Ready for Action: LSPD Has a New Officer

After reading some chapters, I really felt that the characterization of this book was unique and awesome, as if I was on the scene. The growth of the protagonist and the light of humanity have always bloomed in a natural manner. As for the environmental background, it can be seen that the author has really worked hard to study it. His knowledge of firearms is quite good. In terms of contextual grammar, the word order is indeed in line with European and American English word order. I translated it while reading it in my mind, and it felt very natural. It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-quality book on Lianyang Persimmon.

It's very well written. It's one of the few Ron fanfics in Tomato. It's not overly serious and entertaining. It's very comfortable to read and gives me the motivation to keep reading. I hope I can keep writing.

Yes, a delicate and detailed police life, full of life stories and tension, a very humane law enforcement officer [laughing] The novel does not involve too dark things, and it is a good read, but the reality is not so good. The law enforcement recorders released in the United States show that many police officers like to find trouble and "create" income for themselves, but I have to say that many people are indeed guilty [Thinking] I can only say that the law enforcement environment there is really bad. Getting better and better, and the future is promising

This episode is really amazing. Two old friends laugh away their past unpleasantness at this moment. Faced with the loneliness of the deserted college life and the longing for their classmates, although there are thousands of words in their hearts, they are all silent. They naturally converge into a sentence of "Genshin Impact". The two lonely souls have reached a resonance at this moment, "Genshin Impact is awesome".

@Carlos Author Dada, I think the subject matter of Dada's novel is very good, and the writing in the early stage is also very attractive, but it seems to have slowly changed later, from a clear narrative style to a style mixed with lyrical style, so I would like to make a few suggestions. I hope the author can take a look. 1. The first is the repeated use of certain words, such as "deeper, heavier" here. Excessive use greatly affects the perception. If it were me, I would put this deep emotion that cannot be described in detail and try to reduce the number of repeated uses. 2. Then there is a more detailed description, which will naturally increase the reader's sense of involvement, but linking it with other things will reduce the perception. For example, the deep experience it brings becomes very separated from the first link, which makes people feel like walking to the top of the mountain and suddenly falling into the valley. 3. Finally, there is a detailed description, which often slows down the progress of the story. An appropriate brief description is better.

Background: How should I put it? I borrowed the background of the story of "Being Ready", but I didn't completely copy the game plot and wrote it in my own style. Character description: Among them, I think the author's delicate description of the protagonist is very refreshing. The description of the protagonist is not only a positive description of what the protagonist has done, but also a profile from the perspective of more supporting characters. This writing method is rare in Tomato. The description of the little characters is even more penetrating. Plot: The plot is also advanced step by step, and there is no sudden feeling. The protagonist does not have a mature mentality from the beginning, but has a step-by-step growth and learning process. The inner struggle of the protagonist when he takes away the life of others for the first time is also in line with the character image. Summary: It's worth updating. It's a new masterpiece on Tomato with endless potential. PS: Author, please keep updating [shy]

A good book, no doubt a good book. This is definitely a breath of fresh air in the Ready to Stand fan fiction. The character descriptions are very three-dimensional, and the writing style describes one flesh-and-blood character after another, which is breathtaking.

It has Chinese-style simple character descriptions and relationship descriptions. In an environment where guns can be legally fired, sometimes people will forget the chaos here and become more harmonious. Obviously this city will be like Hell's Kitchen in terms of DP entry volume, but there are so many warm communities and emotions that it feels like it's fragmented.

A good book, it won't make you feel fake, real people, real things and real feelings, this is what I have experienced very sincere emotion It makes me feel that everyone is real. It is a very good book. I like it very much. In a chaotic city, I maintain my original intention and encounter warmth and warmth. Although many bad things happen, there are also many lovely and kind people around me. Life is like this, with conflicts, chaos and unreasonableness. What inexplicable reasons make you accept the great good luck? Sometimes, inexplicable reasons, you experience the most painful suffering in the world. We cannot refuse, but we can consider how to spend these days, keep thinking, keep the original intention, keep learning, keep working hard and never give up. No matter what, keep yourself, don't forget

Rarely prepared to wait for colleagues (Although I haven't written the plot yet)

This book feels more realistic when written, as if it is describing what really happened. It reminds me of the feeling of being fascinated by physical books when I was a child. It ranks among the best among all the books I have read. I like it very much.

