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It is a very good book. It can be seen that the author has a certain literary background, at least someone who has read the book. There are various Internet memes in the book, which are also quite interesting. The world view is based on the background of the Middle Ages, but it is not that ignorant, because there are existences such as knights and witches, and the core power system of the novel, the magic crystal. However, there is really no development of the S-class, and everyone does not have a normal understanding. The protagonist is also a very interesting person. Although he is confident and free-spirited, I think he is extremely passive throughout the whole process. In other words, the plot of the book is that the protagonist just lets nature take its course. Because writing novels can make money, he just writes it. He can't write well. At this time, the heroine appears. After a period of time, the heroine has a good impression of the man, debates, fame, sister being bullied, and the protagonist's revenge. Everything is natural and reasonable. If you look closely, it feels like only a month or two has passed. All in all, it's well written.

Divine book! It is truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tian Can Tu Tu was in awe when he saw it! This is the reincarnation of the Four Great Classics, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins" lost some of its literary grace in front of it! "Dou Po" lost some connotation in front of it! " "Zhu Xian"? In front of it, there is no trace of emotion! ""Shading the Sky""? In front of it, there is a third of imagination! "Buddha"? In front of it, half of the layout is missing! This is a classic that has not been seen on the Internet for a century! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Confucius and Mo Laozhuang, the poets and poets, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Emperor Qin and Han Wu, Emperor Zong of Tang and Song Dynasty, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle - who can't read it without being amazed?! This book is truly the work of a man of heaven! It has brilliant literary talent and exquisite diction. It inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties and promotes the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties. It is deeply penetrating! It is truly a blessing to read this book in my lifetime!

Sliding away, the book looks outstanding and a natural one. I hope the author will consider his words carefully and not cross the line, so that this book can survive.

The writing is really good, the writing style in Tomato is top-notch, and it's pretty good-looking. The characters of the male and female protagonists have been well established in the early stage. The second part should be the beginning of the male protagonist's journey to become stronger. It stands to reason that the first part should be able to write one or two hundred chapters based on the early pace, but the author said that he has sped up. , But there's no problem, I just think it's a bit fast. I'm looking forward to the second part which should be a little slower. The only pity is that the author said that there are probably only 4 female protagonists in this book, which is a bit few for me. Of course, this is my personal problem. If this book becomes popular in the future, will the author add one or two more? [Thinking][Thinking] (This is fantasy time) Personally, I like 6 or 7 female protagonists. Of course, some people think there are too many female protagonists and want a single female protagonist or two female protagonists, hahaha. Everyone has their own preferences, so I like more.

Okay, good book. It's just that the rating is a bit low. Four stars. The author likes to make up settings midway, which makes me disgusted. Stories can. In order to engage in ambiguous left-brain and left-brain exchanges (in the same chapter), Samsung also feels that the text is trying to get the protagonist off the ground. So far, I have only written one novel. When the Western Fantasy Harem can be four stars. At first I thought I had found a treasure, but my expectations were probably too high. It doesn't work out later, it's too easy for the protagonist to level up, and the supporting characters feel like they've known each other for a long time, so it's not very rigorous. Pretend I didn't say anything about the sweet harem article. It's quite uncomfortable.

This Western fantasy book has no shortcomings except that the Western fantasy background is diluted by too many modern jokes. The characters are well created, and the Wenchao plot is also embarrassing. To be honest, the description of the Wenchao plot really made me, a person who has never read Don Quixote, enjoy reading it (I have already bought it and plan to read it when I go to school).

Review (I haven't written a book review for a long time) It's a good Western fantasy novel, with a reasonable world view and a reasonable tone. The characters of the protagonists and supporting characters are all good, and the writing is okay. There's nothing too wrong with it. I just can't see what the main plot is going to do. Develop a way for witches to live longer? (The main plot is a bit unclear). I have read more than 130 chapters so far. The writing is very good in terms of emotions, especially the sister line, which is top-notch in the entire Tomato. The character of the male protagonist is also very good. The specific content will not be disclosed. If you are interested, you can read it yourself. Overall, it's pretty good and worth watching (but why is the score so low? A bunch of large portions of tomatoes can be ranked 9 points)

It's quite good. Except for the pacing issue, many places are omitted. I like the main heroine the most. The younger sister feels a little faster. But considering that the author said there are four, it is acceptable at this pace. There is nothing major.

