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It's great, it's great, each chapter has a lot of words, and it's very filling. This is the sweet flavor of love. Yes, the main plot and battle are just the spices of love. The only shortcoming is that some plot directions lack foreshadowing, and some parts seem a bit unclear. This should be due to the lack of necessary explanations and descriptions of spatial layout. For example, when Shinobu travels to the real world, there is no description of the relative positions of the protagonist's ward and the protagonist's own room, and their respective layouts. Although readers can imagine for themselves, after all, everyone imagines different scenes. It will be weird if the character's behavior based on the environment is different from what the reader imagines. Of course it doesn't affect my enjoyment of the love scenes. Here's a suggestion: When writing scene changes, especially when it's related to time, such as how long after. This can be described in a more artistic and "lengthy" form. The key is to separate it into independent paragraphs. It would be better if you add a dividing line like... Before switching scenes. Of course, the author may have used this method, but there are many times when I read it and I really don't know how to reach the new scene. I understand a little bit. Many nonsensical things in the article may make sense, or they may be some foreshadowing. I won't spoil the details [laughs]

The battle is okay, so is the emotional line, but the protagonist is a bit too strong. The He Dao in the Zezuo Transparent World is not fully activated, so he kills the second one by himself. It is not realistic, but the problem is not big. Five stars [blowing kiss]

It's not too much to give yourself a five-star review.

It's a good book. From the beginning to the middle, it's very well written in terms of emotions and fighting, especially when you travel to modern times. I like it very much. I like reading this kind of book very much. It's just that the world view feels a bit too big at the end, and then maybe I jumped too much and couldn't understand it, but luckily it came back together in the end. It's a pity that I didn't write a sequel. Generally speaking, it's still the same. Seeing what everyone has said, it's never better to read it yourself. Come on, author, I hope to write another one.

Very unique idea, good luck to the author!

Come on, the author writes well.

Very good, but the writing is not particularly good

The author writes quickly, it is not enough to read, not enough to read.

There are two worlds at the same time, the subject matter is novel, and the author's writing style is also highly recommended to those who like Shinobi [Like] The plot is compact and not sloppy. I was really surprised when the truth was slowly revealed in the later stage. I just hope the author will not make the ending too complicated.

The transformation of the world, the depiction of characters, and the description of actions are all very specific, giving people an immersive feeling.

It's very, very beautiful. It's the best book I've seen with Shinobu as the heroine.