After Cross-dressing into the Harem of the Dragon-Tier Protagonist, He Proposed to Me

Very very cool setting. Here are some personal suggestions for early plots. As a social animal in a modern peaceful society, Qiushi's psychological transformation when she suddenly travels to a different world feels a bit too bland. Suddenly faced with a completely unfamiliar world, even if you don't care much about survival at first, you will at least have a lot of resistance to the dead. The gradual assimilation is also the process of getting closer to Xie Chu's soul. There is also the feeling that the relationship between the protagonists heats up a bit too quickly (Qiushi, where did your straight masculinity go?). Although the young couple is sweet and reassuring, if it is too fast, it will feel a bit like a castle in the air (but it does not rule out that the author foreshadows this deliberately). All in all, this is a spiritual dessert for relaxing after dinner, and I am already looking forward to the subsequent plot development (the young couple has to be sour and sweet to make it interesting)

The plot is quite interesting. Apart from the feeling that the emotional line is too fast, there is nothing wrong with it and it is very sweet. I just want to mention in the introduction next time that they have raised a child, so that I, who do not care about raising children and having children, can distinguish between them (it's just a personal suggestion, don't listen to it. If you don't like it, you can delete it)

I bought it. The quality of Chiang Kai-shek is very good. The manufacturer came to install it in person. The service is really great. It is comfortable to use and well-dressed. It melts in the mouth and is not irritating when washed. Children especially like to eat it and the elderly can also use it. It is very loose and does not pill at all. It is also very clean after washing. So beautiful, love it, love it

The plot is average, the writing is average, and the characterization is okay. The second elder is very surprised that he was said to be a decent person in the past, but later he was described as so ugly. How did such a person become the second elder? The portrayal of human nature in the later part is too direct and too superficial. This can be seen, but it is average, normal level. The author still needs to work harder 👍

A very delicious sweet article! I like the setting very much. Although Qiuqiu is afraid of things and loves to run away, she can do earth-shattering things at all costs for her friends and loved ones. Xie Chu's life experience was miserable and he had no hope for the world. However, after meeting Qiuqiu, he fell into a trap step by step and persisted until the end. It's very touching!!!! Qiuqiu in women's clothing is a bright and charming little white flower in the sun, and Qiuqiu in men's clothing is a quirky and good-natured gentleman. Each one has its own unique features and I like it very much!!! The emotional line accounts for about 7 points, and the plot line accounts for about 3 points. The emotional line includes love and friendship. It is the best F4 line. Friends who always support Qiuqiu and take the initiative to deal with the aftermath. It was a little rough in the middle, but then the sweetness gradually returned. After reading the main text and then watching the extras, I felt warm in my heart, and everyone lived happily. Highly recommended! It is not a mindless sweet story, it has plot, tears, and passion. It also describes the cruelty of the world of cultivation, and its logic and world view are all online.

It's pretty good-looking. All I can think of so far is that the lightning protection point is that some parts of it are a bit awkward. It's women's clothing, but women's clothing is also included. There's an introduction, and I immediately discovered it after adding 1. The plot is quite interesting, and I think he handled the point of his time travel very well. It was a double time travel where the original owner and the protagonist were swapped. Both of them have systems, and they are living quite well in the opposite world. Then the plot is also quite interesting. The later stage is more sadistic, but the early stage is more fun, and F4 is also very interesting to get along with. As for the emotional line, I think it was well written. Hey, you can really feel the attraction between the two people, and the attraction is quite reasonable. However, the end of the plot is a bit too fast, and it means it is a bit rushed, but it is okay. The extra is very fun, and the if, I really like it now

I watched it in one sitting and [I learned] that the later battles are really group-like, and the feeling of powerlessness in facing the way of heaven is really uncomfortable. It all comes from bitter gourd. Congratulations on our overwhelming victory

After reading it all, please comment~ The overall plot line is very smooth, unconventional, and has no surprises. Xie Chu also knew from the very beginning that Qiu Shi was a male, which is a big plus!!! When Qiu Shi was made things difficult for her by fellow seniors, Zhang Cuihua did not wait for others to defend her like previous articles. Instead, she relied on herself. Zhang Cuihua was really easy to cry and had a lot of foreshadowing. Lin Wan'er and He Nanxi are also loving friends. Xian Xia F4, hahahahaha, reminds me of the previous Xia Xia rescue and Ruyi Boylang. Fortunately, the ending in this article is good. Everyone survived well and lived their own answers. The story was written by myself. What moved me the most was the parents line, which was super good. I knew my fate, but I wrote it myself, sacrificing myself to gain hope for the next generation. Qiu Shi and Xie Chu cherish each other, support each other, and rely on each other. They are really good!!! Please see the article for specific details → Looking forward to the next article!!! Another point is that I thought Bai Ze would play a role in the later stage (to fight against evil spirits), but she was just raised as a child. This is really good. Children should not have to face this. Every day when she wakes up, she is accompanied by her "father and mother", Elder Shaoyao feeds her, and Aunt Wan'er and Uncle Nanxi play around. All kinds of senior brothers and sisters are also very good to her. It's really super cute!!!

Tied There are no surprises at the moment, and most of them are sweet. The protagonist is not powerless, but on the contrary, he is quite strong. In the early stage, the male lead may have a stiff attitude towards the protagonist, but after a while, the arrow has become obvious. The protagonist is the first to move, but the protagonist has also been working hard for the male lead. The double arrows are quite obvious, running in both directions. I will leave another comment after finishing it

It's very well written and looks very enjoyable. Judging from my XP, the whole process is very smooth and there is no discomfort at all. Tsundere, sultry and wet are awesome. We are also very good people in Xiaoqiu... The emotional scenes progress very quickly and it seems enjoyable, but it is not a fast food style, it is the kind of thing that comes naturally and is well-founded. You can feel the love between the lines. I like this book very much. It collects all the settings that I like very much, such as time travel, death escape, and cultivating immortals. It is very full. I recommend you to lose your mind an hour before going to bed and enjoy it.