A Young Genius's Path Through Officialdom

The writing and plot were a bit green at the beginning. It can be regarded as the running-in between the reader and the author. The more it goes on, the more exciting it becomes. Moreover, the protagonist's resume is not overwhelming. It is quite rare in today's tomato. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Some people blame me for writing multiple love lines. That's not to write about the protagonist being lecherous. Otherwise, where would the conflicts occur and where would the program effect be? If the relationship with the heroine was smooth sailing and he became a son-in-law? There would be no suspense in that way. There is a conflict in the emotional line. Some plots will unfold later. Otherwise the protagonist is too perfect as a person. There is no such thing as a perfect person. That is not a human being, but a god. Others won't feel comfortable using it. After all, there is a saying that Wang Mang is humble and has not usurped the time. Also, please give me some time. The plot of the novel is not advancing quickly because I plan to write a very long novel. I will read your comments and I will also arrange the plots with good suggestions. Recently, I have spent time renovating the previous content. I feel that there are many places in the first 200 chapters that are not well written and have too much nonsense. The main reason is that I have no previous experience and the writing is not very good. So now I start to renovate about 10 chapters every day, and try to renovate and repair the previous 200 chapters in a month. Looking back now, my writing four months ago was indeed very poor. You can always say one thing several times. The logic is not very smooth either. I'll try my best to modify it, hahahaha

I am honored to be the first reader of this book. Very well written.

The writing is good. If you have good grades, it should be at least 3 million words or more. Because if you write too carefully, it will appear cumbersome and boring. You need to read it carefully. Very few people can read a book seriously.

The writing is not bad, it has the flavor of the times, and the story atmosphere is also very good. In short, it is logical, and it is also a pleasure to accompany the protagonist's growth step by step.

The author's writing is very good and the plot is smooth and attractive.

How come no one reads such a good book? The development of the plot, characterization, and handling of character relationships are all very good.

I can watch it, it's a cool little novel with a smooth plot, but the emotional line is a bit ambiguous in many ways, so I didn't like it very much. This article gave me a very familiar writing technique, "The Ordinary World of Wang Manyin's Life", especially the narrative technique after Wang Manyin took office in the county seat is exactly the same as this one, and there is almost no difference. There are a lot of parallelism and lyricism, and descriptions from the perspective of bystanders. I don't know if it is AI. It doesn't look like a novel, but feels a bit like a biography.

I'll give it four stars first, I don't know what will happen next. This book is to my liking. The ideas are clear and the writing is smooth. Some of the detailed environment descriptions of Rebirth are consistent with that era. Let's see how the logical thinking goes behind.

Not bad, good looking, keep it up.