Ascetic Commander? I Will Taste Your Soul First as a Tribute

Ahhhhh, it's so confusing and embarrassing to ask a social-phobic person to review my book! ! Help me🆘! ( ✘_✘ )↯ But if Persimmon is not given to abortion or business, the child will not be seen... So I'm going to start bragging about myself (ง •̀_•́)ง Our young demon master, Xiao Nie, is really cute. He just keeps seducing and seduce him and then gets involved with her. If you like barefooted ones, don't let him go, okay? Commander Jian is so ruthless and has a sense of security that you can always trust that his father is older (I guess Xiao Nie is 222 years old but he is actually just an adult hhh)! ! Now that I've finished praising you, dear readers, you've read this far, why don't you read the article? ٩(๑`ȏ´๑)۶ I hope you can leave a comment. Although I am afraid of society, I may not reply, but I will be very happy when I see it [send my heart] [send my heart] Okay, I'm going to dig a hole and get in, peacefully. Jpg

So delicious! It looks like they are pulling each other but in fact they are doting on each other. The emotionally stable father-like boss and the arrogant and seductive little devil are so cute. Their tails, wings and bare feet are just so cool🥰! The plot is very compact and develops quickly. There are no bloody misunderstandings between the attacker and the enemy, and they try to understand each other! Needless to say delicious, the extras are even more delicious😋

The pace of this book feels very fast, and it is very delicious. The writing is also very good, and the character creation is even more delicious. I feel that the world view is also quite novel. I have never seen anything similar to this book. I like it very much. Nebuhel is simply a proud and precious cat. It is so cute. . It's really cute. This book is absolutely beautiful. I highly recommend it. No matter the interaction or everything, it is very cute. The young lovers must be entangled forever. This cute little devil is simply the cutest thing among cute things. It's a very good book. After reading it, I still felt that I still had more to learn. It's just that it's too short and not enough to read. . Anyway, the author is really awesome.

! ! ! Super pretty (☆▽☆) Is it actually the first book? That teacher is very strong. The world view is completely resistant to attack, and it has the foundation to write a full-length novel. It was over just after tying the score, which was very painful. This blend of Western fantasy and apocalypse is moderately soft and extremely delicious. Some minor characters are also portrayed very accurately and clearly, with a strong sense of immersion. You can completely feel the vivid life of the characters in the novel. . . The plot line and emotional line also work well together! No procrastination! Although they all progress very quickly, they are very reasonable and will not make people feel abrupt. The action scenes are described very well! ! ! ! ! The body movements create images before my eyes! Whether it's a big battle or a military academy drill, it's great! Jian Yuxing's character is not as single as I imagined. He can directly analyze his own psychology and speak his mind directly. Xiao Nie is pure and cute. Although she is a devil, she has a clean and kind soul. But I feel like there are still a lot of holes that have not been filled, right? Is there a common turmoil between the demon world and the human world? Will the final demon world decline? Are there any fused mutants left in the world? I hope the extra chapter can explain it clearly(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.) Plus! I want to swap the identities of Jian and Ning! Similar to "Jian Yuxing woke up and found that he had turned into a demon" I hope the teacher can continue to create! ! ! (*´ω｀*)

Just finished reading it, it's a book worth reading! The little devil is so arrogant, cute and well-behaved (a little naughty), Commander Jane looks more serious and aloof, but also very safe and doting! Especially the soul-eating part is really tempting and pulling [admiration]. It's fun to watch the two strong men. Please don't let go of these little devils and the commander! The author's writing style is so delicate! Especially the descriptions of characters, actions, and environments are very visual while reading. I look forward to the author's next works getting better and better! [Blowing kiss]

The author's writing is very fluent, and the plot is also good-looking. The setting of the little devil is very cute, like a kitten or puppy, hahaha (no), who knows the value of the cold commander unbuttoning himself and raising his head to suck blood! All! Come! Knock!

I was attracted by the character as soon as I read the introduction and finished reading the main text. The short story is fast paced and I finished it in one day. The little devil is so cute, and the family relationship in the middle is also very touching [crying] It's just that the writing is a bit short, and there are still some things that I haven't explained.

The writing was good and the characters were relatively good, but it was too short. I thought it was about to burst into flames, but it suddenly disappeared. I thought I would write about the relationship between region and mutants in the end, but it ended with nothing. When I read the introduction, I thought it was the kind that has always been very powerful, and then there was one in its heyday. As a demon in the early stage, when I saw the ending, I thought that there would be a time to go to the battlefield later. The ending was too sudden, and the energy was not yet under control. Even about the mother at the end, I thought that the last team of them would go to the battlefield together, and then destroy the enemy together. Apart from the fact that it was not enjoyable to watch, there was nothing wrong with it. This is the first book written by Da Da. I think it is very powerful. I hope Da Da will make more and more progress.

