Daiyu: My General Sister

It's a really great book. I've read so many books. Whether it's a fanfic or an original, the royal family is basically all in intrigue. It's really rare to see such a royal family where brothers, friends, father, father, and son are filial. The heroine's character is also very attractive, and the emperor's suspects don't need to be trusted. It's really a very novel concept, and it's worth reading. The author is very impressed [Adore][Adore][Adore][Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It's rare to see a Red Mansions fanfic that doesn't involve someone scheming with the emperor.

It's really good to watch. The heroine is patriotic and serves the country. She has grown from a little boy to a general step by step, and pledged herself to the country. That's it. Seeing the heroine missing her parents for the last time, being trapped in the Lin Mansion and hearing the news of her death, etc., My heart ached. My eyes kept moistening while watching, and Daiyu was also well protected... Finally, I would like to praise the author. His writing style is really good and it is easy to sympathize with him. He is definitely unique among the fans of Red Mansion [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] (Hurry up and update!!!

After reading the extra story, it's really sweet. Jiayu didn't suffer so much. All she cared about was around her, and she spent her life peacefully. It would be great if it was really like this. Jiayu deserves such perfection, but there is always a feeling of loss. What kind of life does Jiayu want? In the text, Jiayu belongs to the battlefield. She was born to be a female general. She endured heavy training. She went to countless battlefields, climbed over piles of dead men, saw her comrades leave, beheaded enemies, and protected unarmed people. With her weak body, she shouldered the burden of her family and country. In the midst of the war, she wrote the legend of women not being allowed to take precedence over men, which frightened the enemy. She was born with a sword, and she left after completing her mission. She was only 37 years old. It made me feel sad to see her. I not only want Jiayu to have the perfection in the extra story, but also want Jiayu to have the battlefield in the main story. I am really too greedy. The author's imagination is really good, the characters are vivid, and the characters are slightly different from other fans. There is not so much love and love, but more about family, master and apprentice, family and country, and righteousness. This is my favorite article in the second series of Red Mansions that I have read so far. When I read this article in Tomato, I really feel like I have struck gold. Highly recommended!

It's very interesting and the plot is quite compact. I really like the characters in it. I hope the author will give me more support.

The author wrote this work with great care. The author's writing style is very delicate and better than the novels I usually read. I highly recommend it. I hope you can keep writing [Blow Kiss][Blow Kiss]

It's good to read [crying] [crying], it's really good to read. I seldom read books about Red Mansions. When I saw this book this morning, I was so excited that I read it. I didn't expect it to be so easy to cry. When I read it from Jiayu's perspective, I would really cry to death. I left my parents to live alone in Beijing when I was 6 years old. I went to the battlefield at the age of 8. When I was 11 years old, I didn't catch up with my mother for the last time. When I was 14, I didn't catch up with my father for the last time. If it were me, I would really collapse [almost crying] [almost crying]

I saw a different red building. Maybe it's a bit too much. It has a bit of the feeling of national love and love in previous dramas. First put an end to external chaos, then put an end to internal thieves. Worth a look. Some of the text descriptions are quite repetitive, but you can see that the author is there. Try to express an emotion. This is something that only existed in TV series a long time ago.

This is a book that made me feel silent. There is no cookie-cutter plot. It is all about friendship, family affection, patriotism, and sticking to one's true heart. It makes me feel inexplicably sad when I read it. The number of words is not long, but the story is told very clearly. It feels slow but fast. After reading it, I felt depressed.

The writing is good, and I have read a lot of Dream of the Red Mansions fans. [Thinking] This one is my favorite ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭*As long as it doesn't end or get interrupted, I can keep following it ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧Jia Jia and Yu'er are both good babies ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭* Beautiful ୧(´▽`★)୭! ദ്ദി (⩌ᴗ⩌ )

It's very beautiful, really, I don't know how to describe it. Maybe the author's writing style is not top-notch, but I was moved by the emotion in the words. This book has just been updated to more than a hundred chapters, and I haven't skipped a word. Following the author's writing, I saw a "powerful" heroine, saw her pain and joy, and felt sorry for her. When I clicked on this book, I wanted to see Daiyu break away from the original script, see her be happy, and see her grow wantonly. I did see it. Jiayu is a good general, a good apprentice, and a good sister. But now, I hope she can have less regrets and less pain.

The words written by the author always reveal a touch of sadness, like moistening things silently. You can read them immersedly, feel the emotions expressed in the words, and fall into the whirlpool of sadness, creating unforgettable memories. Very well written

The writing style is really good, with a sense of life and closeness, and a plain sense of art, especially the words and deeds of our Jiayu, which completely outline a living person, and Daiyu is really well raised by Jiayu's side. She is quiet but also has the lively and cute side of a little girl. The author raised the two protagonists very well, wow wow, which makes me feel soft. The other marches are also well written. They are not grand scenes, but the emotions are delicate and really beautiful! ! !

