Little Sister, Don’t Be Like That!

I hope I can write this book longer and strive to exceed 400,000 words! I think it's okay at the beginning, but don't get it wrong later. The super gods I wrote before were not good to Yan. This time, I will give Yan a benefit!

The content is okay. There is no need to write too much about the previous story. The content can be expanded. For example, Angel Yan has been captured. Now, we can find a reason for Angel Leng to join her master and run away. Other angels look down upon her and she is taken down by the male protagonist. Then there are 2 guardian angels. Within a few thousand years, there will be 2 male angels. Their descendants are genetically inferior to the three major god-making projects. Try to control the age of the descendants to be about the same as Hexi's apprentice. One can marry her apprentice and the other one can marry the angel who is the daughter of heaven. There are too many things that can be added in the middle, such as the eldest wife. Inheriting Zuo Leng and retiring early to take care of his descendants, Angel will be replaced by his own descendants in the future. When writing the main plot, he will pretend to attack the Xiongbing Company from his own descendants. When writing from the perspective of his own descendants, it is too early to win the heroine. There must be a descendant of the protagonist. It is best to have a perfect male angel with void technology and a child bride who is a disciple of Hexi. Otherwise, there will be no descendants for thousands of years in the main plot. Is it a problem? If you want a harem, hurry up and get Angel Leng, who can accompany you to take care of your offspring. Liang Bing can also get a space offspring. The main plot is to show off from the perspective of the offspring. Liang Bing can really get it before the time and space genes are taken away.

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It's pretty good, but I didn't take it all in. I'll give it one star less, just in case you're proud. In Chapter 47, Yan asked who the child's father was. What do you mean? Got a story?

The writing is good, but unfortunately the traffic is not high. It is less than 7,000 yuan while reading, and there are not many people who read it. The income of less than 10 yuan a day is regarded as love power generation.

It's a very nice book, good luck to the author!

It's very well written. I'll give it to you directly. Cheers to the author [laughing][laughing][laughing] Mark it and add a bookshelf to prevent it from being lost. Maybe one day I will read this book again and it will be finished. Come on, the author [laughs]

It's okay, but I personally feel that the offspring are produced too quickly, and it may not be easy to deal with later.

Overall good so far

The content is quite good, but I personally feel that the protagonist's character has grown too quickly. The latter philosophy is instantly separated from the previous one, for example, why did they fight? . If all the parts of a spaceship are replaced while it is in motion, will it still be the original spacecraft? In this case, is Yan a blank piece of paper protected by the protagonist? (They have been fighting and doing missions and stuff, but the instructor didn't mention it?) The protagonist is even more abrupt. An ordinary person is treated like an ant and played a training game. The power he has later is only limited. He is invincible. Even if it is not permanent, one day is enough for the concept god to do as he pleases.