Text copy, but it is not important, because this world view is too vivid, humanities, geography, and history are self-consistent. There are as many gods as normal people, just like reality. Even if there are fantasy elements, it is very documentary. I like this style very much. The characters are not stereotyped, they have their own motivations and reasons, and they have different performances when facing various personnel situations. With the advantages mentioned above in the combination, it can be said that the viewing experience has been doubled. Recommended, even if you don't like copywriting (I do) you can try it. As my understanding of the world's knowledge declined, it became less and less interesting. There were a few sections where the geographical span was too sudden, too childish, and ruined the rhythm. After that, it was still two lines, very scattered and messy.

It has a hint of literary youth, but it doesn't miss the point. This combination is quite unexpected. The disadvantage is that the author does not like to add "" or [ ] to distinguish when writing about psychological activities, and the recall narrative is not separated from the main text. Increased reading difficulty. This has quite an impact on young authors. After all, most readers do not have the patience to spend much time distinguishing mixed passages. After all, they are unknown and do not know the details. It's interesting, but the author's book writing habits are really bad. If you want more readers to read it,

It was unexpectedly well written. To be honest, this book has been recommended on my homepage for more than ten days, but the name dissuaded me. I am really short of books today, so I opened it. The writing turned out to be very good? If this book could be renamed, it might be more attractive.

The writing style is so strong that I almost never read Western-style Western fantasy novels. Half of them are Chinese-style, Japanese-style, and Korean-style magic... How should I put it? At first I didn't like it, but the more I read, the more interesting it becomes [Cool][Cool][Cool]

I personally like western fantasy light novels very much. I still remember when I first saw Jobless Reincarnation in the first year of high school, I printed it with very small characters on A4 paper, cut it into small strips, and read it during class and self-study time. At that time, I had not yet recovered from the aftertaste of my third year of junior high school. I walked back to the dormitory from the classroom in a daze. When the first ray of sunlight broke out in the morning, I complained about why the shabby school had to run exercises. I spent the autumn and winter hating the school. Later, I heard my classmates say how unbelievable it was to be reincarnated without a job, so I wanted to go see it. At first, I went to see it with a critical attitude, so I found that this novel is very different from most others. Although there are some criticisms, the flaws are not concealed. What I saw is a world that satisfies my fantasy of a different world and is very real. It is a feeling that allows me to put the whine of the fan above my head as the background sound on a hot summer day, put aside the real world and focus on my own fantasy. After reading Jobless Reincarnation, I suddenly realized that otherworldly reincarnation novels can no longer give me the same feeling, except for this book. [Bookshelf plus one] The encounter between the protagonist and the heroine is very similar to that of my girlfriend and I, very cordial, and she even has a brother.

Judging from the content, it is a very good book. It has added some new original settings, which I think are very interesting and creative, and the language is quite humorous. However, the only drawback is that the author is not sure about the way the characters talk. There will be several plots of pure dialogue, with no action or other separation in between. , It will be a bit torturous for people who read without thinking, because they can't tell who said it, but the literary talent is very good, the author does not seem to be a newcomer, so far there is no bad point, but some logic is not strict, maybe I haven't read much, but at least it may be encountered by a new reader Some questions, such as I am very curious, where the sister's attitude towards the protagonist reverses, whether it is guessing that the protagonist is a time traveler, or forgiving the protagonist, the reason is not sufficient to directly change her face. Forgive me here, after all, it seems that the protagonist is a jerk in the past, and it is impossible to directly change her face because of more than ten silver coins. A big reversal of attitude. In this case, my sister has something to do with worshiping money. If someone refutes me, "Then the family conditions are difficult," then as a novel on Tomato, is there any difference between you and selling it? Do you want the protagonist's sister to just meet someone on the street and give him some money? On the time traveler side, it is impossible for anyone to easily trust someone they don't know. Even if he is indeed much better than the original person, what is the difference between just recognizing someone on the roadside as his brother who seems to have a better personality than the original person? At present, if there is no reasonable explanation later, it will be a bit disappointing, but there is no problem with the whole book. I can make up my own mind. In summary, if nothing happens, this book will definitely get a score of 8.8 Or above. Of course, it may also be caused by me not seeing the later part. I will change it later [eating melon]

