She Doesn't Want to Be a Sister-In-Law or Anything Like a Sister.

It's quite good to watch, but Dongfang Yuan is a pseudo-gay at the beginning, and it can't be said that being gay means being dependent on Lin Yao. Brothers may have a bad impression after watching it. You can skip to the 50-odd chapters where Dongfang Yuan changes his mind. Without her little tricks, everyone may have some opinions, but it was different after changing the goal from Dongfang Yuan. I really like this character later on. The author updates quickly, and everyone doesn't need to keep books. You can read them every day. The author will also listen to readers' opinions. As long as the differences are not major, we can discuss them. It's pretty good.

The male protagonist is too perfect, and the plot is too novelistic. This is the first sentence that came to my mind. I typed it out naturally, but it doesn't have the greasy choke-holding feeling of ordinary emotionally delicate novels. It's more refreshing, but still a bit greasy. The male protagonist has a mold-like feel, and the plot is more classic, but okay. The emotional lines of these female protagonists are quite clear, but the advancement speed seems to be even. There is still a strange feeling that I can't put my finger on. Overall, it's pretty good. The author will update it as soon as possible.

The writing is good, and the character creation is also good, but it seems that the later writing is too exciting, and it feels a bit rounded. The sister is too rich, and the other characters are relatively flat and not so three-dimensional. Mo's feelings don't seem that good, and he is not affectionate enough. Is he that scumbag? I don't know what Mo will do next. I hope the author can work hard.

Loli is the sky, Loli is the light, Loli is the only myth~~~~~~~~~~~ The wind has stopped, the rain has stopped, you must go, I am still waiting in my memory~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The wind has stopped, the rain has stopped, you must go, I am still standing there, waiting, you are so damn gentle, oh~oh~~~~~~~ If time forgets to turn and there are no waves, will you take me away from this shabby world~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

It's pretty good-looking, but Xia Hui is really a little stuck. Personally, I feel like she doesn't have any personal characteristics, but she's not ordinary. She's considerate and always by her side. She's average. If she's not above or below, she's low.

I've read more than a dozen chapters so far. I'm not saying it's not interesting, I can only say it's weird. Probably because other book friends said that the male protagonist is too perfect and cannot be brought into the story at all. The language of the article is very beautiful, but too beautiful. It gives me the feeling that when I was writing an essay in high school, I tried my best to pile up words to describe the atmosphere. Maybe some jokes can be mixed in appropriately, to reduce the idealization of love and add more trivial quarrels between the characters. Come on author The author's first priority is to change the cover of the novel. This cover is not very good-looking.

The author must have seen the problem sister fell in love with me

The emotional line is well written. Give the author some support. The pace is slow. If you want to see a fast-food romance, don't click here.

I feel that the author's writing is very good, but not many people read it, but things will definitely get better later. Also, how many female protagonists does the author have? [What] I want to ask, come on, author.

It looks good, you can give it a try [Like]

Will there be lilies? Don't do it. Author [cry][cry][cry]

There's not much to say. This is the subject I want to see. If it had more of a taboo feel, it would be perfect [laughing]

Is the author Lin Yao my sister?

Has the author read "They were redeemed, but what about me?" This book.

After reading a few chapters, I think it's okay. I don't know if the author said it later, but remember to give your sister the identity of not being your biological child, otherwise she will be raped.

I have reached chapter 41 so far. The progress is very slow. I was too slow in describing the heroines. But writing a book is not easy. If you can persevere, it is a good book.

I feel good after reading a few chapters. I don't know if it's because I haven't finished it, but I feel that the male protagonist is like a transparent person in the club. Generally speaking, people who take the initiative to help newcomers will be very popular, and there will be many things. I feel that it will not be just the school girls looking for the male protagonist. After all, the club does not recruit just one new recruit. With the male protagonist's personality, it feels like many people will come to him.

The author's emotional description is good, and the plot arrangement is also very good. The overall rhythm makes me feel comfortable, but it is a bit bland. The plot could use a little more ups and downs. I support it with five stars.

The writing is very good. I'm halfway through reading it. One suggestion I would like to make is, "I haven't noticed yet, but a gentle undercurrent surrounding them is slowly surging." There are too many similar sentences like this. I remember there were not 30 but 20 times. It would seem a bit deliberate. I think sometimes we should leave some space appropriately to give readers some room for imagination. It will be better to read.

Okay, it's pretty good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Keep up the good work, author

It's good to read, I love reading it, cheers for the author!

Big cheers for the author＾0＾~

Stock trading or harem? The harem will give you five stars directly

Personally I feel pretty good [eating melon]

I feel like the school girl is quite miserable. She keeps giving so much and gets no response. It seems so uncomfortable, but overall she's pretty good.

This one is good, but this Qingmei is a bit too powerful. It should be used to increase the strength of other characters.

It's not bad, but sometimes I'm a little too indulgent towards my sister, but I like it. It varies from person to person

The author wrote quite well, I hope it will be finished well