Wow, I didn't expect to find such a book in Tomato. I found a treasure. The author's writing style made me feel like I was reading San Mao's "The Story of the Sahara". It is as delicate and beautiful as it is unsystematic. It has been a long time since I read a book so immersed in it. The police life is well written. First of all After the first murder, the protagonist's reaction was sincere and real. There was not a single stroke. Instead, it took several chapters to write about the transformation. This is excellent in my opinion. Generally speaking, I haven't read a book like this for a long time. If a physical book is published, I think I will also read it.

The writing is good and close to reality, and what should I say, I feel like I am seeing a real person who killed someone just because of himself. Being surrounded by fear is very good, at least from my side, it is very good. It doesn't have to be a protagonist who falls from the sky with a halo, at least it is an ordinary person who dares to do it

U. S. Police law enforcement articles, including elements such as sharpshooter, administrative leave, punishing rape and eradicating evil, prison story, heart of gold, community cooperation and little sister~ Although it contains many elements, due to the author's gentle writing style, the writing does not have the fuss and craftsmanship of a studio novel, but has the feeling of a real person writing a novel seriously. Five-star recommendation, worth watching.

The emotional expression of the whole book is delicate, and it can be seen that the author writes carefully (but there are too few updates!). He has the protagonist's personal growth path (the relevant plot of the main line has not been written yet). I think the previous growth experience is relatively warm (there are almost no bad things). It is a relatively high-quality fan work. I hope the author will continue to work hard! !

There are two sides to the matter First, let's start with the overall narrative point of view: it's a standard cool article with a novel subject matter and a coherent plot. Most of the characters in the article are well-shaped and true, but the protagonist's personality is unclear. The authenticity of the article has changed to a certain extent based on reality, which better adapts to the development of the plot without destroying the rhythm, but it can also be seen as a compromise in authenticity for the continuity of the plot. It is suitable for people who don't want to study in detail or think about the characterization of the protagonist and who don't care about the authenticity of the program content. Advantages: The writing style and the way of describing events are excellent, the details are omitted when necessary, and the details where necessary are detailed. The main plot is very good. The content of the storyline is progressive and the balance between the protagonist's work plot and life plot is well grasped. The descriptions of the weapons are true, and at least they have a deep understanding of the weapons. Disadvantages: Cautious viewing in pursuit of reality... It can be understood that a building based on the game is built on the real structure. The protagonist's personal character is clearly described but very strange. There are some things that are taken for granted and there are obvious characteristics of personal heroism (including rejecting the standard support process with a higher degree of retention of more reliable evidence; having persuaded others not to jump from the building and then jumping from the third floor). The link of self-doubt, self-reflection and self-understanding is missing. It will become serious around Chapter 60. You cannot think carefully or you will have a serious feeling of tearing. Like Shuangwen

Very, very real feelings. Every character is alive. The protagonist changes little by little from a newcomer's mentality. The inner changes in himself are particularly delicate. He is an idealist and makes people feel positive and positive emotions. It is well written.

The best among the best, not only the cold-blooded fighting scenes, but also the delicate and complicated emotions and career lines. The characters are full-bodied, flesh and blood, have purpose, and know what they are doing, not just that I am passionate. It is well organized, but still a bit off topic. It is one thing to write well, but the development speed has not reached RON yet. But the plot is pretty good too😋👍

The writing is very good. It's not the kind of chronicle-style or word-filled article, it's the kind of real, emotional "line drawing". Every character has flesh and blood, especially the protagonist's normal outlook, which is rare in today's tomatoes.

Very nice book. The male protagonist has very upright views. Although according to the current saying, he is a bit of a virgin, but good people always make people happy. But, I gave it one less star because the male protagonist is protecting the people of the beautiful country. Although they are more in need of protection. But I just don't like it.

To be honest, I'm sure some people didn't want to read it after reading the reviews and the introduction. I was the same way at the beginning. First of all, it was because the name was unattractive, and then I looked at the table of contents and felt it was very ordinary or something. But after I actually read it, I realized how delicate the author's writing was. It was just like watching soldiers assault in the past. Although it was ordinary, it was very interesting and I couldn't stop. The most important thing is that the protagonist is really incredible, especially the shooting skills, which is very exciting. Trust me, please give me likes after reading it [please take a closer look]