The writing style is very relaxed and free, with a calm sense of epilepsy, and the author's language system is also very thunderous. Reading this book gave me the same feeling as when I read Jin Fu's book. It is very comfortable and interesting... I just hope it won't be cut in half like Jin Fu's book ()

It's a pity that it's over after only about 200 chapters. I thought it was due to the author's work, but it turned out that he was reported. It's rare to find something to your liking on Tomato🍅, but this is one of them. I quite like the story of Feike, Sister Shu and others. Obviously, the story has not fully unfolded yet, so now I can only give it five stars to commemorate it. Hey, who can help me make up for the missing witch girl? [Cry]

This book should only exist in heaven and be heard only a few times in life. 🍅Having an author like Toast Ghost Lord is like giving a big flag to the strong wind and a sword to the scabbard.

It's a masterpiece. The author is really talented. It's great that Tomato God has given power to us novel lovers who don't want to spend money. This book is almost completely to my liking. You, the author, are simply my soulmate.

Very good daily life, it moved me deeply I have only seen the early stage, but these twenty chapters have already demonstrated the author's excellent writing skills and daily control ability. It has plenty of laughs but is not cliche. The plot is relatively light-hearted so far, the setting is not new but innovative, and the language is fresh among Tomatoes. But maybe because it is a new book, the rating is not high. The first taste is of fairy grass. The author feels very alive. As long as he doesn't get sick, this book will not be bad. 🧐

It's a very interesting book, the world view is very novel, and the plots are good. The most difficult and highlight are the short sentences that come in two or three sentences. The author is really amazing. I'll be honest [face covering], I feel like I have never thought of these dirty words in my whole life. At present, I personally feel that the most lacking part is that the emotional line is not outstanding enough, and it is a bit mediocre and stiff.

The first volume is currently finished. The author has written it very well and is not procrastinating. However, I feel that I could actually write more. The first volume is only a little over a month old. In addition, I feel that the relationship between two people is too fast. I still prefer a slower and more involved one. As far as this is concerned, it is probably a single heroine or a dual heroine.

It has a bit of a publishing literature feel, but it doesn't look too cool in Tomato. It's not suitable for those who like to read short stories, but if you want to read seriously and don't want to leave nothing behind after reading it, you can give it a try.

The writing style is slightly faster, the connection between the plots is well handled, the world view and the logic of the characters' behavior are self-consistent and reasonable, and it can be easily watched. However, every time the relationship line is played, the female protagonist is positioned like the male protagonist, and it feels like the author has overstepped her role.

So far, I've read it quite well. I quite like it. At that time, the title of the book almost persuaded me to reject it because I thought it was a fan work. I just sometimes feel that the environment is too detailed, so it's not a flaw. I just can't think of a picture that's too detailed.

It's very well written. The second volume is a little different from the first volume. It's obviously not as serious as the first volume. But compared to what others have written, it's still very good. Keep writing, I think you have the potential to become a god.

It's so pretty, I can't remember the last time I found gold in a tomato. . . At present, the rhythm is controlled very well. If it keeps up like this, the score will definitely be very high. Hate~ I hate it so much! I'm going to die if I can't see the update! Update soon!

Although the plot is a bit flawed, other aspects such as the relationship are very good at making up for it. The flaws do not hide the good points. It's pretty good. Come on, author. Tsk, the plot... Okay, just pretend I didn't say it

It's good-looking, entertaining, and has a lot of twists and turns.

A good book, but the writing is uncomfortable. Half the time I read it, I was afraid that there was a gay hiding under my bed.

What about One Hundred Years of Solitude? The ones that fit the most are One Hundred Years of Solitude and Don Quixote I'm so rough, buddy, you're really good at it [salute]