[Two male protagonists + master and apprentice + two strong men + group portrait]
The book is finished.
The author is a bad namer, please forgive the somewhat Mary Sue name.
Cold-faced Master Suffers from Black Lotus's Loyal Dog Apprentice
Yan Changge's whole family died violently, and Chuan Shu became the villain master who died tragically.
In order to survive, he just wanted to take advantage of the system's loopholes, remain quiet, and casually accept a disciple.
*
"There is harmony when singing a long song, and there is a lamp when walking alone. Just call me Xu Youdeng."
He gave his young apprentice a new name, a place to live, and a family.
*
"Master, I want to be with you in life and death."
"Seriously?"
"Do you know how I feel when I hear that?"
"Proud, extremely proud."
Yan Changge: "But you didn't say that you are actually the villain tyrant in the original book!"
*
Those were the three fastest times Xu Youdeng's heart beat.
For the first time, the mother-in-law died for her country.
The second time, when he was incapable of doing anything, the senior sister died.
The third time, when he was at his most capable, the master died.
He held Master's hand, and his cynical heart beat for him, irrigating every fiber of his being.
"Master, don't leave. How about we go home? I only have you."
Ten years of companionship and ten years of hugging each other, no bones left behind.
*
Just when Yan Changge thought his young apprentice had forgotten him, unexpectedly, he came directly to his door.
"Master, where do you want to run to? I beg you, please love me."
"Please, please kiss me."
Reader comments
This is a well-written classic with great staying power. The writing style is elegant and concise, the words and sentences have charm, and the wording and sentence construction are delicate and tense. Every word is absorbed in your heart when you read it. The early stages of the story are full of sadness and cruelty, and my body is warm in the middle of the story. In the middle, the estrangement, inability to control oneself, and the dilemma of love and hate are intertwined. Misunderstandings and fate constantly surround the two of them. The restrained affection is hidden in the words and deeds of the eyes. Every time they rub shoulders and let down, it is heart-wrenching. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the changes in mood between the master and the apprentice are vividly depicted, and the entanglement of love and hate is portrayed very contagiously. The sadism is progressive but not deliberately sensational. It uses excellent writing to describe all the regrets and deep feelings. The plot is ups and downs and touches the mind. It will take a long time to put it down after reading it. It is a high-quality masterpiece that will be unforgettable after reading it. Although I don't know why so few people read it, maybe it's because my wife was manipulated by capital.
The characters written by the teacher are very distinctive, not just the protagonists Yan and Deng'er. Senior Sister Ying and Song Hansheng, Pei Wan and Lu Congwen, Qiu Shui, Yu Zisong, all have unique personalities and settings. Yan is not a traditional time-travel system setting. I really didn't expect [cry][cry][cry] when I saw the later part. Senior Sister Ying's offline was really caught off guard, and I didn't even react. When Pei first appeared on the scene, I thought he was the traditional Long Aotian who would be slapped in the face later. Later I realized that everyone was just a little bitter melon [crying][crying][crying].
Come on, teacher! !
I shed 1.3 Tears. The plot is touching and makes people cry. Among them, the part about Sister Xue's death made me heartbroken (send a razor blade to the author)
The little ambiguity between the master and the apprentice is also very well described. The master and the apprentice are lovers.
The writing is quite good, and the creation of each character is very vivid. It can be said that it is an innovation in the traditional master-disciple novel, and it is very clever. However, I feel that the writing style is not good. There may be many golden sentences in the article, but I think the main focus of the novel is the activities of the characters, focusing on the description and motivation of the characters' actions, otherwise it will appear empty. It does feel like a group portrait, but the group portrait is in the protagonist's activities. The readers follow the protagonist's perspective and discover the uniqueness of each person, but the feeling is not written out.
Overall, it is a very good novel. I will be impressed by every character in it. It is very interesting. I plan to continue reading it and then review it^ ^
I feel it is a very special book among novels of the same type. The writing is good, the plot is not sluggish, and it feels bland (?). It is another novel that I am interested in reading after a long time. The emotional description is delicate, the characters are not one-dimensional, and the content is not boring. At least I am interested in it. The characters are also rich in personality and the daily life is very warm. Sadistic. But I just like to watch some physical and mental abuse. Come on, author. (Sorry for writing a book review for the first time) [Blowing a kiss]
Super
It's so awesome. The teacher's psychological and emotional descriptions are very powerful and can move people's hearts. Everyone is very three-dimensional and vivid. They are all from Little Bitter Melon😭. Unknowingly, it's tied💔. It's awesome. It's a five-star review.
The emotional lines are very rich and the characterization is also very good. If you like this kind of treasure, you can go straight to it!
My Fake, what an authoritative article. There are group portraits, family ties and love, and the deputy CP is also very good. Wuwuwu, a few of them are little bitter gourds. I really want to watch Xiao Wan and Cong Wen's extra story. Wuwuwu. [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]
There is a light in the long song, a gentle and chilling sound, Xiao Wan heard it from now on, please hold each other's hand tightly, never let go, never separate again.
Everyone has their own unique emotional and growth lines. The writing is really, really great. It doesn't focus much on describing love, but it's not less. The writing is really great. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]
OK, it's also very awesome. It's a bit low and high. In the early stage, you can see that the writing is more or less online, and then it starts to cut and cut. I don't know why there are so few people watching it. Does anyone like Song Guanjing? I feel more melancholy than my brother. I recommend it.