He has solid writing skills, very detailed descriptions and characterizations of scenes, and rich professional knowledge of counter-terrorism life. It can be seen that he has done his homework and put some thought into it. The brotherhood between the protagonist and his seniors and the cruelty of Los Angeles are well portrayed, and the human relationships in various workplaces are also meticulous. The author is indeed good at portraying such emotions, and there are indeed places that can make people cry. But the shortcomings are also obvious. Like most police and criminal novels or similar articles, the protagonist has firm beliefs, outstanding abilities, and good relations with the neighbors. He is not a virgin, but a good policeman and a good neighbor. Everything is too perfect, almost to the level of a saint. Of course, a perfect person is indeed likable, but he is too perfect. From a rookie police officer to a people's hero, he looks like a pure altruist. This is also fatal, because people have shortcomings. Under the protagonist's almost unlimited self-dedication, the article lacks a trace of humanity. In other words, the character of Wen Jia is flat, like a coin with only one side, and is too perfect to be a complete person, so it is difficult for me to give a high score. But there is no doubt that this is indeed a good work, with enough appeal that the flaws do not hide its flaws.

The characterization is very three-dimensional, even the small characters are written with flesh and blood, and the plot and environment description are also very detailed, making it very immersive to read. To be honest, I haven't seen such an immersive book in a long time. The last book that gave me such a feeling was Lord of Mysteries, and I found out from the comments that the author is actually a student. I am really impressed by such a writing level at this age. I am also a police officer and an experienced player who is ready to fight. I watched it that day and went back to play it again. Thank you for coming again. It actually gave me a different feeling. Anyway, thank you for the treat. You can call me when you play Ready, although it seems a bit hellish to have to go back to work in the game after work.

It's really good to read. This book has a lot of firearms knowledge and is quite hardcore. Although I don't understand it very well, I still like it. The emotional description is also very good. I love it. [Adore][Adore]

The writing is very good, and it is a flesh-and-blood police story in an exotic country. Disadvantages: Although I think people all over the world should be liberated, it is really difficult for me to sympathize with ordinary people in the United States. Sometimes when reading this kind of novel, I feel that it would be better to stop being so exaggerated and be more steady. And this one, I felt, was too steady and down-to-earth, like watching an American TV series.

It looks good, I love it. I have the passion to complete the mission again. So what if all four teammates are blown up by trip mines? So what if I am stuck in the Grape Vine Body for almost a week. I believe I can do it [angry] [angry] [angry] So far, I feel very good about it. The author's writing is good, and every character is very fleshed out and a flesh-and-blood person. Each lyrical and psychological description is very good, but I personally feel that the lyricism is a bit too dense and wordy. Although I know that this is the author's intention to express the character's feelings and thoughts, I personally feel that it is a bit too "soft". (If you don't like your personal opinion, please don't comment) The author has done a lot of hard work. Come on, the writing is great and beautiful.

Needless to say, very lucky But there is a catch. Some of the daily-oriented plots have a strong AI flavor, but the main plot is still very interesting and should have been written by real people. It is speculated that the author has used AI assistance, so please be careful if you like daily suggestions.

If you haven't played Ready and Ready, it won't affect your reading. The plot of the game depends on my experience. The writing is very delicate and slow-burning. Because of this characteristic, every character in the article is very three-dimensional. Well, the character arc shines. In other words, after reading the book for so long, I finally saw human beings. (As an aside, in reality, when dealing with people around you, the number of colleagues/students may not be as large as the male protagonist's group of veterans to some extent.) The narrative is also very smooth. It seems that the soul is out of body and chasing after the protagonist, which may have some linkage factors with reality. It can smoothly connect every small event to a big event, which feels very good. During the reading process, some wonderful little knowledge will randomly drop out that you may never need in this life - do I want to learn it too? Whatever. It's well written and enjoyable to watch, and the male protagonist is simply superhuman in terms of numerical mechanics. Not only a superman, but also a saint. Against the background of the general environment, wherever the protagonist stands, his appearance shines. (Positive sense) Okay, that's a bit of an exaggeration. In fact, he is the kind of good person in the secular sense, the kind of person who believes that with greater ability comes greater responsibility. This kind of character is rarely seen anymore, and it is difficult to write about it, but it's no problem because the author has brought this book with him. Don't miss it when you pass by!

Absolutely real, gentle everyday and a little bit hardcore. All I can say is that I found gold in tomatoes again [Like]

It's not an AI text, you can tell from some innocuous little details, and it also adds a bit of fun to the book, doesn't it? The language is colloquial, with a good balance between literary style and smoothness. Come on, author It's very humane [Bird Food Masterpiece] Review again