Becoming Gwen Stacey

The writing is very good. The only drawback is that there are many problems with the design of the suit. Is the hair left out to leave clues for people to find? Does having a cape mean you have Superman's physical fitness or Batman's decisiveness in killing? If you don't have a cape, does it leave a loophole? Spider-Man's suit basically has a strict design, don't modify it randomly (missing hair, wearing a cape)

Gwen and Peter are so sweet [blowing kiss]

It's okay, it's okay, but now my mind is filled with "Thank you", "Thank you for what?" (My ears are red) and the fixed process every time I go to class: daze - Peter reminds me - the teacher looks at me - stand up and answer - thank you - my ears are red. . . . . . I really thought for a moment that the cyberghost had hit a wall.

I still like the original white, pink and black suits of Gwen.

It's okay. It feels like the style from a few years ago. It feels like the power has been weakened. Also, the protagonist's preparation is too risky. Generally speaking, numerical crushing is arrogance at best, but the power feels too weak now. Then the leak in Chapter 21 is a bit poisonous. You can change it to say that you want to say it, but stop it. And then this book currently looks like a marriage change. I feel that this series is okay

I still prefer the original suit.

Although I have only seen the beginning and there are some minor flaws, the overall picture is still very good. I would like to ask, is it Marrying a Hundred Singles?

It looks great, good luck to the author!

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Overall, it looks good and is very smart.