The author really knows how to poke people! Every character seemed to be standing in front of me alive, and the emotional lines were not sloppy at all. There were no inexplicable misunderstandings or bloody plots. Every step of development was logical and made my aunt unable to stop laughing throughout the whole process. This is the high-quality novel we want to read!
The three words "Ying Shang Xue" tell the story of her short life. But the whole text cannot be separated from those three words [crying]
Nice! Nice! ! Nice! ! !
It's nice, but I don't know why there are so few people.
I like the article very much... The author writes it beautifully!
The writing is good and the plot is nice and heartwarming. Excellent book recommendations, read them all.
The writing is delicate, the emotional expression is just right, the characters are vividly drawn, everything is good, but the story of Ying Yingxue made me a little bit dead.
This is a well-written classic with great staying power. The writing style is elegant and concise, the words and sentences have charm, and the wording and sentence construction are delicate and tense. Every word is absorbed in your heart when you read it. The early stages of the story are full of sadness and cruelty, and my body is warm in the middle of the story. In the middle, the estrangement, inability to control oneself, and the dilemma of love and hate are intertwined. Misunderstandings and fate constantly surround the two of them. The restrained affection is hidden in the words and deeds of the eyes. Every time they rub shoulders and let down, it is heart-wrenching. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the changes in mood between the master and the apprentice are vividly depicted, and the entanglement of love and hate is portrayed very contagiously. The sadism is progressive but not deliberately sensational. It uses excellent writing to describe all the regrets and deep feelings. The plot is ups and downs and touches the mind. It will take a long time to put it down after reading it. It is a high-quality masterpiece that will be unforgettable after reading it. Although I don't know why so few people read it, maybe it's because my wife was manipulated by capital.
The characters written by the teacher are very distinctive, not just the protagonists Yan and Deng'er. Senior Sister Ying and Song Hansheng, Pei Wan and Lu Congwen, Qiu Shui, Yu Zisong, all have unique personalities and settings. Yan is not a traditional time-travel system setting. I really didn't expect [cry][cry][cry] when I saw the later part. Senior Sister Ying's offline was really caught off guard, and I didn't even react. When Pei first appeared on the scene, I thought he was the traditional Long Aotian who would be slapped in the face later. Later I realized that everyone was just a little bitter melon [crying][crying][crying]. Come on, teacher! !
I shed 1.3 Tears. The plot is touching and makes people cry. Among them, the part about Sister Xue's death made me heartbroken (send a razor blade to the author) The little ambiguity between the master and the apprentice is also very well described. The master and the apprentice are lovers.
The writing is quite good, and the creation of each character is very vivid. It can be said that it is an innovation in the traditional master-disciple novel, and it is very clever. However, I feel that the writing style is not good. There may be many golden sentences in the article, but I think the main focus of the novel is the activities of the characters, focusing on the description and motivation of the characters' actions, otherwise it will appear empty. It does feel like a group portrait, but the group portrait is in the protagonist's activities. The readers follow the protagonist's perspective and discover the uniqueness of each person, but the feeling is not written out. Overall, it is a very good novel. I will be impressed by every character in it. It is very interesting. I plan to continue reading it and then review it^ ^
I feel it is a very special book among novels of the same type. The writing is good, the plot is not sluggish, and it feels bland (?). It is another novel that I am interested in reading after a long time. The emotional description is delicate, the characters are not one-dimensional, and the content is not boring. At least I am interested in it. The characters are also rich in personality and the daily life is very warm. Sadistic. But I just like to watch some physical and mental abuse. Come on, author. (Sorry for writing a book review for the first time) [Blowing a kiss]
Super
It's so awesome. The teacher's psychological and emotional descriptions are very powerful and can move people's hearts. Everyone is very three-dimensional and vivid. They are all from Little Bitter Melon😭. Unknowingly, it's tied💔. It's awesome. It's a five-star review.
The emotional lines are very rich and the characterization is also very good. If you like this kind of treasure, you can go straight to it!
My Fake, what an authoritative article. There are group portraits, family ties and love, and the deputy CP is also very good. Wuwuwu, a few of them are little bitter gourds. I really want to watch Xiao Wan and Cong Wen's extra story. Wuwuwu. [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] There is a light in the long song, a gentle and chilling sound, Xiao Wan heard it from now on, please hold each other's hand tightly, never let go, never separate again. Everyone has their own unique emotional and growth lines. The writing is really, really great. It doesn't focus much on describing love, but it's not less. The writing is really great. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]
OK, it's also very awesome. It's a bit low and high. In the early stage, you can see that the writing is more or less online, and then it starts to cut and cut. I don't know why there are so few people watching it. Does anyone like Song Guanjing? I feel more melancholy than my brother. I recommend it.
The author really knows how to poke people! Every character seemed to be standing in front of me alive, and the emotional lines were not sloppy at all. There were no inexplicable misunderstandings or bloody plots. Every step of development was logical and made my aunt unable to stop laughing throughout the whole process. This is the high-quality novel we want to read! The three words "Ying Shang Xue" tell the story of her short life. But the whole text cannot be separated from those three words [crying]
Nice! Nice! ! Nice! ! !
It's nice, but I don't know why there are so few people.
I like the article very much... The author writes it beautifully!
The writing is good and the plot is nice and heartwarming. Excellent book recommendations, read them all.
The writing is delicate, the emotional expression is just right, the characters are vividly drawn, everything is good, but the story of Ying Yingxue made me a little bit dead.