Sister, Don't Do This!

I hope I can write this book longer and strive to exceed 400,000 words! I think it's okay at the beginning, but don't get it wrong later. The super gods I wrote before were not good to Yan. This time, I will give Yan a benefit!

The content is okay. There is no need to write too much about the previous story. The content can be expanded. For example, Angel Yan has been captured. Now, we can find a reason for Angel Leng to join her master and run away. Other angels look down upon her and she is taken down by the male protagonist. Then there are 2 guardian angels. Within a few thousand years, there will be 2 male angels. Their descendants are genetically inferior to the three major god-making projects. Try to control the age of the descendants to be about the same as Hexi's apprentice. One can marry her apprentice and the other one can marry the angel who is the daughter of heaven. There are too many things that can be added in the middle, such as the eldest wife. Inheriting Zuo Leng and retiring early to take care of his descendants, Angel will be replaced by his own descendants in the future. When writing the main plot, he will pretend to attack the Xiongbing Company from his own descendants. When writing from the perspective of his own descendants, it is too early to win the heroine. There must be a descendant of the protagonist. It is best to have a perfect male angel with void technology and a child bride who is a disciple of Hexi. Otherwise, there will be no descendants for thousands of years in the main plot. Is it a problem? If you want a harem, hurry up and get Angel Leng, who can accompany you to take care of your offspring. Liang Bing can also get a space offspring. The main plot is to show off from the perspective of the offspring. Liang Bing can really get it before the time and space genes are taken away.

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It's pretty good, but I didn't take it all in. I'll give it one star less, just in case you're proud. In Chapter 47, Yan asked who the child's father was. What do you mean? Got a story?

It's a very nice book, good luck to the author!

The writing is good, but unfortunately the traffic is not high. It is less than 7,000 yuan while reading, and there are not many people who read it. The income of less than 10 yuan a day is regarded as love power generation.

Not bad, worthy of five stars

Overall good so far

It's okay, but I personally feel that the offspring are produced too quickly, and it may not be easy to deal with later.

It's very well written. I'll give it to you directly. Cheers to the author [laughing][laughing][laughing] Mark it and add a bookshelf to prevent it from being lost. Maybe one day I will read this book again and it will be finished. Come on, the author [laughs]

The content is quite good, but I personally feel that the protagonist's character has grown too quickly. The latter philosophy is instantly separated from the previous one, for example, why did they fight? . If all the parts of a spaceship are replaced while it is in motion, will it still be the original spacecraft? In this case, is Yan a blank piece of paper protected by the protagonist? (They have been fighting and doing missions and stuff, but the instructor didn't mention it?) The protagonist is even more abrupt. An ordinary person is treated like an ant and played a training game. The power he has later is only limited. He is invincible. Even if it is not permanent, one day is enough for the concept god to do as he pleases.

Very nice. Super nice.

It's good to write it down well

The plot is good and very interesting

Good, cheers, author

Good, good, recommended

It's beautiful. I love it. It's really beautiful~

The author writes very well

Oops, not bad

Come on, keep an eye on you.

Very good looking author, cheers

So far it's okay, I don't know what the author will choose later.

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No matter what book, as long as I read it, it will be five stars

I'll give you five points. It's not enough. Quickly start your little fortune-making process.

This is among all the supernatural books I have read. In my personal opinion, the top ten are acceptable.

Add some Ultraman power, I want to see it

It looks good and can make old book readers enjoy reading it. It's great. Come on.

Eight wings uniform two wings, in the north of the Milky Way, I am the most beautiful; invincible in the world, my brother is my brother [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

What a great update! ! ! /, Why did you find out so early that Braille is not enough to read [crying][crying][crying][crying]