own path in Ultraman. After watching it for so long, I feel great. The writing is also good. Good luck to the author. It felt good at first, but the more I looked at it, the more AI it felt, with a lot of meaningless words and modifiers. I hope it can be improved.

It's okay, it's pretty good to watch, but Beria is a bit weak.

Ao's father is the director and Severn is the assistant director. They threatened the author to write it.

When can I continue writing about pubs? I don't want to watch anymore battles. It's so fun.

The subject matter is quite interesting, but I am pretty, and Mefilas is really ugly in my taste.

It's good-looking. The protagonist portrays various cosmic beings very well. It feels like Orb Chronicles.

It's a very special fanfic, with the feel of a TV drama.

The cosmic tavern is a rare subject. The author writes it very seriously. If he doesn't mess around, he can write at least a million words. Come on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It can be good-looking, but the author's writing style still has a lot of room for improvement, but I personally think the plot and content of the novel are very good (♡>𖥦<)/♥

It feels like watching a TV show. It's great. I hope I won't be a eunuch.

I regret a little bit that I shouldn't have clicked in directly in the first place. The quality of the book is great but I came in when I shouldn't have. The word count is really very small, not enough to read and enjoy. Now it has been added to the bookshelf, and it is estimated that it will last for half a year.

Free, relaxed, not so tired and hard feeling