What a delicious little sweet article! ! ! ! ! ! It's awesome outside, it's so good-looking, grown-up women have to watch this Ｏ(≧∇≦)ＯAhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

Very well written, very beautiful. Maybe it's just because it hasn't been popular for a long time, but it will definitely become popular in the future (self-perception). It's not suitable for a bedtime cookie because it's so pretty that I even made it in one day. I just finished the book when I saw it, and I was very happy hahaha. I hope I can make up a story about Chuchu and Xingxing going to hell, but I feel like I can't write it, and it's being scheduled... Come on, be happy every day [love] [love] [love]

I finished it overnight. It's a really good fantasy novel about the future of the West. As the author's first book, the completion is much higher than expected. The world view is integrated very naturally, the settings of the apocalypse and the demon world are not separated, the plot rhythm is comfortable and not draggy, and the action scenes are clearly written and have a very visual feel. The character of the protagonist is also very three-dimensional. Jian Yuxing is not a stereotyped image of a cold commander. He will unconsciously dote on Xiao Nie. After realizing his feelings, he directly expresses his love in the face of Xiao Nie's probing and teasing, giving Xiao Nie enough respect and tolerance. This is the charm of the year [air kiss]; although Xiao Nie's setting is a devil, his soul is clean and pure, and he is a little tsundere. The contrast is full, and it makes me faint with cuteness [Send Heart] The emotional line and the plot line work well together, and the development is reasonable and not abrupt. From the initial contract binding, to the later heartbeat, testing, and honesty, every step of the emotional line is smooth and smooth, not abrupt, and there is a smooth sense of happiness.

This is so good at writing! The little devil was so arrogant and kept talking, but people couldn't understand him at all. Moreover, Jian Yuxing's tasting experience was really great. He didn't give souls, but he could give a little "taste". Isn't this just taming? ! It looks like it's being pulled, but it's actually very tight, which is very sweet! Nice! [Adoration][Adoration]

The writing is very good, the background of the world is introduced very clearly, and the character characteristics of the male protagonist are very well portrayed. The whole tsundere little devil, whether it is the image or the name, has a flavor of Western fantasy. A tsundere little devil who has half of his abilities blocked and is thrown away is very good.

It's super good-looking, super good-looking, the plot is compact, not long, but the relationship between the two protagonists is not rushed. The characters and plot are very interesting, and the characterization is also excellent. There are no bad villains. It's sweet and reassuring. I look forward to the author's next work!

The writing is really good. If the author can persevere, it will definitely become popular. The content is compact, the characters are vivid, there are tears but no flaws. The two people are currently dull and cannot see their own feelings. The sense of tension is also well written. I have followed the update so far. It is a model beginning and attractive. If I can insist on updating, the traffic should be better in the future.

So delicious! ! ! The arrogant and cute little devil's emotional line is cultivated over time, and the little devil's help in the battle is not free. Commander, it was very cold at first, but then it gradually warmed up🥰

God, this novel is so beautiful! ! ! ! Who knows what it feels like to read this novel before the exam? Woohoo, the little devil is so cool and cute, and the commander is so gentle. I read it too hastily and I didn't understand a few parts. I'll read it again after I finish the exam.

Although it is a short story, it is really good to read. Personally, I feel that there are some things that are not finished, but everything that should be covered in the extra chapter is covered. Tsundere devil 👿 VS abstinent (not) cold-faced (not) commander Well, the reason for the description is that in the early stage, I always regarded the devil as a shot QAQ The part about demonic family love is quite heartwarming. (○｀ε´○) Little Couple 99 Xiaojia is very cute*^_^*

It's really beautiful [crying] I really like the setting of two people Moreover, the rhythm of the story is also very good. There are warm little daily life and tense battles. It seems that there is still something to say and it is not tiring at all [Love] Two people should live happily like this, no matter on earth or in hell [Love]

Kswl can't hold back the corner of his mouth at all! A two-hundred-year-old demon was tricked by a sinister commander into an innocent kitten. This is so cute! There are no inexplicable misunderstandings, just straight balls with mouths doting on each other, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Ok, my friends, it's also very good-looking. I don't know why the rating is so low. It's like being cheated. It's really good and delicious. The plot is not very complicated, it's fast-paced, and there's nothing particularly sad about it. It's a pretty sweet story (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

Very delicious😋! The main plot and emotional lines are written very smoothly and naturally. The little devil is a cute creature in the world. He is arrogant and cute. The commander is not that cold and aloof. In fact, he is a little bad. He likes to tease cats (bushi). Hahaha, lock me down! ! !

Treasure found! ! This couple is so cool, they dote on each other, it's super touching, their daily interactions are heartwarming and funny, and their big scenes are both hot and sad. I just can't see enough. Why is it gone????

Super good-looking, arrogant little devil hahaha, this kind of character setting is really good-looking, the storyline is also very interesting, very western fantasy flavor, very good-looking, recommended!

The Ambiguity Period is very interesting to watch, and the plot is quite compact. It would be better if it were written more. I feel that there are still many places that have not been written clearly. However, I still haven't finished watching the plot... Some settings are also very interesting, but I am a little confused orz. Some holes have not been filled in, which is a pity.

It looks good. I can tell that the writing style is a bit jerky. If it were a long story, it might be a problem. Now it's good. Thank you to the author. Thank you very much. (Hope to get points soon (￣▽￣)~*)

A super nice short story! ! ! The setting also really impressed me. It's quite novel. I've never seen anything similar before. It's really nice! The whole song is sweet with a bit of sadness and regret, and the writing is also very smooth. I don't know why there are so few people. I hope it will become popular in the future [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Fortunately, I clicked in and read it. I really like this article, especially the feeling of pull between the two people, and the character of the tsundere little devil is really touching and interesting [shy] Come on, the author [shy]

It's pretty good to watch. It's just a little bit rough in the middle and late stages, and when I watched it, some of the plot descriptions felt weird. The upper and lower parts didn't connect together. I don't know if it's because I read it too quickly or because the author wrote it too tightly, but the overall plot is still very good [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The author cuts into the apocalypse and western fantasy from a novel angle and perfectly blends them together. Jian Yuxing will break his own rules for Niebuheer, and Niebuheer will learn how to abide by the rules, understand and tolerate each other and achieve each other for Jian Yuxing.