Honkai: Star Rail: Kevin’s Galaxy Ranger Log
崩铁：巡海游侠凯文日志
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 304k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
81Chapters
13Reads
2Listens
14.8kReads · all time
In booklists 1
Reader comments 6
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The author's writing is really good. Although sometimes there are repeated flashbacks, which is a bit strange, the story is still good and has a strong sense of philosophy. The vast majority of dialogues are expressed in the form of "you know, I know, you know." When the number of such dialogues is small, it will make the article appear very tense. If there are too many, it will lead to an awkward look and feel, which makes it feel unreal, and there is a feeling that it is impossible to talk like this. I read the reply that it will not enter the main story in a short time, which will probably cause the book's traffic to be low (if you don't care about traffic, please ignore this sentence), because fan fiction is a re-creation based on the existing emotional foundation, and breaking away from the existing foundation will cause the audience who comes for this aspect to be unable to survive the early stage. The peak period of fruit promotion is between 100,000 and 300,000 words (normal authors who update twice a day are almost like this), so there are very few comments. But I really like the tension and sense of story in Dada's writing. Come on Dada!
The writing is very good, but during the Three Tribulations of the Immortal Boat, there was no hunting, the Immortal Boat Alliance, and the Cloud Cavalry Army. At this time, the dignitaries of the Immortal Boat were fighting the common people on both sides. Only in the later stage, when there was no immortal boat, and the rich people came over, and then patrolled and ascended to the gods.
So far, there are no plots related to the main storyline and the text in the Bengtie game, but the writing style is very good. It doesn't feel like I'm reading a novel, but like I'm reading prose.
Very nice=ᗜωᗜ= I just feel like I have so many memories. Is this the power of the bond?
Joke Qin quickly covered her eyes when she saw Lisa coming over. Barbara asked her what was wrong Qin: In my eyes Lisa (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)
It looks good, but I don't know if there is a female protagonist 👍