Goodbye! I believe they will live well in another time and space without wars and intrigues! See you next time! Ps. I really love your writing style. It's not a rush, it's not a procrastination, there's no overly gorgeous rhetoric, and it's not words unearthed on an assembly line. It's more like a long stream of water, like an old storyteller holding a piece of wood, slapping it on the desk, and slowly telling their story—— Thank you for showing their lives to us. In my heart, they are living people, with flesh and blood. I pieced it together in the text and spelled out every vivid character. Thanks again, see you next time!

Objectively speaking, I have read novels for so many years, and it is worth giving it five stars. I read reviews saying that the writing style is not good, but in my opinion, the writing style is pretty good, and the most important thing about the novel is that it cannot be poisonous. The logic of this novel is also good, and the subject matter is also good, so I can continue to read it for a long time. I think it's good if the protagonist doesn't have any cheats. He's talented, which is a small opening at best, and can be read for a long time. Some novels have a starting system that has such a big hook that it's not easy to write later.

Tied. Very well written! I was moved to tears all the time. Jiajia suffered a lot, but there were more and more people standing around me, and my heart felt warm watching it!

It's very interesting. It's different from other Red Mansions fan fiction. It focuses on the cruelty of the battlefield and the complexity of the capital. Of course, it also writes about the warmth of human nature.

This is the best one among the many Red Mansions fanfics I have read, although I don't think it scores very high. But I believe the points will gradually rise later. The writing is also very good, and he doesn't seem to have strong emotions like others that I like better. For example, look at me and laugh or burst into tears. There is a faint feeling of sadness throughout the article. How to describe it? At once. Sort of like. When I was in my third year of high school, my grandfather passed away suddenly. When I got home at night and received the news, I was so confused that I couldn't react. I couldn't cry, but I felt depressed and sad. It's not a cool story, it's all about staying put, so it feels very, maybe a little aggrieved from the beginning, and I feel that the heroine will suffer a lot. But there is a slight problem, that is, the imperial concubine directly issued the decree, but everything else is pretty good.

Super pretty! The author's writing style is not piled up with gorgeous words. The description is very delicate, with a touch of sadness (self-understanding, don't criticize). It can be seen that the author has a very solid foundation. It must be praised! [Sending Hearts]

How should I put it, there is a touch of sadness, obviously there is no heart-rending scene in particular, but I am inexplicably tearful [almost crying] (so beautiful!)

It's beautiful, and the writing is very good. I haven't seen this kind of heroine for a long time. The simple description makes the image stand out, and the family line is really written so that people can relate to it. The relationship between women is well written. I haven't seen this kind of heroine in a long time. She is calm, smart, rational, and super loving. The author is awesome!

Oh my god [crying] The teacher's description is really good! ! The emotions are also very spot on, especially those that use scenery to set off emotions. The understanding is very vivid and vivid, not hard at all, and the writing is very good [crying] [crying] [crying] Seeing Jiayu growing up little by little, I am really happy to see it [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's not bad, because I stayed up late to read it, so now I have forgotten what I wanted to write when writing a review. I just remember that one of the three lightning protections made me cry all the way, the tears didn't stop [crying] [crying with laughter], and one was a side story. There were two of them with the third prince's cp. If you don't like it, you can skip it (I skipped it, although the main text took another bite, Jiayu was too bitter [crying], but I still hope that Jiayu has no cp, for me her cp is Dahei [smirk] (cb)). Another thing is that some of the content written by the author is repetitive, and the number of repetitions is too many, which doesn't feel good. Nothing else, the author thought a lot and the content is really well written.

I may be too empathic. I cried several times while reading this book. Although I know it is a novel, I have never read this type of novel in my childhood. It is very novel and amazing. Come on, the author, and work hard to read more.

The characters are distinct, the articles are compact, and everyone is written with flesh and blood.

The author writes very well. I really love your story! Jiayu's portrayal is particularly good. When watching, she was involved in the whole process, and her emotions were led by the plot. I really like it! It has been recommended to me with five-star reviews, and I look forward to updating it soon! ! ! Love you[love][love][love]

Advantages: Cool! Nice. Disadvantages: not enough [angry] not enough at all! ! ! [Code to live][code to live][code to live][code to live] [Laughing awkwardly] I regret it

It's very interesting to watch, and the plot is also good, but it's too uncomfortable for emotional people. I cried while watching it. Of course, it also shows that the author has written well. I feel sorry for Jiayu and Daiyu. I feel sorry for Jiayu who has to protect her sister and herself in a court where people are mixed at a young age. Their efforts can also be felt by the soldiers on the battlefield. I keep crying.

The writing is exquisite and the descriptions are profound. This is the third time I read the book and cried. The second time was "There is a Canteen by the Clouds" and the first time was "Happy Birthday Asuka". It has the power to touch people's hearts, and it brings sadness and helplessness of fate into the heart bit by bit. At the same time, it also has the silent harmony and warmth between family members. In addition, the author's writing skills are profound and good at creating atmosphere, allowing readers to understand the psychology of the characters themselves from the description, making the characters rich and three-dimensional. Really, I have never read a few chapters and spontaneously want to write some Chinese reading and appreciation articles for each paragraph. I am very lazy (a late-stage lazy cancer patient), but I think this book is worth writing so many words.

I think the emotional expression is so great, I almost cried while watching it, I love it so much! ! !