[Two male leads + master and disciple, younger disciple + two powerful leads + ensemble cast]
The novel is complete.
The author is terrible at naming things, so please forgive this somewhat Mary Sue-esque title.
Cold-faced, fiery master on the receiving end × black-hearted, devoted puppy of a disciple
After his entire family is killed, Yan Changge transmigrates into a book as the villainous master who dies a gruesome death.
To stay alive, all he wants is to exploit loopholes in the System and lie low. On a whim, he takes in a disciple.
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“Changge has harmony, and a lone traveler has a lamp. I’ll call you Xu Youdeng.”
He gave his little disciple a new name, a place to settle, and a home.
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“Master, I want to share life and death with you.”
“Truly?”
“Do you know how I felt when I heard that?”
“Pleased. Extremely pleased.”
Yan Changge: “But you never told me you were the tyrant villain from the original book!”
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Those were the three times Xu Youdeng’s heart beat fastest.
The first was when his mother consort gave her life for her country.
The second was when his senior sister died, and he was powerless to stop it.
The third was when his master died, just as he had gained the power to protect him.
He held his master’s hand. That heart, so full of resentment toward the world, would beat for him too, its warmth reaching every inch of his body.
“Master, don’t go. Let’s go home, please. You’re all I have.”
Ten years together, ten years in each other’s arms, and not a trace of his remains.
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Just when Yan Changge thought his little disciple had forgotten him, the young man showed up at his door.
“Master, where are you trying to run? I’m begging you, please love me.”
“Please, won’t you kiss me?”
This is a well-written classic with great staying power. The writing style is elegant and concise, the words and sentences have charm, and the wording and sentence construction are delicate and tense. Every word is absorbed in your heart when you read it. The early stages of the story are full of sadness and cruelty, and my body is warm in the middle of the story. In the middle, the estrangement, inability to control oneself, and the dilemma of love and hate are intertwined. Misunderstandings and fate constantly surround the two of them. The restrained affection is hidden in the words and deeds of the eyes. Every time they rub shoulders and let down, it is heart-wrenching. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the changes in mood between the master and the apprentice are vividly depicted, and the entanglement of love and hate is portrayed very contagiously. The sadism is progressive but not deliberately sensational. It uses excellent writing to describe all the regrets and deep feelings. The plot is ups and downs and touches the mind. It will take a long time to put it down after reading it. It is a high-quality masterpiece that will be unforgettable after reading it. Although I don't know why so few people read it, maybe it's because my wife was manipulated by capital.
The characters written by the teacher are very distinctive, not just the protagonists Yan and Deng'er. Senior Sister Ying and Song Hansheng, Pei Wan and Lu Congwen, Qiu Shui, Yu Zisong, all have unique personalities and settings. Yan is not a traditional time-travel system setting. I really didn't expect 😢😢😢 when I saw the later part. Senior Sister Ying's offline was really caught off guard, and I didn't even react. When Pei first appeared on the scene, I thought he was the traditional Long Aotian who would be slapped in the face later. Later I realized that everyone was just a little bitter melon 😢😢😢. Come on, teacher!!
The writing is quite good, and the creation of each character is very vivid. It can be said that it is an innovation in the traditional master-disciple novel, and it is very clever. However, I feel that the writing style is not good. There may be many golden sentences in the article, but I think the main focus of the novel is the activities of the characters, focusing on the description and motivation of the characters' actions, otherwise it will appear empty. It does feel like a group portrait, but the group portrait is in the protagonist's activities. The readers follow the protagonist's perspective and discover the uniqueness of each person, but the feeling is not written out. Overall, it is a very good novel. I will be impressed by every character in it. It is very interesting. I plan to continue reading it and then review it^ ^
I shed 1.3 Tears. The plot is touching and makes people cry. Among them, the part about Sister Xue's death made me heartbroken (send a razor blade to the author) The little ambiguity between the master and the apprentice is also very well described. The master and the apprentice are lovers.
I feel it is a very special book among novels of the same type. The writing is good, the plot is not sluggish, and it feels bland (?). It is another novel that I am interested in reading after a long time. The emotional description is delicate, the characters are not one-dimensional, and the content is not boring. At least I am interested in it. The characters are also rich in personality and the daily life is very warm. Sadistic. But I just like to watch some physical and mental abuse. Come on, author. (Sorry for writing a book review for the first time) [Blowing a kiss]
It's so awesome. The teacher's psychological and emotional descriptions are very powerful and can move people's hearts. Everyone is very three-dimensional and vivid. They are all from Little Bitter Melon😭. Unknowingly, it's tied💔. It's awesome. It's a five-star review.
Super
My Fake, what an authoritative article. There are group portraits, family ties and love, and the deputy CP is also very good. Wuwuwu, a few of them are little bitter gourds. I really want to watch Xiao Wan and Cong Wen's extra story. Wuwuwu. [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] There is a light in the long song, a gentle and chilling sound, Xiao Wan heard it from now on, please hold each other's hand tightly, never let go, never separate again. Everyone has their own unique emotional and growth lines. The writing is really, really great. It doesn't focus much on describing love, but it's not less. The writing is really great. 🥺 🥺 🥺
OK, it's also very awesome. It's a bit low and high. In the early stage, you can see that the writing is more or less online, and then it starts to cut and cut. I don't know why there are so few people watching it. Does anyone like Song Guanjing? I feel more melancholy than my brother. I recommend it.
The emotional lines are very rich and the characterization is also very good. If you like this kind of treasure, you can go straight to it!